WHOA you are gooooooooood! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A sweet and well-written story. There's just tiny mistake:
“For a girl,” I answer still staring into the flames, “Tala. A boy, Kegan.”
“Why?” she asks curiously.
“Tala means wolf,” I reply, “and Brant means fire.”
I think you've forgotten to change Brant to Kegan after renaming it :)
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the mistake :) and for the review!
That was very good! everything fit well.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Excellent imagery, very deep. I'm very impressed by how much emotion you can put into this without making it sound too angsty/depressing. Do you write Tonks/Remus romances? You definitely have what it takes. Another name meaning wolf: Niella (girl). It's a direct translation from Finnish. Found it myself.:)
Author's Response: To tell you the truth, the most likely reason why it is so deep, is because this was a closer story for the death of my aunt, who I dedicated this story to... Anyway, I do write Remus/Tonks fics. Not really that often, but it is one of my favorite ships :). Thanks for the review! (and the suggestion :))
Very good, very touching. The name Rudie (girl) means wolf too. And the name Kegan (boy) means ball of fire. Just some suggestions. You don't have to take them.
-Susan
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I actually like Kegan much better than Brant. When I was looking for names, I couldn't find anything I liked so I picked Brant. I think I'll change it. Thanks for your suggestions!
A beautiful tale! You did such a wonderful job painting a picture with your words. It was a pleasure being your beta.
And happy birthday!
Author's Response: Thanks! You were a great beta! And thanks for the birthday wish. :)
this is so beautiful! magnificent!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Interesting idea... the point of view confused me with the 'stag's child's child' thing but I got it! Very good.
~Moony ;)
Author's Response: The POV confused *me* when I was writing it. At one point, I almost started to write the names, though, my beta helped out with it :). Thanks for the review!
i really like this story .i was wondering when you say that prong's grandchild you mean ginny and harry right?
Author's Response: Yes, that is Harry and Ginny's child. Thanks for the review!
Wow...It's like poetry, it flows well, there are many metaphors, and it's absolutley beautiful...Excellent work.
Author's Response: Thanks!
This is a wonderful story! I really like the line "The fire dies just like everything else." All the metaphors with the fire are amazing. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
