Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 02/01/07 20:45
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

hehe... this story is getting REALLY interesting, please write more, soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll be sure to update ASAP!

Reviewer: albvs
Date: 01/18/07 12:53
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

this is a very interesting story. im hoping that the next chapter come soon.

Author's Response: DOUBLE POST! Thanks again!

Reviewer: albvs
Date: 01/18/07 12:52
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

this is a very interesting story. im hoping that the next chapter come soon.

Author's Response: thanks.

Reviewer: PadfootBaby
Date: 01/14/07 18:21
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

Aww, really, no Snape? I was so looking forward to James' and Sirius' reactions to Snape actually teaching there... oh, well. THIS one is now my favorite chapter! I especially loved the food-eating contest and Lily's "slip"... almost had me worried for a second there. Will they ever reveal their true identities to Harry? (or, more importantly, will that potion wear off before they can? that would be a heck of a development...) Once again, just brilliant! I love your writing more and more, and this story almost reminds me of a humor fic I read once, but I can't think of the name... I like it a LOT. Update soon, Hannah!!!

~Trish~

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Trish! James, Lily, and Sirius will hear about Snape, but he won't (at least, for the main part of the story) be appearing in it. And yes, the trio shall learn about the trio... but not for a while. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: PadfootBaby
Date: 01/14/07 17:59
Chapter: Chapter Two - To the Future

"Si, Senor." ...Sirius giggled. *giggles* Cute Sirius. He's going to be a major part of this story's comic relief, I can tell already. And if only Dumbledore wasn't really dead yet... *sigh* This story wasn't at all what I expected it to be. It's so funny, and yet... not. I know it's bound to get a lot more serious, what with the Horcrux hunt and so forth, but for now... I really am in love with this story. I love your writing style, and how the plot is shaping out to be, and just... everything. I think I'll add this to my favorites! (and believe me, that is a major compliment to your writing, as only a select few greats actually get onto that list) Congrats, Hannah! ;) And now... on to Chapter Three!

~Trish~

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! *giggle* I'm glad you like Sirius. He's one of the awesomest characters to write. :) :) :)

Reviewer: PadfootBaby
Date: 01/14/07 17:36
Chapter: Chapter One - Early Morning

Woo, Sirius is here, too! Hooray! ;) This is just great, Hannah... Since I'm getting you for a beta, I was curious about your style, so I surfed around... and I love this one already! The plot thickens... o_O Keep up the good work!
Now, on to Chapter Two!

~Trish~

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Just Tink
Date: 01/14/07 11:19
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

very nice chapter! I particularly enjoyed the comment about Remus's 'time of month'- very funny! Lily's reaction to the Dursley's was also classic- 'contorted in horror' was a great way to describe it, and I could picture it perfectly. sort of a twisted grimace... but anyways, moving on. And the tea party was exactly the sort of thing I could picture sirius and James doing because, well... they're James and Sirius. The only thing is I would have liked is a bit more emotion from Lily when she sees Harry, because its her son, and I think that I personally would be a bit teary eyed at the whole process. Or just digusted because the kid was with James. That's just my opinion, though. Other than that, it was a great chapter- I'm looking forward to seeing more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. I'll keep the emotions thing in mind; all of the "what happened to James, Lily, and Sirius?" and the emotions, and all of that godo stuff is in the next chapter. Thanks again for your sweet review!

Reviewer: izzyblue24
Date: 01/09/07 19:29
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

That chapter was hilarious, I laughed out loud more than once! Update agin soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: lily rose
Date: 01/09/07 15:42
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

would you consider writing snape for beans of the baked variety? Cool, i love the idea!

Author's Response: Hmmm... nah, I can't write Snape for baked beans, efried beans, or black beans... meh. Sorry, lol. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Amanda_Potter
Date: 01/08/07 16:14
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

LOOOOOOOVE IT time of the month i shoould have waited till mine was over on my favorite list to bad 1 of my favorite writers deleted her storys man i sould realllllllllllllllllllllllllly wait till after the 20th to come on this it makes my ... mess up

Author's Response: Okay... ? I'm glad you liked it...

Reviewer: magikdude07
Date: 01/06/07 23:38
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

I like it...alot. Pleease continue and update really really quick! Good stuff!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: Augrey
Date: 12/30/06 9:01
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

This Story is really fantastic. I love the way that Lily is the one that keeps slipping up
UPDATE SOON

Author's Response: Double post! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Augrey
Date: 12/30/06 9:00
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

This Story is really fantastic. I love the way that Lily is the one that keeps slipping up
UPDATE SOON

Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it. I shall update fairly soon, hopefully!

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 12/27/06 11:54
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

I loved this chapter!!!!!
Sorry it took so long for me to read it. I got the notification e-mai (because of course this is on my favourites list--it's BRILLIANT) but what with christmas and everything I didn't have any spare time.
Now about the chapter: I LOVED IT. I CAN'T BELIEVE WHERE YOU LEFT OFF! I WANT MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! It's fine for waiting to review. I'm going to my granny's and I'm bringing my computer, and she doesn't have internet, so I'll get a LOT of story writing done... :) Thanks again!!

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 12/26/06 8:16
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

Great story! I liked the way Lily slipped up and said Sirius! and had to cover it up! It would be cool if they did find out who they were- and how they died. Just a few sugeestions. I also loved the bit about 'time of the month' very amusing. I think that sirius will win the 10 galleons, but probably choke during the process! Keep writng, i cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, the young trio shall find out who the old trio is... but not for a while, I believe. And in the next chapter (maybe next two) the old trio shall learn how they died. As for the ten galleons... wait and see....

Reviewer: helgaandgodric
Date: 12/25/06 12:46
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

Wow, very nice! My favorite character is Lily, she seems to pride herself on being more mature and more smart than the two time traveller's with her, and yet almost gives them away! Nice contrast. Although, I hope that Harry is just being nice because he's Harry, and not because he likes Lily (ewwwwww. sorry.)!

*This review brought to you in exchange for beta'ing my secret fic on such short notice*

Kate

Author's Response: *giggle* Haha! Thanks so much, Kate! No, I am NOT going to make Harry and Lily fall in love. *shudder* And you're welcome. Your story was totally awesome, anyway. :] Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: Soccer_rocks_likeHP
Date: 12/21/06 21:26
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

Great job! I love this fic. It's REALLY cool. It's Just amazing to see how it'd be with Harry's loved ones at his age, inhis time, going to school with him. Plus I got a few good laughs out of this too.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! *giggle* I'm happy you got such of a kick out of it! By the way, your penname is awesome.

Reviewer: mostly_harmless_66
Date: 12/21/06 8:57
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

Sorry, forgot to mention this before, but could I be in the A/N's or something? pleeeeeaaaaassse? It would make my day/year/decade/century!
~cassie~


Author's Response: Hmmm... I usually only do that for particularly touching reviews or something....

Author's Response: *realizes that that sounded awful* I just mean that I only pick a person per chapter, so maybe next time? Sorry for how rude that sounded, hope you don't take offense (I was having a bad day if you know what I mean). >.<

Reviewer: mostly_harmless_66
Date: 12/21/06 8:49
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

This is extremely well-written and funny; how long can it be before Sirius, James and Lily blow their covers? Obviously, the story wouldn't really work if they were exposed, but don't you think that Hermione would work it out in a flash after a few more slip-ups?
Anyway, great job and update soon!

~cassie~


Author's Response: They WILL blow their covers... but ATLEAST not until chapter 8... what fun would it be if they knew? Anyway, thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Ron x Hermione
Date: 12/20/06 23:45
Chapter: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

*Busts out laughing at Remus' time of the month* That was hilarious, my friend! Ooh, this was a long chapter, but very enjoyable!

I'm bored, so I'm going to write you a long review...

Hannah, do you know what would be hilarious? Is if Harry fell in love with Lily, er, I mean, Erin. Erin. LOL, but but that would be great! Or, if you have already decided to do that!
I only saw one mistake: Thought i should tell you. When you say Sirius didn't bother cutting his food - he just shove it in his mouth. James chopped everything into squares, and ate them by the hundreds. (And if the italics tags don't work, I'm terribly sorry!) It should be shoveD. With a D. Te he, please excuse my bet skills, I enjoy it. LOL.

I really liked this chapter Hanna,, and when Lily/Erin yelled our "Sirius!" and then turned it into, "Serious," that was great.

Oh darn... no Snape to wreak havoc on the new students....? Ah well..

I'm interested in seeing who wins the eating contest! Pleaaaase update soon, buddy! I'll be checking... and watching you... *looks around shiftily.

OK, doesn't exactly qualify as a S.P.E.W.-worthy review, but you know. I really liked it Hannah, this whole story so far. It's very original, and I really like the plot. Love James and Sirius' sense of humor! Keep it coming, you're hilarious!
~Lindsey :)

Author's Response: Hahaha. Thanks a ton! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for pointing out that error. :]

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