Reviewer: radishearrings3
Date: 11/04/07 13:36
Chapter: Toujours Pur

Very nice descriptions!

... something inside Andromeda broke a little and it hurt...

That was my favorite part of the story, I've never heard that description of an emotion! I may just be culturally deprived, but I thought it was very original!

I really liked your characterization of Andromeda, authors like to bend her character every which way to get her to fit their plot, but your's was very character-dominated if I'm not mistaken, and Andromeda, in the spotlight, was written very nicely.

Very good job, and good luck writing more!

Reviewer: SiriusGirl7
Date: 10/24/07 20:17
Chapter: Toujours Pur

very thought-provoking. i liked it.

Reviewer: Puss_in_Boots
Date: 12/07/06 0:34
Chapter: Toujours Pur

Wow. That was absolutely beautiful! I often feel fics about Andromeda glaze over the struggle she must have gone through when she left her family, but you captured it amazingly. I also loved the way you had Andromeda increase her interpretation of "pure" as she matured. Wonderful fic!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: AneleY
Date: 12/01/06 11:38
Chapter: Toujours Pur

ok I really really liked that story, its original and I love the las line =) imagination is very important

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much; I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I agree entirely.

Reviewer: 90glassslippers
Date: 11/30/06 22:10
Chapter: Toujours Pur

Amazing! I Loved it! I am also a big fan of Oscar Wilde.


Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I'm glad to find a fellow Wilde fan; there can never be too many of us! :)

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