I loved it... but if Lily is was so good at Charms why did she need matches?
Pax.
Lovely. I can't wait for the next chapter, or story, or whatever. And spike312... this is Sirius we're talking about, of course he would get drunk! ("...slightly Mundungus-like whiff of stale drink...") We love him, but he has his failings.
Nice, but I didn't think Sirius would get drunk.
I liked the story a lot and I liked how she waited the last possible minute to tell him. I makes me want to squee! SQUEE!
I liked the story so much! It's so cool and wonderfully written!
Ahhh, very nice. Very nice indeed.
Awww... a happy-time Marauder fic... I love it!
wow. this is framed so beautifully, with all the recurring style.
this was my favorite line: "As they play, Sirius laughs more in the span of ten minutes than he has in over ten years". because, sadly, it's probably true.
This was great. It was lighthearted and it made me laugh. Perfect after a bad day. Loved it! :]
xx.vicky.
Hee hee. I liked this. And can I say that this line: "(granted, this was only because Peter had told him that it was a game, but at least it had worked)." had particular sentimental value to me, as I have used the same trick on my younger many-a-time. And he's 12-and-a-half years old. But still. Moving on, I really enjoyed this! I thought it was funny, but my only thought was that Lily and James are married age 19/20 is a little young. But then, this was ... uh ... late seventies? So I guess it's not QUITE as unusual as it would be today. Anyway, I'm enjoying this whole group-mod-fic thing, and look forward to the updates!
I really like this! I think it's cool how the moderators made a collection of one-shots. Keep writing!
That was possibly the best thing I've read in a long time. I loved every single word of it. The attitudes and actions of every single character were exactly how I imagined them...and did I mention that I love Drunk!Sirius?
Brilliant. 11/10
I loved this one. Can't wait till the next one!
Absolutely and utterly amazing. It was really quite beautiful. It's so good to know that just because a person is born into a certain stereoypical family, he/ she does not necessarily have to follow in their parent's footsteps. That's why I've always loved Sirius-he had courage where all others(Blacks) were idiots. This is such a wonderfully written one-shot that I ask that you please consider continuing it- or if you have any other longer stories- please let me know.
Yours, Silvygreen
GO mods... these rock... Just what I needed during finals week. Happy holidays