Reviews For Water Dens
Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 05/17/08 8:16
Chapter: Water Dens

Oh, I love The Waste Land, and I'm so happy to find a poem that was based on it.

First, I'd like to say that you wrote the poem very well. You have a nice way of sequencing the lines. My favorite line was

And everyone's footsteps sound like a earthquake.
I liked the comparison of the footsteps to an earthquake.

This poem flows nicely for a free-form poem, and I applaud you for that. However, I do have to ask a question-- how does this relate to the Harry Potter universe? Either way, it's still a great poem.

Well done.

--Victoria

Author's Response: Hey Vicki! I'm glad you liked The Waste Land...I liked it too. It relates to Harry Potter because it was about the gnomes that were in Chamber of Secrets...it was a Poerty Anyone? challenge, so... rnrnAnyway, thanks for the review!rnrn~Michelle :)

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 04/01/07 10:16
Chapter: Water Dens

Teehee! That was really cute. The poem had a very nice flow, and I really enjoyed reading it.

One small nitpick: on the last line, you wrote there, but it should really be their. But other than that it was lovely. :)

Author's Response: Hey Anna! Thanks for the review! ♥ Gin

Reviewer: Ron x Hermione
Date: 01/27/07 19:59
Chapter: Water Dens

This was quite cute, Michelle! The gnomes being put into play was portrayed really great! You have a great knack for writing poetry! I wish I could. Very cute poem, girl!

~Lindsey :)

Author's Response: Lindsey! *Squishes* Thank you! Wait a second....is this for the Badgeer Review Circle? *Checks* I knew it! *Shrugs* Well, I love reviews all the same! Thanks for the Lovely review, my Lovely Beta and fellow Insomniac, Hufflepuff, and a bunch of other thing that we have ion common! -Gin

Reviewer: HPiznxt2myheart
Date: 11/22/06 7:12
Chapter: Water Dens

That's really good! I wish I could write poetry.

Author's Response: Thanks! :]. You know, if you want to try to write a poem, it doesn't have to make sense or rhyme. I didn't know write to write on this story, I spent about 3 hours trying to put words together! ~*~ Gin_PotterGirl~*~

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