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Reviews For A Dark Journey

Name: Mr B Natural (Signed) · Date: 02/22/14 1:03 · For: Chapter 1
Boy am I glad to see you. What's that? Whadda you mean who's talking!? That's me second note from the left! Mr B Natural the most natural B you will ever see!

Name: ronsbabiesmomma (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 3:43 · For: Chapter 1
i liked the story. but i think killing percy was much to rash. she could have stunned him or body binded him until he calmed down and listened. i am not saying it was bad, if that was what you as an author wanted to happen than kudos. i just think that was a bit of an extreme for ginny.

Name: Lusea (Signed) · Date: 10/27/08 1:44 · For: Chapter 1
Hmmmm . . . I liked it overall, but Ginny, a Death Eater, it's not intuitive, but you made a good case for it.

Name: misspoppy800 (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 17:18 · For: Chapter 1
Quite an interesting story. Rather intreguing. Well done.

Name: Vedic Priestess (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 9:34 · For: Chapter 1
Well, it's really imaginative.

Name: miss_potter_obsessed (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 5:31 · For: Chapter 1
Wow thats different. But good different, not starnge diferrent! lol Neville and Lavender, I never thought I'd see that one. Maybe it's not so strange when you think about it! Kep the ficcies coming! : )

Name: GK_Lovecraft (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 16:26 · For: Chapter 1
Not bad. I think I would have detailed the final battle a little better and elaborated more. Killing Percy is always a good thing. If you read the interview that was just posted with Chris Rankin (the guy who plays him in the movies - although you probably already know that much), I think he would have appreciated it. He wants Percy to die a horrible death.

Author's Response: Lol, thanks. I can't stand Percy. It was kind of hard to fit details about the final battle into this particular Gauntlet challenge, though. The Gauntlet is not an easy thing. :) Thanks for the review! <3, Jenn

Name: Ron x Hermione (Signed) · Date: 11/22/06 14:26 · For: Chapter 1
I loved this story! It was very well-written and imaginative. Completely shocked that Ginny would do all of this for the entire Wizarding World! You portrayed her character perfectly in my opinion. Just thought that i would review your story since you're beta-ing mine! Very good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad you thought that I kept Ginny in character! <3, Jenn

Name: crazy_purple_hp_freak (Signed) · Date: 11/19/06 15:04 · For: Chapter 1
*has come to review fellow Ginny Weasley Gauntleteer...* :p

I love the way you've portrayed Ginny's character, especially the scene with Percy. The build-up in this scene is very intense, and Percy's character is so annoying that I can really justify killing him off... *hides*

I also think you write action really well! The part about the dragon and the black box was really clear to follow, and fast-paced, so well done. :)

Just two little nitpicks: “Avada Kadavra!” in the Percy scene, should be "Avada Kedavra" And the Headquarters for the Order is no. 12 Grimmauld Place not 13.

Finally, I *love* the last line! It kind of adds a slightly darker twist to the 'happy' ending.

Sometimes in the middle of the night, she would find herself back in the middle of the cold, dark lake, tempted to let herself slip off the door.

A lovely, slightly poetic ending to a really good story.


Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hmm... I know that it's 12, it must have been a typo. I know how to spell Avada Kedavra too. Curse stupid typos! *Goes to fix* Thanks for pointing those out. The dragon and black box scene was really fun to write. It's probably my favorite part. I'm glad you liked the Percy scene too. I hated it at first, but it's starting to grow on me. I'll be going to check out your Ginny Gauntlet entry as soon as I'm done writing my weekly drabble challenge sumission, so expect a review. :) <3, Jenn

Name: Cheshlin (Signed) · Date: 11/17/06 22:34 · For: Chapter 1
I like the way you portrayed Ginny. I have never thought she would be capable of the killing curse though, especially against her brother, but....I still enjoyed reading your story. I do think Ginny would have the bravery and courage to join the Death Eaters as a spy. I'm glad she was able bring them down! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I kind of agree with you about the killing curse, but... I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks again.

Name: Schmerg_The_Impaler (Signed) · Date: 11/16/06 15:55 · For: Chapter 1
Wow, Jenn! I'm glad you were able to work with using Ginny as a Death Eater. I thought the scene where she killed Percy was very powerful, and the plot was great. It seemed more like a story that had been carefully plotted out than one that was written bit-by-bit according to prompts. I wish it hadn't been so short, though, because I would have liked to see more details on how she got Draco to marry her and on Neville and Lavender's life in hiding. I didn't want the story to end!
I also liked the closure you gave the story with the epilogue-- and naturally, I'm glad that she got back together with Harry!

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you, Schmerg, for your wonderful review! I am so glad you liked it! I owe a big thanks to Anasuya for helping me with the Percy scene, it wasn't nearly as good before I got her. I promise, next time I write a story I'll put in more detail! Thanks again! <3, Jenn

Name: Zacko Borni (Signed) · Date: 11/15/06 14:15 · For: Chapter 1
Hey Jenn!!!!!!! I really, really loved this story! It was so cool and fun to read! I hope you win first place!

Author's Response: Ah, well if it isn't my good friend Zacko! Thank you, thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! However, as fun as this was to write and as flattered as I am by your comments, I doubt it will win anything. It's really not much compared to some of the other entries, which are great. Thanks again!

Author's Response: I meant "as flattered as I am by your comments."

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