This was great! It's a good storyline and you could probably get a few good chapters from it! If you do I'll read it crazily!-Padfoot
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Right now I have no plans on expanding this story, but you never know what the future will bring. IF I do add to it, I will let you know! :)
Sorry it took me a while to review this, but I never know when they get posted to your page! You e-mail them to me!! Great story, and I like where you took the story! 8) Plus gotta love the romance!
Author's Response: I knew you would like it! :) You are almost as fond of Tonks/Remus as I am! hehe. :) Thanks for reviewing and Betaing for me! Cyns
Hi there! Great job on the Gauntlet! I've been meaning to read this since it went up, sorry it took a while. It was fun to read through an entire Gauntlet story, this one was exciting. You do a lovely job with Tonks, her flashbacks/memories were very well done. I also really liked how you were able to work Remus into the story as well; you did a good job with their relationship. A great poem, as usual. :) I did notice a few places where it changed from past to present tense, was that intentional or something you played with in the individual drabbles? Just curious. :) Again, nice job and good luck on the Gauntlet challenge!! ~Gina :)
Author's Response: I didn't change the tenses on purpose. That is one of the few things I need work on as a writer....It is a good chance that those were between prompts, and when I picked the story back up I managed to change tense without even realizing it. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and story though! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :) Cyns
Aww...I loved the ending and the whole Remus/Tonks'ness of the fic! I think that this makes the whole plot really work, as it seems more/quite plausible that Tonks would become a Death Eater for love.
I also like the way that the whole 'Remus' theme carries on throughout the story. It seemed a bit confusing at first but becomes clearer on reading and is really good!
When you love someone, you will do whatever it takes to make sure they are ok. The pain I felt with you gone was just too much.
I love those lines. So sweet. *teary* A really good read, well done. :)
~Suzie
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I was wondering if anyone would ever review it. I just like getting people's thoughts. When I had read the first prompt, I needed to figure out a great way to explain her becoming a Death Eater. I'm glad you liked the Love mixed in with the angst! :)
