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Reviews For You Bust Slug

Name: Dark_Lords_Servant (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 17:30 · For: You Bust Slug
Very well-written! Me likie!

Name: FaunaCaritas (Signed) · Date: 12/31/06 21:12 · For: You Bust Slug
Hmmm, could use work. It was a fun idea and a nice reflection on Harry (the normal guy who beat the villain, etc.) The story itself, however, came across as a sequence of events without much filler. Further the antagonism between Kevin and his mother seemed unnecessary and remained unresolved.

Enjoyed the idea... are you going to continue this story?


Name: SwitchBlade (Signed) · Date: 12/16/06 19:08 · For: You Bust Slug
Rather interesting little plot, it certainly brought a grin to my face when i finished reading.

Author's Response: Thanks...glad you liked it!

Name: St Jimmy the Sheep (Signed) · Date: 12/02/06 19:54 · For: You Bust Slug
awwww, that's cute...

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: Trucker (Signed) · Date: 11/30/06 20:05 · For: You Bust Slug
You took a loose end and knitted it into a nice little story. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: sunshine (Signed) · Date: 11/22/06 17:16 · For: You Bust Slug
This is great. I like the idea of a kid realizing that the world's idol is human, and even encourages him to break rules!
nice job : )

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!

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