Reviewer: marly
Date: 03/12/07 9:36
Chapter: Let only a teardrop fall.

oh my word!!!! very very awsome!
You are really gud! kepp it up
marly

Author's Response: Thanx Marly!! so touched you read...and reveiwed my poem!!! great to have home support ;P

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 12/30/06 17:27
Chapter: Let only a teardrop fall.

I really like this poem! It shows the strength of both the woman and the man, and also says something about a community where fighting is the greatest honor...
Anyway, I sort of thought less of the Potterverse, and more of a real war when I read this, but I agree with whoever said it could have been Ginny and Harry. Or anyone else, really! And that's part of the beauty of it! It could be anyone!
Anyway... I especially liked the ending, and I think, though I don't usually read poetry, that this was a very good poem!
[/rambly review]

Author's Response: Not much to say to this reveiw, except... THANK YOU!!! Thanx!! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: SIRIUS WILL NOT DIE
Date: 12/05/06 22:44
Chapter: Let only a teardrop fall.

That's very sad. It does show emotions very well... Good flow.

~Emma


Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!

Reviewer: Ginny_v95
Date: 11/30/06 21:13
Chapter: Let only a teardrop fall.

this was a touching poem. Keep writing!

Author's Response: I will!! I've actually written quite a bit of a story, the first chapter of which is up at harrypotterfanfiction.com (its called Heart vs. Mind) and I've been trying to get it on here. Its being read by a beta reader, cos it kept on being rejected for grammar mistakes. Anyway, thanx!!

Reviewer: The Scribbler
Date: 11/29/06 20:10
Chapter: Let only a teardrop fall.

This is really good for a first fan poem. Very touching really... i think I'm about to cry!

Author's Response: You do not know how much that reveiw made me go awwwwwwwwwww. It really did. Thak you sooo much!!

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/24/06 22:38
Chapter: Let only a teardrop fall.

That was good. It actually sounded like a Harry/Ginny piece because of the 'noble' part. Very good, though, very creative. Brava!
~Moony

Author's Response: Thank you!! Harry/Ginny....yeah that would work, wouldn't it? Anyway, thanx again!!

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