Very nice descriptions!
... something inside Andromeda broke a little and it hurt...
That was my favorite part of the story, I've never heard that description of an emotion! I may just be culturally deprived, but I thought it was very original!
I really liked your characterization of Andromeda, authors like to bend her character every which way to get her to fit their plot, but your's was very character-dominated if I'm not mistaken, and Andromeda, in the spotlight, was written very nicely.
Very good job, and good luck writing more!
very thought-provoking. i liked it.
Wow. That was absolutely beautiful! I often feel fics about Andromeda glaze over the struggle she must have gone through when she left her family, but you captured it amazingly. I also loved the way you had Andromeda increase her interpretation of "pure" as she matured. Wonderful fic!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
ok I really really liked that story, its original and I love the las line =) imagination is very important
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much; I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I agree entirely.
Amazing! I Loved it! I am also a big fan of Oscar Wilde.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I'm glad to find a fellow Wilde fan; there can never be too many of us! :)