Reviews For Learn to be Happy
Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 04/12/08 8:14
Chapter: Learn to be Happy

Nice to see that they can pause and be happy for a few moments. Why is there a third war? What happened to end the second? Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: FordPrefectZaphod
Date: 11/19/06 16:34
Chapter: Learn to be Happy

This is a nice little vignette of a group of people caught up in a war having a small pause. Despite your love of Sirius (being alive and therefore AU), his presence doesn't really add to the story and it might have worked better had it stuck to canon. This is my bias however.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Thanks for your criticism- I've been asking for it to make my writing better. Sincerely, On Angels Wings

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 11/19/06 12:58
Chapter: Learn to be Happy

This was reallyreally good. I love Sirius but I hate when he is alive because it took so long for me to get over the fact that he's dead. But overall I loved your story.

Author's Response: Yes, I wish he was still alive. I realize he should've been dead but I love him so much that I put him in my stories unconsciously. Oh well, he's there. I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reviewing! Sincerely, On Angels Wings

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