THIS IS GOING TO BE A DRACO/HERIONE FIC ISN'T IT! PLEASE! HAVE MERCY! I'M A R/HR SHIPPER!!! YOU EVIL SCUMBAG!
Author's Response: No it isn't.
I've said this several times already. It's not going to be a D/Hr. It's a humor, it will stay a humor. And the few Dramione shippers like me were told there would be a sequel which would become a Dramione...but not in this story.
And on that note, please be respectful of others ships regardless of your POV. Also please refrain from insulting members. You never know when you might be insulting a mod. -puts on evil scumbag badge-
I love this story! its so cute and original! i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! =]
AWWW!!!!! she's sooo cute! she reminds me of my 3yr old sis.
Author's Response: I know! =] Hermione is cute!
I love it! Keep up the fantastic work!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Its brilliant! Cant wait to see how it will all turn out !
Author's Response: Me neither!
Okay, I really wanna comment about the story till now... um, I have no idea why.
* I like the humour incorporated by you. It is like Wodehouse- you either understand and take in the humour, or you don't find anything funny. This fic has very light and clean humour, unlike a lot of writers who use vulgar jokes.
* This plot is very unique. I like the difference from the usual spoof-on-Voldy or those Snape and Bellatrix spoofs.
*The language you have used is very realistic.
*Draco's characterisation has been done really well.
*I also liked the teenager-ish jokes here and there.
So, all in all, it's a very, very good fic. Keep it going!
Author's Response: Awww...thanks! You really summarized my story very well in regards to its humor. I appreciate that. And I'm quite flattered you compared it to Wodehouse. XD I totally am for light and clean humor that is non-spoofy even if it comes off as "cute" =]
Thanks a lot! XD
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! This is so cool. DO NOT i repeat DO NOT abandon this story.
Author's Response: I am not. XD I repeat: I am not abandoning this story! XD
more more i must have more
Author's Response: I'm working on it! XD
i love this story but i always forgot to review and somhow only one line of my last review showed up :(,, so ne way i LOVED it and i love the "I dont like u WonWon!FEWAT! omg its hilarius and sweet and u have the PERFECT ending to this !!!
Author's Response: XD Thanks!! -hugs-
omg,, so sweet
Author's Response: Thanks.
I love it! I love it! More more more :P
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like it!
Aww, that's so cute. :p I love this story! More! I want more! :p
Author's Response: It is cute! Thanks! I'll try to update soon.
perfect end to the chapter! priceless!! and poor Ron had only just started to figure out how to handle a grown Hermione, and now he has to start over with an irrational toddler with a rodent fixation. you can tell the poor boy desperately wants to be loved by her, any way he can. bravo to you!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. =] I love how you described Ron's love for her, it's sort of sad but true.
good chapter love it and update soon.
Author's Response: I shall.
awwwwww, is this gonna end in dramione?? that would be cool. i hope ye will.
Author's Response: Hmm...actually, it's not. It would be nice for all the Dramioners but it's not - I decided that a long time ago. -hugs-
all i can say is "auuuuu" so incredibly cute Hermione
Author's Response: XD Thanks.
This story just keeps getting better and better! I don't think this chapter was boring at all. I am a huge Draco fan, and it's excellant to have him portrayed as an actual human being, without it being a romance fiction. Please keep the updates coming as soon as possable!
Author's Response: Thanks Kat!
VERY good chapter i LOVED it
Author's Response: Thanks!
Well, I’ve read this fic about a million times, and I’ve never reviewed! :O So, here I am, reviewing Chapter One.
First off, congratulations on Hermione and Malfoy being perfectly in-character. Most authors wouldn’t be able to pull of this type of fic without making them terribly OOC, but you’ve managed to keep them IC. That definitely deserves noted.
I do like how you gave the reason why Draco was at Number 12, Grimmauld Place straight off the bat. That keeps the reader from going “Huh?” and allows them to move back into what’s happening at that moment in time — namely, Hermione and Draco brewing the potion.
Ouch. Hermione hitting Draco overhead with a book made me smile a bit… and it was, miraculously, in-character (remember how she slapped him in PoA?).
I do like how you used three asterisks to break from the scene we were in and flash forward to where Draco and Harry are talking. That way we get to hear Malfoy’s version of what happened.
I absolutely LOVED the twist where Hermione got turned into a four-year old. That made me laugh, even though this was kind of a prologue.
My only nitpick is Harry. I’m not sure that he’d take away Malfoy’s wand and have HIM look after Hermione… but other than that, this fic is perfect. P-E-R-F-E-C-T.
Author's Response: Wow! What an awesome review! Thanks! Yes, Harry is totally OOC, I feel! Lol. Nothing much can be done about that now but I will try to keep him more IC in the future =] Thanks for your review.
oh that is so cute. is draco going to think its ok for her to say that though? great story so far by the way.
Author's Response: Thanks. To answer your question: No, Draco will not be ok with that.