Reviews For Fire and Ice
Reviewer: Haley Lupin
Date: 03/26/08 12:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

WHOA you are gooooooooood! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kehribar
Date: 02/13/07 11:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

A sweet and well-written story. There's just tiny mistake:

“For a girl,” I answer still staring into the flames, “Tala. A boy, Kegan.”




“Why?” she asks curiously.




“Tala means wolf,” I reply, “and Brant means fire.”


I think you've forgotten to change Brant to Kegan after renaming it :)



Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the mistake :) and for the review!

Reviewer: BeachBabe
Date: 01/29/07 19:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was very good! everything fit well.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Lily Roxy
Date: 01/17/07 18:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

Excellent imagery, very deep. I'm very impressed by how much emotion you can put into this without making it sound too angsty/depressing. Do you write Tonks/Remus romances? You definitely have what it takes. Another name meaning wolf: Niella (girl). It's a direct translation from Finnish. Found it myself.:)

Author's Response: To tell you the truth, the most likely reason why it is so deep, is because this was a closer story for the death of my aunt, who I dedicated this story to... Anyway, I do write Remus/Tonks fics. Not really that often, but it is one of my favorite ships :). Thanks for the review! (and the suggestion :))

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 01/02/07 15:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very good, very touching. The name Rudie (girl) means wolf too. And the name Kegan (boy) means ball of fire. Just some suggestions. You don't have to take them.
-Susan

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I actually like Kegan much better than Brant. When I was looking for names, I couldn't find anything I liked so I picked Brant. I think I'll change it. Thanks for your suggestions!

Reviewer: Snapes_secret
Date: 12/22/06 22:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

A beautiful tale! You did such a wonderful job painting a picture with your words. It was a pleasure being your beta.

And happy birthday!

Author's Response: Thanks! You were a great beta! And thanks for the birthday wish. :)

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 12/17/06 7:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

this is so beautiful! magnificent!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Fading
Date: 11/25/06 21:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very good!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/25/06 9:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

Interesting idea... the point of view confused me with the 'stag's child's child' thing but I got it! Very good.
~Moony ;)

Author's Response: The POV confused *me* when I was writing it. At one point, I almost started to write the names, though, my beta helped out with it :). Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: bluwolf93
Date: 11/24/06 11:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

i really like this story .i was wondering when you say that prong's grandchild you mean ginny and harry right?

Author's Response: Yes, that is Harry and Ginny's child. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Dragon_Warrior
Date: 11/24/06 10:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow...It's like poetry, it flows well, there are many metaphors, and it's absolutley beautiful...Excellent work.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil
Date: 11/24/06 9:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a wonderful story! I really like the line "The fire dies just like everything else." All the metaphors with the fire are amazing. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

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