Reviews For A Past Reclaimed
Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 05/09/07 16:40
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

ummm... Oookay... I liked the story, but I thought the ending was a bit wierd. Like you could have added another chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for being honest. I probably could have dragged it out for another chapter or more, but I really felt like this was the right place to end, and then let the reader use his or her imagination to fill in anything that happened later. Of course, you are more than welcome to disagree. Thanks for taking the time to read and review my stories; I really do appreciate it.

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 05/09/07 16:31
Chapter: Chapter 34: Battle at the Ministry

How could you do that!!! I am crying!!!

Author's Response: Sorry! You'll forgive me after the next chapter, though. ;-)

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 05/08/07 18:34
Chapter: Chapter 33: Dangerous Surprises

OMG!!! The battle is really starting to begin!!!

Author's Response: Yes it is. O_o

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 05/08/07 17:59
Chapter: Chapter 31: Training


Author's Response: Well, that's one way of putting it. ;-)

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 05/08/07 17:41
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Occultus Charm

Wow!!! He's really improving!!

Author's Response: Yeah, he's getting lots better, isn't he?

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 05/05/07 15:53
Chapter: Chapter 29: Revenge


Author's Response: Pretty much.

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 05/05/07 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Prank

hee hee! this is frickin' hillarious!!

Author's Response: Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 05/05/07 15:33
Chapter: Chapter 27: Confrontations

Woo hoo! Harry won..... sorta

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. ;-)

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 05/05/07 15:21
Chapter: Chapter 26: The Eye of the Maiden

Holy Shit! He believes the article!!!

Author's Response: Well, he might not actually believe it, but anything for an excuse to make Harry's life miserable, right?

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 05/05/07 15:15
Chapter: Chapter 25: Valentines

That IS funny!

Author's Response: Thanks! :-)

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 05/05/07 15:04
Chapter: Chapter 24: Private Lessons

That was funny! Ginny got splinched! hee hee

Author's Response: Thanks! I really wanted to do an Apparition lesson without copying the one from HBP, and this seemed like the perfect solution. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 05/05/07 14:48
Chapter: Chapter 23: The Scar

hmmmmm... I wonder what's different?

Author's Response: Ah, that's the real question, isn't it?

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 05/03/07 17:57
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

I am so HAPPY right now about the end of this story. I loved it loved it looooooved iiitttt!!! It was amazing! AND Sirius is back AND Remus is no linger a werewolf AND Harry gets the girl AND, and, well, I've run out of things to
"and" about... but basically it was amazing! I'm gonna go find another story of yours now!

Author's Response: Thank you! That's exactly the reaction I was going for, so I guess I succeeded. Yay!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/02/07 12:29
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

Oh how I wish that J.K. would do this. No matter what else she did in the first six books, nothing else made me as upset, as when she killed Sirius. I cried for quite a while. The way you brought him back was nothing short of brilliant. Definitely major kudos to you.
As for the other chapters, I loved all of the ways Harry and company made life uncomfortable for Snape, and Malfoy. I was pleased to see that even though Remus was more well behaved than James and Sirius, he wasn't above pulling a prank worthy of the Marauder name.
You are a talented author and I look forward to reading other fan fics that you have written. Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed this story, and that the ending turned out well. I decided at the very beginning that I would try to write the happiest ending possible, and I feel like I succeeded for the most part. If you're looking for other stories to read, I've got two works in progress on this site right now, as well as a couple of one-shots. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mrsstaal
Date: 04/28/07 20:20
Chapter: Chapter 12: Trial

Aw, poor Harry. :[
There better be hope. haha. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Look on the bright side; at least you don't have to wait for me to post new chapters. ;-) I'm looking forward to seeing what you think of the rest of the story.

Reviewer: mrsstaal
Date: 04/28/07 20:11
Chapter: Chapter 11: Halloween

Oooh, Umbridge's trial. :] Should be interesting. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm sure you'll find it interesting....

Reviewer: mrsstaal
Date: 04/28/07 20:03
Chapter: Chapter 10: Inheritance

Wow, finding out about the cloak. I was wondering if that would come up. ^_^ Nice job.

Author's Response: Thanks! Harry's friends glossed over a lot of details in the interest of time when they were telling him about his past, but this was one thing he HAD to find out about soon.

Reviewer: mrsstaal
Date: 04/28/07 19:57
Chapter: Chapter 9: Back to School

wow, I havn't been on here to read this in a while. Glad I got on though! ^_^ Great chapter.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Welcome back.

Reviewer: PEMDAS
Date: 04/28/07 12:16
Chapter: Chapter 25: Valentines

About my last review, I found that punctuation mistake, and also one other thing.

“Well, it would’ve been a good excuse if your memory weren’t so good,” Harry laughed. Shouldn't it say your memory WASN'T so good?

And the punctuation mistake: “He’s quite safe here, though” Luna offered. There should be a comma after 'though'.

Okay, that's all.


Author's Response: Thanks for getting back to me on that. In the first quote you mentioned, you're probably right about the correct word usage there, but that's not always how people talk. Since people tend to say it both ways in everyday speech, I don't see a problem with doing it for dialogue. Thanks for pointing out the missing comma. I'm off to correct it right now! :-)

Reviewer: PEMDAS
Date: 04/26/07 17:44
Chapter: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

Yaaay! Great ending! I liked Luna's reaction to Sirius' write her character very well. My only problem is that the last paragraph was a bit cheesy. Besides that, though, bravo! One of the best fics I've ever read! Very JKR-like!

Author's Response: Thanks! I find Luna very difficult to write, so it feels really good to hear I've done a good job with her. I'm not offended at all by your reaction to the last paragraph, by the way -- it was meant to be a little cheesy. Thank you very much for all your comments.

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
The Unwelcome Friend by FloreatCastellum 3rd-5th Years
Sirius Black knows he is innocent. Alone in Azkaban, he thinks back on the five...
Not From Others by FloreatCastellum 6th-7th Years
She may not have been able to join Harry, Ron and Hermione, but Ginny refuses...
Harry Potter and the Coma by Elisabeth McNight 1st-2nd Years
Harry Potter wakes up to find himself surrounded by the people he thought to...
A Christmas Choice by coolh5000 3rd-5th Years
After working late one Christmas Eve and missing yet another day out with his...
Winter at the Castle by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
The winter solstice, the shortest, harshest days of the year. Would you have...
A Passing Fancy by HalfASlug 1st-2nd Years
The Yule Ball is on the horizon and Neville knows only one girl that he wants...
Four Christmases by Squibstress 6th-7th Years
Minerva attempts to teach Severus Occlumency and perhaps something more.