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Reviews For You Bust Slug

Name: Dark_Lords_Servant (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 17:30 · For: You Bust Slug
Very well-written! Me likie!


Name: FaunaCaritas (Signed) · Date: 12/31/06 21:12 · For: You Bust Slug
Hmmm, could use work. It was a fun idea and a nice reflection on Harry (the normal guy who beat the villain, etc.) The story itself, however, came across as a sequence of events without much filler. Further the antagonism between Kevin and his mother seemed unnecessary and remained unresolved.

Enjoyed the idea... are you going to continue this story?

Pax.


Name: SwitchBlade (Signed) · Date: 12/16/06 19:08 · For: You Bust Slug
Rather interesting little plot, it certainly brought a grin to my face when i finished reading.

Author's Response: Thanks...glad you liked it!


Name: St Jimmy the Sheep (Signed) · Date: 12/02/06 19:54 · For: You Bust Slug
awwww, that's cute...

Author's Response: Thank you!


Name: Trucker (Signed) · Date: 11/30/06 20:05 · For: You Bust Slug
You took a loose end and knitted it into a nice little story. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you!


Name: sunshine (Signed) · Date: 11/22/06 17:16 · For: You Bust Slug
This is great. I like the idea of a kid realizing that the world's idol is human, and even encourages him to break rules!
nice job : )

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!


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