Reviews For A Past Reclaimed
Reviewer: TheVFD
Date: 07/02/07 15:48
Chapter: Chapter 16: The Best Christmas Present Ever

YESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! YAYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! HARRY'S BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE NUMBER OF EXCLAMATION POINTS IN THIS REVIEW IS THE RATING OF THIS STORY OUT OF TEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol! Thanks! I'm glad you're so happy. :-)

Reviewer: moon_girl_175
Date: 06/24/07 5:43
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

that was a good no great story

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: angel1991
Date: 06/23/07 13:42
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

Yes Sirius is alive!!!! You would think that I would be thinking about the other characters :)

Author's Response: Yeah, but maybe their 'deaths' hadn't sunk in yet. I'm glad you're happy. :-)

Reviewer: angel1991
Date: 06/22/07 21:07
Chapter: Chapter 19: Witchy Woman

“No, I’m quite aware that your ‘G’ is for Ginny. That’s what frightens me, actually,” Hermione retorted.

“Hey!” George shouted from across the room. “I heard that, Granger, and I consider it a challenge to make you fear me.”

Those lines will keep me laughing for days.

Author's Response: Glad to put a smile on your face. Aren't Fred and George awesome?

Reviewer: angel1991
Date: 06/22/07 18:43
Chapter: Chapter 12: Trial

Poor Harry :(

Author's Response: I couldn't agree more.... and I wrote the thing.

Reviewer: angel1991
Date: 06/22/07 17:31
Chapter: Chapter 6: Tom

Your boyfriend, well potentially anyway, looks like a guy that possessed you -ouch - she better get over it.

Author's Response: Yeah, that's a very big ouch. It will take some doing for her to get over it, too.

Reviewer: TheVFD
Date: 06/22/07 10:12
Chapter: Chapter 4: The Pickpocket

When I read the title for this chapter I was worried that Tyler would get in trouble for stealing one of the weasley's things or something. I was relieved when I found out the truth.

“Have you really been training with-”

“-defeat You-Know-Who?”

“Where have you-”

“Can you sign my-”

“-really The Chosen One?”

I think this will give harry a good idea of how famous he is. GREAT job.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chaotic scramble to get Harry's attention. And, thankfully, Tyler's not a bad kid. He only became a pickpocket because he was a hungry orphan who didn't trust the system enough to willingly let himself be put into an orphanage. But he wouldn't steal just to do it.

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 06/22/07 3:01
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

Couldn't it? Just wanna tell ya that this was one of the cutest stories I've ever heard:D!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 06/22/07 2:52
Chapter: Chapter 34: Battle at the Ministry

Is this it then? Is it all over?-- No Way!

Author's Response: Pretty close. Juat one more chapter to go!

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 06/21/07 14:27
Chapter: Chapter 25: Valentines

This means trouble for Ginny right?

Author's Response: That Daily Prophet is great at stirring up trouble. In other words, yes.

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 06/21/07 14:06
Chapter: Chapter 23: The Scar

How cum Harry did dat? :S

Author's Response: Not sure what you're referring to. His work in Charms class at the end? He's just learning the spell; nothing sinister about it.

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 06/21/07 13:57
Chapter: Chapter 22: Visitors

OMG! Wt hppd? Shoving Snape's head into the toilet is sooooo KOOOOOL!

Author's Response: lol! I'm glad you think so. Sadly, that's more Sirius' style than Remus'. Don't worry, though; he'll pull his prank soon enough.

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 06/21/07 13:45
Chapter: Chapter 21: False Death

Sheez! You've relly done your research on dis haven't you?

Author's Response: Just a bit of poking around on the Internet for Rip Van Winkle type stories and Latin words to use for the spells. Other than that, I just made it up. ;-)

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 06/07/07 14:37
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sport Broomstick Repair

This was hilarious! I loved their attempt to fix the broom etc. I have a few problems though with the storyline. First of all, why are Fred and George the ones to help Harry? To me, that's always been Ron's role as best friend and sidekick. :) I also wonder why a magical sports shop would be selling Muggle items like videocassettes. That just didn't make sense to me.

Another thing you should note: unnaturalness is not a word, so Aunt Petunia shouldn' t use it.

Otherwise, your characterization and the humor is spot-on. I loved reading this! Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, Kumy. There were a couple of reasons Dumbledore sent Fred and George, rather than Ron, to watch out for Harry. First, they're a lot slower to anger than Ron is, and are much more likely to respond to threats and derogatory remarks with humor (such as dancing teacups), rather than hexing the daylights out of the Dursleys, as Ron would probably do. There's also the fact that they're older, already out of school and running a successful business, so he sees them as being more responsible. Finally, probably the main reason it happened that way was because I REALLY wanted to write it. ;-)

About the videocassettes, I realize it's very unlikely. The idea was to get more Muggle-borns excited about Quidditch. Unlikely? Of course. Impossible? Not if the shop owner was Muggle-born. It was really just one of those things that I put in for fun.

Finally, I checked, and according to Webster's dictionary, 'unnaturalness' IS indeed a word. I was rather impressed with myself for actually having a real (as opposed to electronic) dictionary in the house.

At any rate, thank you very much for your thoughs, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: cyt_potter
Date: 05/24/07 10:37
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

OMG! I loved this whole story! Both parts of it! I have to admit though I almost couldn't finish it when Harry fell through that veil! But the last chapter definatly saved it for me! I only have one question, why didn't you include Dumbledore in the Borrow too so everyone could see Harry alive? But WOW, I love your writing! I'll be looking for it from now on! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you decided to go ahead and finish the story despite Harry falling through the veil. Really, the only reason Dumbledore wasn't at the Burrow was because I think he's be awfully busy taking care of other things, what with the fall of Voldemort and the "death" of the Boy-Who-Lived. I could have included him, I suppose, but this is just the way it came out. I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :-)

Reviewer: albvs
Date: 05/22/07 1:34
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

that was close i almost sent a nasty review about killing harry but good thing i fineshed reading it good job

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you decided to read the last chapter before yelling at me. It was a pretty good twist, wasn't it? ;-)

Reviewer: DocHolliday
Date: 05/21/07 0:21
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

It took me so long to get back on here ... I love the banner btw

Great story NUW. I have been oversea's for several months now (almost 5) I was doing a mission trip and the little internet time I had was spent on e-mailing family

I was so glad to get to finish this story, awesome job, looking forward to reading what you have next.

GO NA!

Author's Response: Thanks, Doc! I'm glad to see you're back, and that you enjoyed the end of the story. Looking forward to hearing more from you in the future.

Reviewer: Cats Can Dissapear
Date: 05/17/07 21:52
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

lol. Don't stop making me cry. [wipes back a tear] Absolutely gorgeiously GREAT! Sirius is back.......What will the world come to know?Loved every second of this serie. I can imagine it being put down and sold as the 7th book!!! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm really glad you liked the story, and I don't plan to stop writing anytime soon. I've got a few stories I'm working on now; I hope you'll enjoy them as much as you have this one.

Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 05/12/07 3:18
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

I realy liked this story i hope you write more in the future. this was asome!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I think I'm done with this storyline, but I've got a couple of works in progress on the site right now, and I'm working on another one. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. :-)

Reviewer: EmeraldFire
Date: 05/12/07 1:46
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

These two stories were great and well written. The story line was believable as well, not to mention an interesting take on Harry's sixth year (and seventh). Towards the end I suspected that there would be more to the death room than just Voldemort's end, I must say that your take on "behind the veil" was very unique and pretty cool. Great work on this and thanks for an enjoyable read :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm very glad you found it both entertaining and believable. I've always thought there had to be something more about the locked room, and this seemed like a great way to tie it in. I'm glad you liked it.

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