Very good. I'm glad your 'friends' forced you into submiting it. I always hate stuff I write after a while. It was a really good poem!
Author's Response: Thanks again! Glad you liked it.
This poem, dispite what you think, is actually pretty good. I liked the idea of his scar being the constant reminder. You sounded kind of upset in your A/N. I hope you feel better.
Author's Response: Thanks for your concern. I guess I was just more so annoyed that day so I let it out in my A/N. (Sorry if I offended anyone!!!) But I'm fine now. I'm glad you liked the poem though. Thanks so much!!!