i really liked your story and i have already save it on my favorite stories and you as one of my favourite authors
Author's Response: oh thank you that means a lot to me
WOOW BABY! THAT WAS LOOOOOOVELY
Author's Response: lol thanks thiswasmy favorite to write
Aw, that was really cute!!
Lovely story, but the babies measurements are a little funny, aren't they? Way too heavy and waaaaay too little!
hey! its great! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese make more chapters..plz pretty plz lol
Er, those weights and lengths are waaaaaaaaaaay off. Badly.
19-20kg is the size of a large toddler. 6-7cm is possibly the length of one's pinky finger.
Average twin weights would be close to 3kg and average length around 49cm.
I can't beleive they'd never see thier families for 5 years of training though, what sort of training program never takes holidays? What about Christmas? If the twins were just babies I can see the logic but 4 years old? too long unless Harry was MIA.
Sorry to nitpick, but your metric system needs work. 20.24kg - 44.5lbs, 19kg =41.8kg
7.9cm=3.1 inch and 6.5cm = 3 inch
Aww... That was so sweet.
WOW...i really hope you keep this one going...i have a feeling this one is going to be AMAZING...i can tell that you are a great writer and the plot is fantastic...
keep up the good work