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Name: padfoot_girl (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 21:28 · For: Fewat v. Won-Won
I feel terrible for hardly submitting reviews to this story, and it's one of my favorites! I've just been so busy. So this review is for all the other reviews I missed. First of all, this story is very funny. You're quite talented ;) I'd like to see your sense of humor in more action, my friend. Next, I hope you know I'm a little, or maybe quite, obsessed with this story. I have MNFF send me emails when my favorite stories update, and *squee* when I read that Draco, the Babysitter, has been updated. lol I know, I'm pathetic. Anyways, great job on Ron and Draco for them not being OOC. Of course, little Hermione is very cute *sounding* and I can't wait to see what happens next after the "I love you." ;) Now hurry up and write faster. I don't have all year. lol jk Can't wait for more. Do not disappoint me. I WILL come after you. lmao. If you read this whole thing, well, you don't have a life. Either that, or you love your fans. ;)

Author's Response: I loves my fans! XD I read and reply to every review I get. Of course sometimes it's weeks before I reply but I eventually get around to it. Thanks for your lovely review. I am obsessed with several fics too, so no worries. XD As for my sense of humor? Thanks! I'm utterly and completely flattered beyond comprehension. I'm not quite sure what you mean by more inaction though? More stories? o.0 I'm writing the next chapter as we speak but I can't promise I'll update quite as fast. Thanks for the comment on Ron and Draco not being OOC. I really try on those two. Thanks!

Name: draco_roxmysox (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 19:04 · For: Fewat v. Won-Won
Awww!!! I love fewat too!! *giggles* This story is so adorable, please update soon!!! *hugz*

Author's Response: Thanks, I will try to update soon!

Name: luvronfromhp (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 19:01 · For: Fewat v. Won-Won
awww that is sooo cute:):)♥♥♥

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: Love_is_4ever (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 18:49 · For: Fewat v. Won-Won
"I love you, Fewat!" -> Aww!!!!! How adorable! She's soo cute!

And Draco slowly coming to terms with heris absolutely perfect. I can't wait for the next chapter! Gah!!!

100000/10 Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOOOONNN!!!!! PLEASE!!!!

~ Samarie

Author's Response: Thanks~ XD I'm working on it!

Name: James Jameson (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 18:21 · For: Fewat v. Won-Won
aw! draco and hermione are growing fond of each other!

Author's Response: yes, they are. XD

Name: clabbert2101 (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 18:06 · For: Fewat v. Won-Won
Aw, that's so cute!

Author's Response: thanks. XD

Name: CowGirlHPFan (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 17:45 · For: Fewat v. Won-Won
Awww that was soo cute!!! I love you, Fewat! Awww adorable!!! Great chapter, please update again soon, *~*Sarah*~*

Author's Response: Awww....thanks. XD I will try to update again soon. It just depends on the inspiration.

Name: Sing Hallelujah (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 17:42 · For: Fewat v. Won-Won
i just adore this story
probably one of the best i have on my favourites
If only the chapters were longer....
just jkin

I especiallly loved the end!



Author's Response: I wish my chapters were longer too, but the inspiration comes in spurts only so that's how I write. I'm glad you love my silly little story. XD

Name: Lily_n_James (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 17:38 · For: Fewat v. Won-Won
Wow!That was funny! Wonder what will happen wuth the whole 'I love you,Fewat!' thing, should be fun.

Update Soon!

Author's Response: Oh you shall see. XD

Name: LittleMissLovegood (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 17:34 · For: Fewat v. Won-Won
aww bless =)

Author's Response: Thanks.

Name: mugglechicka5565 (Signed) · Date: 10/21/07 8:34 · For: Tea Time with Meow
harry just likes getting punched doesnt he?

Author's Response: Yes. Yes, he does.

Name: Welshgreengrl (Signed) · Date: 10/18/07 21:02 · For: Tea Time with Meow
This is the funniest story ever!! soo awesome!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: Dramatic_Snitch (Signed) · Date: 10/17/07 15:15 · For: Exploding Cauldrons
I'm so glad you updated! Love this story, even though he's being a jerk, I can't help but feel a twinge of sympathy towards Harry lol.
He seems to be becoming everyone's punch bag! Well done, brilliant!
(P.S. Ron's reaction was priceless!)

Author's Response: I love Harry, but at the same time he irritated me a lot throughout hte series what with him getting away with so much...>.> And Ron's reaction was priceless! XD I wrote it months ago..

Name: avid_fanatic (Signed) · Date: 10/16/07 4:57 · For: Tea Time with Meow
aww, Draco and Hermione are getting along. :p

Author's Response: yes, they are...and they will get even better along later.

Name: xo_Loony_Tuney_ox (Signed) · Date: 10/15/07 22:43 · For: Tea Time with Meow
PLEASE finish this story I BEG OF YOU!!!!

Author's Response: I'm in the process of finishing it. XD

Name: Vince165 (Signed) · Date: 10/15/07 19:17 · For: Tea Time with Meow
This is really turning out to be a great fic!
Its defenitly one of the better fic's I have seen since being here but then again I havnt been here long :D

Cant wait until next chapter is up :)

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for your lovely review.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 10/15/07 17:58 · For: Tea Time with Meow
wow ron really is mad. well i can sympathyse with him. draco is getting much better at the whole parenting thing. i can{t wait to see how things work out. up date soon

Author's Response: Yes, Ron is irritated isn't he? And Draco is definitely getting better, and will get better too.

Name: C_A_Campbell (Signed) · Date: 10/15/07 14:57 · For: Tea Time with Meow
You know, I should probably feel sorry for Harry considering that's the second time in two days he's gotten slugged, but somehow I can't muster up the sympathy. I love the way you characterize Harry, showing him as arrogant, because he always had that side of him and I don't like fanfics that show him as 'perfect'.

This chapter was funny. I loved 'Scorpius the Dragon'. The line 'I think you and I are going to get along just fine now, Granger' was so sweet, but perfectly in character.

Ron's reaction was nice. I really enjoyed it. Overall, another adored chapter. I think your story is the only one I continue to read on this site, just because I'm so busy, but I always find time for your updates.

I do have a couple of things to critique though.

#1: You should really italisize character thoughts, because all of a sudden the story was in third person and then it was in first. I figure out it was Ron thinking to himself pretty quickly, but to avoid taking readers out of the story, you should put italics there.

#2: in the last section you said 'now' instead of 'not', no big deal, just something I caught

#3: I don't think you should refer to Draco as the 'former' Slytherin. He didn't change houses, he's still a Slytherin, even if he isn't still at Hogwarts. 'Once a Slytherin, always a Slytherin'. But that's just my opinion.

Yeah, I know I generally just leave a 'wow, I loved it, update soon' review, but I thought I'd spend a few extra moments giving you a nice long view like you deserved. So, to sum it all up:

I loved it! Please, PLEASE, update soon. (tehe - no seriously, take your time. I'm sure it will be worth waiting for)

Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughtful review. I love to read your reviews (no matter how short), and I'm so glad that you still read my story regardless of your busy life. XD As for the critique, thank you so much! Lol. I read through the story after it was updated/submitted, and I noticed those same things like the italics, and the now, but haven't gotten around to changing it due to my own hectic life. However, I really appreciate it. Thank you. As for Draco, true that! Always a Slytherin. Thanks so much. -hugs- Ritta

Name: Katie_Potter (Signed) · Date: 10/15/07 14:52 · For: Tea Time with Meow
omg this is some good stuff.. draco babysitting hahahaha loves it XD

Author's Response: Thanks. XD

Name: Little Miss Potter (Signed) · Date: 10/15/07 14:52 · For: Tea Time with Meow
This is such a fun story! I really hope the next update is quicker as I was mortified when I had to wait for this chapter!

Author's Response: Awww....I promise my chapters will come a lot faster from now on.

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