Reviewer: theempresslol
Date: 01/02/11 0:37
Chapter: Chapter 2

This was very different from what I usually read. Good different, too. I like the pairings and that you portrayed Lavender in a better light than JKR did in HBP. Good job :)

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 11/24/06 15:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

interestsing. It's different from what I'm used to reading, and I really liked it

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you liked the difference.

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 11/21/06 10:48
Chapter: Chapter 2

I love the determination you have given Lavender! Many people do think of her as a girly girl, but she had to have been put in Gryffindor for a reason! I enjoyed your story!

Author's Response: Thank you! It's so nice to hear these comments!

Reviewer: Krissa
Date: 11/19/06 5:59
Chapter: Chapter 2

Rock on Kate =D

Awesome story. I'm not into the Ron/Lav, but that's just me..
PS: they've rejected my story for the second time without a rejection letter... Wonder what's in their heads..

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm experimenting on my ships right now. I've an avid D/Hr shipper, though. Hope everything works out :D

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 11/18/06 21:05
Chapter: Chapter 2

I read this when it was just Chapter 1, but for some reason I forgot to review! It's such a cool idea, and I think it keeps getting better. It's hard for me to read the Harry/Hermione parts, though, because I really hate Harmony. I don't hate harmonians, just the concept, you know. But I like how you do Lavendar, because I think everyone really does think of her as a boy-and-make-up girl, and forgets she's a Gryffindor. Keep updating!

Author's Response: Ha ha, thanks! As of now, this story if completed. However, after the Gauntlet stuff, I might either continue it or write a sequel.

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 11/16/06 18:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ooh! Wow! I never thought about anyone writing a gauntlet fic about Lavender. This is a very interesting characterisation of her, and she sounds a lot less shallow than the version I've usually read. You use imagery and description well.

There are a few typos, though-- like it says "colorcolour" and "pajamaspyjamas" and "decent" instead of "descent." If you go back and edit that part of your story, it would make it a lot better and take some of the distraction away from it. Sorry to lapse into nitpicky-beta-freak mode! I really like your story, and I can't wait to read more of it!

Author's Response: ah! Shoot! thanks so much. i must have forgotten to delete a word when it was changed. *hits head* thanks!

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