Reviewer: marauders maidens
Date: 03/12/07 17:26
Chapter: The Next Two Months

I don't think you got the whole Neville..y..ness to the character,it just felt awkward a bit. I didn't like the ending but you could make this a cool story if you developed it more!-Moony

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 11/20/06 21:51
Chapter: The Next Two Months

Poor Neville. I would have thought the Order would have been able to save him, though it would have been extremely difficult. That was such a sad ending!!! It was a good story though!

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