That was creepy, but really well written. I thought that since Voldemort was Slytherin's decendant he'd wanted Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff with him so somehow brought them from the past. I know, I'm daft, it's just what popped into my head. Maybe it was just a prophetic dream, indicating the split of the four founders.
Whoa! Wow! This was just so creative! That's the only word. You were very creative. Isn't being an author just awesome?
Wow, I love the Founders. I felt more closely to them than I ever have. I'm just so proud to be a Ravenclaw. Rowena Ravenclaw.....
Angela: Shut up! It is too real!
Random Arguer: Nuh-uh! It's all made up, you freak.
Angela: It's real if you use your imagination! If you believe!
That's a little excerpt on what the argument would be were anyone to roll their eyes at me. for being proud of Rowena.
The ending sort of confused me. "All she found was a scar. A snake." Was the scar in the shape of a snake? Was she remembering a snake? Huh?
All in all, wonderful! Just all together magnificent! I've never read a Founder-fic, so this was just very....cool.
And I LOVE the title in relation to the story. Very good, great story!
You managed to turn the almost impossible theory of Rowena as a Death Eater into some sort of plausible story. It was twisted, but entertaining to read. However, I wish you would have included the meaning of the words you used in your spell. That would have been beneficial to those who don't know Latin like myself.
This was one of the stories I was most eager to read, and you did a fantastic job.
“I am the man, no–god, for I cannot die, who will haunt you’re nightmares until you cannot sleep for fear I will be waiting for you. I am the one who will kill you without cause and not be bothered by it. I am the one who will destroy you. I am Lord Voldemort. These are my Death Eaters,”
that is by far one of the best Voldemort speeches I've read on MNFF. I also love how you call Rowena the Logic, it added a really nice touch!
I loved it!
*squee* I love this fic, Emily, it's so unique! The thought of Rowena being a Death Eater and then tying it together with the Horcruxes is so ingenious. Your writing is very nice also.; the characterizations of Voldemort and Rowena were exactly what they needed to be for this. Some of the descriptions were simply wonderful too, along with several quotable lines that I won't quote in order to spare you. ;) This was a very nicely chilling read and I very much hope you do well in the Gauntlet. You deserve it for this.
OH MY GOSH!
This is an amazingly creative story. I know you'll place with this one. You really captured the delirium and confusion that Rowena's experiencing, and what's more, the characterisation of Voldemort was amazing. He has that unpredictable manner, with the kind of bizarre sense of humour that I see Voldemort as having.
Very interesting, I know it'll stick in my head for the rest of the week. Great job, again!
That was great, Miki! How funny that we both used similar endings... (Love it, by the way. Snakey scar. Spooky. : D)
Anyway, I loved this story. Feel special, as it's the first Gauntlet I've ever read. : P But it was really good. I wasn't sure how a Founder's Era would work for this, but it really turned out great.
Wow, that was really good! I can see the improvements and things, It's really good! I can see you've learnt a lot from my class, I'm very proud and it was wonderfully written. Well done, 10/10 :)