Reviewer: hope47
Date: 10/07/07 21:13
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

by the way its october, and you promised more by the end of september.

Author's Response: Aghhhh... I know! Sorry about that, things have been super crazy!

Reviewer: hope47
Date: 10/07/07 21:11
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

write more quickly.PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, i will!!!

Reviewer: GryfvenslythPUFF
Date: 10/06/07 10:03
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

I found you in Schmerg's reviews so I thought I'd give you a click. The banner looked interesting and I love stories with a plot like this. I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I'm glad you liked it! Keep reading. =)

Reviewer: lado88
Date: 09/28/07 17:29
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

update it amazing

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Igo Retla
Date: 09/21/07 15:17
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

Hey WA,

Did James really call Lily 'Lily'?

“Lily, could you please pass the carrots?” James asked. Lily nodded impatiently and passed him the bowl.

Sorry, I'm just getting caught up. Haven't been in MFF for a while. Thanks again!

Author's Response: Haha, no, he wasn't supposed to of. total screw up. But so many people have noticed, it's not really worth changing now... Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Phia Phoenix
Date: 09/20/07 3:48
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

Oh! I will kill her! How could she have the heart to recommend me this series when YOU HAVEN'T FINISHED IT YET?? *headdesk*

I'm sorry. I just cannot stand to wait! If I like a story, I want to read it all at once, and this is so good I don't want to stop reading!

I love your plot, very original and interesting. Your humour is fantastic too! I was laughing out loud a few times.

Your characterisation of Hermione and Ron is great, and you have the best characterisation of Harry that I've ever seen! he's just the most impossible character to characterise. I love the personalities you've built up for Sirius and James, very true to the characteristics we're shown in JKR's works, but also original. Lily is also very likeable.

My only criticism is your characterisation of Dumbledore- he just seems a bit disjointed, not quite enough flowery speech in his dialogue. However, I feel really bad saying that, because in one of my fics my characterisation of him was that bad that I had to scrap him from the story!

All in all, this story has definitely earned a favouriting. Well done!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry it's not finsiedh. I'm wroking on that. And thank you for your concrit. I will keep my Dumbeldore in mind!

Reviewer: The_Quibbler
Date: 09/16/07 19:20
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

keep writing!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Trust me, I am.

Reviewer: Gin_Wazlib
Date: 09/12/07 9:02
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

Now we're getting somewhere! I found this from being really creepy and looking at Red Haired Mom's faves list. We had some of the same stories listed, and I was looking for something new. The story idea is so interesting, I had to add it to see where you would take it.

Now I'm hooked. I can't wait until Hermione finds out who they are, I am excited to see if you do any sort of touching moment with Harry and Lily, and some bonding with James. I am assuming that their memories will be obliviated at the end, but it would be so bitter-sweet!

Are they ever going to meet Lupin?
“Lily, could you please pass the carrots?” James asked. Lily nodded impatiently and passed him the bowl.
Was this on purpose?
Can't wait for the next update, as I will be incopasitated for the end of Sep/ beginning of Oct!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! They are going to meet Lupin in a few chapters. I think it will be better for them to meet when they are revealed. And as for your second thing... oops. Thanks for pointing that out! Um... yeah, it was deliberate. I think it'll stay, because it's too late now! But thank you. I'll be much more careful in the future!

Reviewer: Soccer_rocks_likeHP
Date: 09/12/07 0:02
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

I can't wait to read on! This was well worth the wait. I liked the incident between the fifth year Erin and James, it was pretty entertaining. I loved the cliff hanger at the end! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Author's Response: thank you so very much!!!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 09/10/07 22:20
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

Sorry about that! You don't do anything with the tag, another Ravenclaw has to read and review, then tag another story. Then someone reviews it and tags another, etc.
I found it in the common room, and thought it sounded fun. :)
You have done an amazing job so far on this story by the way, and I just thought the other 'Claws who haven't read it... should.

Author's Response: Ohh, okay! I was just wondering if it was that Ravenclaw tag or another ting going around. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 09/10/07 18:15
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

I added it to my favourites 'cause it intrigued me since the first chapter. I really want to read some fluff and the marauders back to their time.
And, if it's not too much, I want you to update soon! This was nice, petty much worth the wait, but tooo much wait.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Ginny! I really appreciate it. =) Updates will be here by Halloween!

Reviewer: Amanda_Potter
Date: 09/10/07 17:41
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes


Author's Response: Hey, thanks!

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 09/10/07 15:01
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

Very good - always leave the audience wanting more. Keep writing - update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I take pride in my suspense! =)

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 09/10/07 9:40
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

Yay go Hermione! Update quickly. Such a cute story.

Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much!

Reviewer: Lady Tol
Date: 09/09/07 19:52
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

Why- I have read lots of time travel stories and this is the best one by far. It's also the most believable.
Where, What-I want to see Lily, James, and Sirius give Harry some guidance. I also think they should bond as a family.
Who- I think James and Sirius should meet Remus.
When-Since the first chapter
How- I was just browsing and came upon it.

Author's Response: Wow! I wouldn't say it's the "best one by far", but that made me squirm with embarassment! James and Sirius WILL meet Remus. It's coming up. Anyway, thank you so much for taking the time to do that! <3

Reviewer: Kay Loves You All
Date: 09/09/07 19:22
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

I LOVE YOU! Thank you soooo much!

Author's Response: you're.... welcome?

Author's Response: Haha, I love you too!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 09/09/07 12:13
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

This story has been made it, in the Ravenclaw Review Tag… You’re It!
Couldn’t help myself, it’s a great story, and I wanted the others who haven’t read it to come see.
On to the review for this chapter…
Why did I add it? Because it is very well written and the story is great!
Where do I want it to go? And What do I want to Happen? I want the trio from the past to tell the kids who they are and why they are there. Plus I want Harry to really get to know his parents and Sirius in the way he was denied as a child.
Whom I want to meet? I would like for the trio (past) to meet Draco and Snape. That way James and Sirius can have some fun!
When did I start enjoying the story? From the first word. You really are a talented writer, and you hooked me very quickly.
How I found out about MTC? Glancing through favorites of favorites. Did that make sense?
You did another great job here, and I enjoyed it very much. It did get a little static in the middle but not much. I am looking forward to the next chapter, and can’t wait to see whom you have for Sirius to date. See you at the next update…

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! I really appreciate all of your comments. =) P.S. what do I do with the tag now?

Reviewer: Abz
Date: 09/09/07 11:00
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

it's good to know that you'll be updating soon. i was getting excited when lily was about to sit with cho cos i wanted lily to find out about harry from cho which would have been funny. can u add some romance between harry and ginny? and a bit of trouble making from harry and james. hoopefully the hogsmeade weekend would have some humour. but the fic looks like its going well so far.

Author's Response: Thanks for your suggestion! Romance will develope slowly; I don't like to put in too much too fast. Trust me, much more humour is coming! Thank you again!

Reviewer: MIzPotter7
Date: 09/09/07 9:32
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

i'm going to answer your 5 W's and 1 H in order. lol.
WHY- i LOVE time travel fics
WHERE- i definetley want to see/read the looks on their faces when they figure it out
WHAT- i really haven't given much thought to it
WHO- death eaters(like a big attack or something)
WHEN- i started enjoying this the 1st chapter, because like i said i love time travel fics
HOW- i was looking through a friend's favorite and came across it.

i can't wait for the next chapter! plz hurry!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to fill that out! Updates will be here... soon?

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 09/08/07 23:31
Chapter: Chapter Six - Classes and Passes

OK, James called Lily by her name and nobody nonticed. other then that, very good chapter.

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