Reviews For You Bust Slug
Reviewer: Dark_Lords_Servant
Date: 09/11/07 17:30
Chapter: You Bust Slug

Very well-written! Me likie!

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 12/31/06 21:12
Chapter: You Bust Slug

Hmmm, could use work. It was a fun idea and a nice reflection on Harry (the normal guy who beat the villain, etc.) The story itself, however, came across as a sequence of events without much filler. Further the antagonism between Kevin and his mother seemed unnecessary and remained unresolved.

Enjoyed the idea... are you going to continue this story?

Pax.

Reviewer: SwitchBlade
Date: 12/16/06 19:08
Chapter: You Bust Slug

Rather interesting little plot, it certainly brought a grin to my face when i finished reading.

Author's Response: Thanks...glad you liked it!

Reviewer: St Jimmy the Sheep
Date: 12/02/06 19:54
Chapter: You Bust Slug

awwww, that's cute...

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 11/30/06 20:05
Chapter: You Bust Slug

You took a loose end and knitted it into a nice little story. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 11/22/06 17:16
Chapter: You Bust Slug

This is great. I like the idea of a kid realizing that the world's idol is human, and even encourages him to break rules!
nice job : )

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!

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