Reviews For You Bust Slug
Reviewer: Dark_Lords_Servant
Date: 09/11/07 17:30
Chapter: You Bust Slug

Very well-written! Me likie!

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 12/31/06 21:12
Chapter: You Bust Slug

Hmmm, could use work. It was a fun idea and a nice reflection on Harry (the normal guy who beat the villain, etc.) The story itself, however, came across as a sequence of events without much filler. Further the antagonism between Kevin and his mother seemed unnecessary and remained unresolved.

Enjoyed the idea... are you going to continue this story?


Reviewer: SwitchBlade
Date: 12/16/06 19:08
Chapter: You Bust Slug

Rather interesting little plot, it certainly brought a grin to my face when i finished reading.

Author's Response: Thanks...glad you liked it!

Reviewer: St Jimmy the Sheep
Date: 12/02/06 19:54
Chapter: You Bust Slug

awwww, that's cute...

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 11/30/06 20:05
Chapter: You Bust Slug

You took a loose end and knitted it into a nice little story. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 11/22/06 17:16
Chapter: You Bust Slug

This is great. I like the idea of a kid realizing that the world's idol is human, and even encourages him to break rules!
nice job : )

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!

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