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Name: BeeBlack (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 20:54 · For: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes
IT was here and it's gone again... What's happening? Why is so difficult to read fics here on Mugglenet??? Damn it!!!
Please, let me know when the chapter is online, 'cause I love this fic and I'm dying to read the rest of it!

Author's Response: What do you mean? I never knew it was validated in the first place! Ughhh...

Name: sweetbee (Signed) · Date: 09/03/07 5:02 · For: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes
YAAAAAAAAAA, it here, it seem like forever

Author's Response: =)

Name: Ryan the Wizard (Signed) · Date: 08/26/07 15:08 · For: Chapter One - Early Morning
I love the idea. Please update soonish! :P

Author's Response: Thanks! Updates are in the queue!

Name: Kay Loves You All (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 20:16 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
I love you. Like, seriously. I love this story. Puhlease update sooon.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! That made me laugh. Updates will be here as soon as my Beta finishes the chapter! Thank you again! <3

Name: MIzPotter7 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 17:51 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
it's really good! keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, MIzPotter7! I'm glad you like it! Updates will be here shortly.

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 07/30/07 19:30 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
James let Lily’s name slip, but I guess no one was around to hear it. Meeting the entire school could prove a little daunting, but for the ‘past’ trio it shouldn’t get to them too much.
Harry telling his story sounds a lot like him. He wouldn’t want to be revered as someone special, and telling the story the way he did, showed that. Great job on that.
I knew they would start to get very curious about things, and now they know how James and Lily died, the next logical question would be, how Sirius died.
I like Hermione and Lily wanting to do a little investigating. Knowing something is a little off about the ‘past’ trio, Hermione is going to look up Hogwarts history, and Lily will probably look up the whole Wizarding history for the past twenty odd years.
Can’t wait for the next chapter, I am really enjoying this story. Write fast.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks a million! I most definitely are going to honor you in the A/Ns of the next chapter! ANd #6 is almost done! Thanks so much, for the hunredth time!

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 07/30/07 19:29 · For: Chapter Four - Dudley?
Short chapter, but a good one. I wish Lily had been paying attention to Hermione’s explanation for Ginny being in the room with her.
The eating contest was really good, I’m not too sure Hermione would lean across a table to kiss a messy Ron, but it was funny.
I can’t wait to see what they all get up to next.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was going to have Lily listen to Hermione, but I just couldn't write Hermione's rambling, so I just figured I'd focus on something else.

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 07/30/07 19:29 · For: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating
Absolutely love the disclaimer at the top.
Lily seems to be having the most trouble seeping identities a secret. Knowing you are looking at and talking to the child you will have must be hard for her. All of them in the kitchen with the house-elves is just hilarious. The pouring of the tea and the way James and Sirius are talking is just too funny for words.
The wager seems a little extreme, even for those three. I know Ron can eat his weight but what about the other two?
Lily is getting more information than she wanted, I think. Knowing Harry will spend his entire life with the Dursleys will be rough on her. I wonder how long it will be before she cracks and lets everyone know who they are? Have you noticed the profusion of question marks throughout my reviews? Not all of them are questions I need answers to, just typing out my thoughts as I am reading.

Author's Response: Haha. I really liked writing this scene. I know it seems extreme, but just wait a little bit, and you shall see! I know Lily's get a bunch of scary info, but then again, it's good to know what happens to your son even if it's not good, right? Maybe. Maybe not. And it's fine - I like questions!

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 07/30/07 19:28 · For: Chapter Two - To the Future
Dumbledore’s future self sent him a Patronus back in time? From what we can glean from the books, I can imagine Lily taking the stand she did about having a child with James. But James’ reaction was priceless. I was laughing and had to stop reading to catch my breath.
Silencing all of them to stop the interruptions was actually kind of funny. Future Dumbledore is just as ambiguous as past Dumbledore. I am glad they will have their memories of the future wiped or taken. I would still like to think Lily would die for her son, but who knows what would happen if you knew it was coming.
Dumbledore thinks of everything doesn’t he? The note for Ron and Hermione and even the names being changed.
As for the w’s and the h—I found this story on a favourites list of one of my favourites, I want to see the story go all over the map with emotions and friendships between the trio from the past and the trio in this time. I would love to see Remus and the past’s trio’s reaction to him. I added you to my favourites and plan to add this story as soon as I am through reading. I also plan to check out the other stories you have written.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much once more! I'm glad you liked it this one. It's my favorite chapter - so far!

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 07/30/07 19:28 · For: Chapter One - Early Morning
It still seems strange to me that some seventh year students live by themselves. I consider Hogwarts basically junior high, and high school. And that makes them high school seniors, who in my opinion are too young to be living alone. Of course that could be the Southern in me.
James has a spare key to Lily’s apartment? Why? The letter to Lily was a little ambiguous, but then again it is Dumbledore writing it. James, being a pureblood, would be fascinated with a television, seeing as how he has probably never seen one before.
I am curious to see where this story goes, and I plan to give you lots of feedback. No reviews that are just ‘great job—update soon’ they don’t give you a sense of what your readers are thinking.
I have copied all of the chapters to a file on my computer to read and write a running review. I will post all of them at once, so they will look like I am speed-reading through the chapters.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! 1. I know that it seems weird that she's living alone, but I didn't want to get into that; but FYI, what I thought was that she was seventeen, and her parents had got her her own place a few minutes away for the summer to "try out" living on her own. But thanks for telling me. 2. Yes, James had a spare key; Dumbledore had contacted Mr. and Mrs. Evans and told them to give James one. Anyway, thanks again! Looking forward to reading your reviews!

Name: harryginnyforever (Signed) · Date: 07/27/07 11:55 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
Mione's going to figure it out if they give her enough clues...Professor Janice, 1977, Sirius, Drusleys...Honestly, I'm surprised she hasn't guessed yet. Maybe she will next chapter(hint, hint).

Author's Response: Haha, she will soon!

Name: midnitepotter (Signed) · Date: 07/26/07 23:45 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
I love the story and the plot and everything in this! Though I think that the trio might be acting a little too sloppily, leaving out trails like that...I'm sure Lily, James, and Sirius understand what situation they're in. But I can't wait to find out what Hermione does though! I'm looking forward to the Forbidden Forest though. :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know that they're being kind of sloppy, but I mean, if you had been sent 20 years into the future and met your child and his friends and were only really close with two boys who you found extremely annoying, it might be just a wee bit tricky to keep it up. But thanks, I will definitely keep that in mind! I've already written the chapter where Hermione... does what she does, but that's on my old computer, so I dunno if I'll be able to get it off. I'm getting my computer back today, so I'll be able to start working again! Thanks, once more!

Name: dracosgirl81193 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/15/07 14:14 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
I like the last line! I'm really excited to see what happens next. This is the first fic of this kind that I have read. I've read about the Trio or others from present day Hogwarts going back, but not about the Marauders coming forward. I'm excited

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it's kind of an original random thing that struck me once when I was reading a time-travel fic: "Wouldn't it be cool to have a story where Lily and James when forward in time instead?" Anyway, glad you enjoyed it! Thanks again!!

Name: lupinslover (Signed) · Date: 07/14/07 14:37 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
Hurry and wright more! it was good so far!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll write more when my computer is up and running again!

Name: Ginevra1988 (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 11:52 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
This is a really interesting fic. Don't give up on it (I want to know what happens next) and update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Updates will be coming soon after my computer gets fixed. (I HATE my mom's keyboard. Ugh.)

Name: jo_ride (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 22:51 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
what next?

Author's Response: Double post!

Name: jo_ride (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 22:50 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
what next?

Author's Response: Wait and see, my dear.

Name: Merope Gaunt (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 4:28 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
I love this story, but its been forever since it was updated! Please say you'll be submitting the next chapter soon!

Author's Response: Forever? Only about two weeks! Anyway, thank you for your review. Unfortunately, I had written about half of the next chapter and then my computer's harddrive blew out. when i get my computer fixed, it will be up son. I might wait until DH to submt it, though.

Name: lily_potter13 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 13:56 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
im just wonderin does harry and anyone find out who they really r ? keep writin u r goin into my favorites

Author's Response: Yes, they do! Thanks for your review and the add!

Name: MIzPotter7 (Signed) · Date: 07/02/07 14:26 · For: Chapter Five - Assigning and Rewinding
wow! this is really good! i can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! It's nice to see that you're enjoying it. <3

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