Bad - The ending seemed kind of abrupt, unresolved, and a little unbalanced. A good 3/4ths of the story was D/H angsty fluff and then the rest was quickly swept under the rug when it should of had more importance.
Good - I Absolutely LOVED the concept and details that went into this story. I only wish that the ending was changed (cut out Voldie, especially if this is just a oneshot. It's just too much to have Both Harry and him in a oneshot when they are fighting.)
Wow! Absolutely brilliant!
Beutifully written and an amazing ending.
I love it!
Jenny :)
I like the plot and am very curious of the outcome.
I like the plot and am very curious of the outcome.
I loved this story! Your QSQ award was rightly deserved. I love the twist and the tension that you create. I love this, well done!
I'm dying here! You have to write a sequal!!! You're a great writer, and there are just too many possabilities here to leave the story at this!!
oh..please continue! Its a fantastic story and I would realy love to read more. Deffinately a page turner!
Author's Response: sorry, just a one-shot. I'm really glad you liked it tho! thanks for the review!!
wow, that was really good, i felt as if the seventh book had come early! i love the way you wrote with that certain flair that JKR writes with, and even though the story was a wee bit far fetched (that what faniction is though right?) i found myself hooked on the story. excellent.
SugarxSpunxQuill
Author's Response: 3rd time's a charm...thanks so much for this kind review. I agree about the far-fetched part, but what would be the fun in writing something perfectly canon? :) thanks again!
wow, that was really good, i felt as if the seventh book had come early! i love the way you wrote with that certain flair that JKR writes with, and even though the story was a wee bit far fetched (that what faniction is though right?) i found myself hooked on the story. excellent.
SugarxSpunxQuill
wow!! intense!!! I absolutely loved it!!
Author's Response: thanks! I appreciate the kind review!
oooooooo......keep writing...damn you cliff hangers lol.
Author's Response: alas, only a one-shot. yes, I'm evil. thanks for reading!
So........what happens?
Author's Response: hehe, not a clue. sorry to be kinda evil, but i prefer to leave major plot events to Jo. if i had to finish it myself, i would love to see Harry survive, but it's not my place to say...
Ewww! Sorry. Can't stand Draco/Harry, but I heard good things about this one and I had to read for myself. It was good, not the best, but by far not the worst. I loved all of your Dumbledore references, they were great. Okay. I'm going to read another story of yours now. Tata!
Abby
Author's Response: always appreciating honesty! this was an easy story to write, but not an easy ship...still working on it! thanks for the review!!
this was amazingly written
you manged to keep all the characters canon even though it was such an out of canon subject
its a really good story
emma
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Author's Response: thank you so much for that! Staying in canon is a tough part for me, but I'm glad you think I made it work. Thanks ever so much for the review.
more of a dark story...
Author's Response: yes indeed. a brief moment of light in a very dark world that is Harry/Draco...
i forgot to add this into my other review but your last sentence in the story was simply amazing....it left me with a great image in my head thank you!
Author's Response: thanks again!!
i love this story its the best one ive heard so far about what happens after the 6th book and im a fan of harry/draco stories hope that you write some more soon!
Author's Response: thanks ever so much! H/D is one of my faves as well, so expect much more down the road! glad you enjoyed!!
I am in love with this story! It is really very powerful and gripping. I was and still am completely captivated. I love the whole atmosphere and Voldemort is very chilling. The last sentence left me breathless. "... like an angel carved from the very fog." Simply amazing! You did a brilliant job. I can't wait to read some more of your stories.
Author's Response: *unable to stop this smile* you've said everything an aspiring writer loves to hear!! i love you for that, and am very glad you enjoyed the story! btw, there are several more plot bunnies in the field, so keep an eye out... (ps, i read and reviewed you too!)
That was very exciting! I liked the ending, but it ended too soon! Want to know more of what happened! And it was a bit sad.
Author's Response: sorry for the sadness...draco is one of my favorite characters, so he will appear again in future fics. a sequel to this is in the queue, well toward the back of the queue tho...thanks for the review!
