Reviews For Honor
Reviewer: tatjanablack
Date: 08/01/07 2:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hey Sly!

This was a story I enjoyed very much! I like the way you descreibe Bella and Naricssa. And Draco. You keep them so true to the charather. Ah okay I just think have a obession with your stories .

- Tatjana R, Black

Author's Response: *smiles*

Thanks for another lovely review. I'm really glad you like my stories.

Reviewer: pinktat
Date: 11/30/06 4:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

Cool. I am starting to like characters that I never gave a second thought to before. You are good at bringing them to life. I never thought I'd see the day when I'd say I think I like Bellatrix and Narcissa.

Author's Response: I love Bellatrix. Narcissa is a favorite of mine too. I think that's what makes them so easy for me to write. I'm always happy hear that I have softened people towards my characters. :D

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Ithinkrabis2people
Date: 11/21/06 8:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a really nice take on this part of the story, and overall, it was a pleasure to read! There are just a couple of things I wanted to bring up.

First of all, I was a bit confused about whose perspective this was. It starts out as Narcissa, but then the last paragraph is Draco's. I do that all the time, but still...

Oh, and the other thing! I thought that we could've seen a bit more emotion in a couple of places. Most of the time, it was great, but things like; " “Thank you for the vote of confidence, Mother,” Draco replied. "

I thought it would be nice to put something more in there, that's all!

Aside from those couple of things, I really enjoyed this! I particuarly liked the exchange between Narcissa and Bellatrix at the start, especially the question of what was making Bellatrix dizzy! ;D


Author's Response: Hehe! Thanks for your compliments.

So I switched POV. *Sighs* I actually didn't notice that I did it. This was a little hard to do anyway because you really need to see both Draco and Narcissa's POVs. It doesn't seem complete without the ending from Draco but it can't start in his POV because he's not event there. Hmmm...will have to think on that one.

For emotion. I think, in this particular scenerio, if you want emotion, you'll have to look to Narcissa. Draco and Bella are too busy planning the future to get overly upset about anything. Besides I don't think he would be that upset with his mother. He knows she's scared.

I particularly liked the what is making Bella dizzy conversation as well. For some reason, I think both she and Sirius would have missed alchol a great deal while they were in Azkaban. :D

Anyway, thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: _Lily__Evans_
Date: 11/20/06 17:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

Eek! I love this fic! I really like how you made Draco so sure of himself, when we know that later he crumbles under the pressure. It's also nice to see more interaction between the sisters because there is very little in the sixth book while they're with Snape. I am as always at awe with your work and can't help but secretly gawk at your talent in jealousy.
Tons of Slyth love
Lily

Author's Response: Yay! A review! *Huggles Lily*

Thanks so much for your compliments. Writing about the Black sisters is becoming second nature to me, I do it so much. And as you know, I absolutly love Bella anyway.

Thanks so much for being my first reviewer and for your lovely compliments. I love to hear that people enjoy my work. Tons of Slyth love, back! :D

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