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Name: ginnyrulz13 (Signed) · Date: 05/21/08 20:33 · For: Chapter 4: The Pickpocket
well, at least tyler wanted to do something! and i love how u always through in a bit of h/g in each chapter.

Name: ginnyrulz13 (Signed) · Date: 05/21/08 20:23 · For: Chapter 3: Hermione’s Task
that would be really weird to hear about all these events that happened to you, that you dont remember, from other people. nice chapter,btw!

Name: ginnyrulz13 (Signed) · Date: 05/21/08 19:58 · For: Chapter 2: Sport Broomstick Repair
thats really funny that they have a broom repair kit with a video! lol and i love how fred and george stayed at private drive!

Name: ginnyrulz13 (Signed) · Date: 05/21/08 19:50 · For: Chapter 1: The Weasley Twins
aw! thats sweet that the weasleys took in tyler! he really grew on me in a stolen past!

Name: Astronomygirl (Signed) · Date: 03/22/08 3:18 · For: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil
Awww man.It's over. I hate when these stories end. It's so not fair. Well, anyways, your story is and forever will be amazing. I can't wait to start reading some of your other stories.
SIANARA, Astronomygirl

Name: Astronomygirl (Signed) · Date: 03/21/08 23:27 · For: Chapter 25: Valentines
The whole snake thing was really brilliant of you.I like the whole idea of how authors like yourself do actual research so that the spells you create won't just be mumbo-jumbo. And, to make this even better, you story, and chapter, is really,really amazing. Please keep up your excellent work. IRIGOTO GOSI MASHTA. Thats JAPANESE for THANK YOU.
SINCERELY, Astronomygirl

Name: Ryan the Wizard (Signed) · Date: 03/21/08 20:49 · For: Chapter 1: The Weasley Twins
This is without a doubt THE best piece of work I've ever read on Mugglenet Fanfiction. The entire series was packed with action and suspense. I literally took the whole day away from doing RL things just to read this. This story has proven what I thought months ago when I read Magical Myths; you are the best writer in my opinion on this site. I happened upon this series by chance and I was impressed beyond belief. Well done.

I too liked the involvement of minor characters like Fred and George, and immensely enjoyed your characterization of Peeves. The details in your story were excellent, as well, with additions of the locked door, and Harry's "pool of blood." It was very, shall we say, Rowlingesque in the presentation.

Your original characters are phenomenal. I wouldn't have enjoyed either Magical Myths or The Memory Loss series nearly as much is it weren't for the spectacular additions of Jared and Tyler.

It's fics like these that make me think that Rowling is sitting at the computer screen shaking her fist, for stealing her idea. Congratulations.

PS: I like how you used JK Rowling's traditional plot formation for her stories. For example, the final duel didn't happen until the last two chapters, or when they were at the end of the year. Nice touch!

Name: harrypotter02181994 (Signed) · Date: 03/13/08 1:46 · For: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil
Okay, so I managed not to strangle myself for not reviewing in the first story. It took me two days to read everything. There is only one word that can discribe all of this. WOW!!!!!! Both of the stories were really good, though I do perfer this one to the first one. And I cried at the end of chapter 34 thinking that's where the story ended until my brother pointed out that there was a 'next' at the bottom of the page. Ha! I know. But these stories were awesome beyond awesome. I was in my own little world when I decided to read another chapter or two of one of the stories. What I would like to know is what happens to all the couples (Harry/Ginny...Ron/Hermione...Tyler/Luna). I think it would be a good idea to write a short story of what happens to them in the future. But still, it will end up as your choice if you wan to do it or not. But if you decide to write another story or not, these first two were still AWESOME. I don't know how many times I can possibly say that. They were AWESOME OUT OF ALL THE AWESOME.

Name: Astronomygirl (Signed) · Date: 03/12/08 16:20 · For: Chapter 12: Trial
I am INCREDIBLY FURIOUS at Umbridge for snapping her wand before they could get Harry's memory out of it. But on the bright side, at least she gets 20 years in Azkaban, and they get her wand. At least now she gets what she deserves and they can get the chance of repairing the wand. I absolutely LOVE this chapter, all thingds considered.
Sincerely, Astronomygirl

Name: hope47 (Signed) · Date: 01/16/08 19:53 · For: Chapter 25: Valentines
Harry got the sing card in his second year and in Ginny's first year

Name: Rowanhood_in_China (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 11:37 · For: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil
ok. this must have a sequel. its torture thinking about what could happen next! please write a sequel! pretty please with a cherry on top!

Name: knightsbridge (Signed) · Date: 12/27/07 15:38 · For: Chapter 28: The Prank
Face it...adults aren't always mature either. so Harry is in good company

Name: knightsbridge (Signed) · Date: 12/27/07 15:38 · For: Chapter 28: The Prank
Face it...adults aren't always mature either. so Harry is in good company

Name: Marauder4Life (Signed) · Date: 12/02/07 11:06 · For: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 11/25/07 13:16 · For: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil
I absolutely loved this story and am so upset that it's over. There was so much going on, so many twists, pranks, arguments, laughs... . I never even imagined that the room behind the archway was the locked room of love. What a fantastic plot! And Sirius got to come back, so glad, he was one of my favourite characters. Such details too, the tiny pool of blood left after Voldemort disintegrated being Harry's blood, how did you think to put that in? I have many times suspected muggle net fan fics of being written by JKR, to either fill in gaps to the published stories, continue or preceed them or to play out alternatives to them. Never have I believed that so sincerely until now. Thank you.

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 11/25/07 10:29 · For: Chapter 30: The Occultus Charm
Isn't legilimency scary? And Occlumency sounds really hard, but I like the way you described the process, the different phases and the ocultus charm and everything. I love how Dumbledore lets the little things go too, I suppose because in the bigger picture they don't really matter. Wonder if Snape's vein will pop before the end of the year?

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 11/25/07 9:45 · For: Chapter 28: The Prank
The pranks are brilliant, marauders would've been proud. Glad Harry didn't decide to give Snape love potion, being an expert he'd probably realise straight away. Wandless magic is cool! At first I thought he could've put the potion in Malfoy's juice wearing his cloak, but then realised Moody can see through invisibility cloaks. The splinching incident was funny, but probably painful. I can't believe death eaters got into the school, and i can't believe Voldemort would be daft enough to attempt such a reckless stunt. The stretchy rope charm was excellent, wonder if Harry'll ever use it. All the new spells are great, and the magic for muggles stuff Fred and George are inventing are fab. Oh, and I loved the little jade snake, very meaningful gift. Sorry this review is garbled, just can't remember everything i wanted to say so this'll have to do. Hope Harry doesn't revert to type though, quite like the new, mature version.

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 11/24/07 17:44 · For: Chapter 14: Dungeon Detention
I was going to read all of the story before I reviewed, I just didn't want to break off in the middle. However, this chapter, about the detention was just so funny I had to. Snape was just so livid! And Harry was so quick thinking. I guess his time at the muggle school did pay off, hope if or when he regains his memory, he keeps the extra bit, it could turn out useful. My heart almost burst at the trial when Umbridge snapped her wand, I would've thrown her against the wall for him if I could. But wasn't Dumbledore clever, all the little tricks and loop holes he had ready, he never ceases to amaze me. This is an absolutely fantastic story, well written, the characters are authentic, I just can't think of something good enough to say, so I'll stop now as I want to read the next bit.

Name: ADream (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 23:20 · For: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil
man this is like the best fic ever!! i read both this and the first on in about a week (blew off quite alot of homework for it too. lol) i love how you protrayed the viel and how sirius survived all that time. great job!!

Name: JPotterNY (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 22:38 · For: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil
An excellent story and a nice surprise at the end - again, thanks for writing. Thanks also for posting at siye so I could find and follow you back here!


Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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