I like how it's kind of journal-like. Good start.
POST MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
Great story! I thought it could have been longer, if you'd wanted to go into more detail. If you were worrying about length, it was fine. It was great the way it was, but I would like to here about what happened after the baby. If you want to expand, please write a sequel! I'd like to read one, at any rate.
This was great, how they battled through. The switching enchantment was a brilliant idea. I wish Arthur hadn't been killed by Malfoy though. Oh, and early on you said Kingsley Shacklebolt was killed and later he's holding order meetings, you might like to alter some things, perhaps he came back as a ghost? It'd be good if loads of old friends could come back as ghosts, but I guess they'd not want to hang around forever after helping win the war. Surely they could invent a spell to help ghosts cross over. Sorry I've got off track. Great fic, gives a sense of hope.
Is that the end of the story? Please say no!
I hope this isn't the end... but aww, what a cute chapter!! poor remus, he's too noble. and teddy sirius lupin!!! thats way better than albus severus.... lol, anyway, if its not the end keep writing!!
NO! please tell me your writing another to follow! no i was soo hooked!!!
Yesssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol so cute!
Yesssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol so cute!
Yesssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol so cute!
Professor Tonks? it has a weird ring to it but i like it.
Professor Tonks? it has a weird ring to it but i like it.
Professor Tonks? it has a weird ring to it but i like it.
Professor Tonks? it has a weird ring to it but i like it.
Oh please please please please PLEASE write another chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens so please hurry up!
Oh please please please please PLEASE write another chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens so please hurry up!
hurry up & finish the damn story! DID HE BITE HER OR NOT!!!
