that was really good. u should definitely do a sequel!
Aww. That's really sweet. Good-natured bickering is the best cure for any heart-ache. ;D
That was so sad, but I had to smile with Lily in the end =] , becuase I liked it when they smiled at eachother
wow this is a good story
Ohhh, how sweet. I was nearly in tears with the funeral part, so sad. well done, 10/10
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. I have to say I absolutly love it, it seems just the thing James and the marauders would do. I'll def. be looking to see if you have any longer stories and if not please write one, I'm sure it would be awsome!! great writer you are! xo
Great I loved it! I'd love to read more of ur stories!! ~Ginny~
...Oh wow. That was amazing. It made me cry. Your portrayal of James is really accurate in my opinion, and is exactly how I envision James to be. Very moving. I Love the part with the marauders at the end and how they try to make things better for Lily. True Gryffindor spirit I tell you. Very, very good. Fantastic as usual. Can't wait for more or your stuff!
aww so cute and really sad update soon please!!
Wow. This was very, very, very good. It was sad in the beginning, romantic in the middle, and sweet and humourous in the end; a potent combination. Kudos!!!
This is a really good story...quite emotional.
I really liked it, but it would be awesome if there was a sequel to it!
That was a very sweet moment for James and Lily. It's nice to see James acting more mature, particularly in the face of a tragedy, and being strong for Lily. It was a good way to address the first war with Voldemort and its impact on this generation, as well as give James and Lily that poignant connection. You did a great job showing Lily's emotions about the loss of her friend. Nice job! ~Gina :)
That was a really lovely story! A definite 10/10 =)