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Name: marauders maidens (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 17:26 · For: The Next Two Months
I don't think you got the whole Neville..y..ness to the character,it just felt awkward a bit. I didn't like the ending but you could make this a cool story if you developed it more!-Moony

Name: Cheshlin (Signed) · Date: 11/20/06 21:51 · For: The Next Two Months
Poor Neville. I would have thought the Order would have been able to save him, though it would have been extremely difficult. That was such a sad ending!!! It was a good story though!

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