Reviewer: ni ni
Date: 01/11/07 15:59
Chapter: Chapter 2

are you going to write more?

Author's Response: Am I to assume that you liked it, then? Yes, there is more to come. Don't worry, I will notify you when it's over. That, or you can just check and see if it says Complete: Yes in the description. Thank you for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Ligeia
Date: 12/28/06 21:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love it! Please keep going! :-D

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: soccerlover
Date: 12/27/06 20:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

please finish it is great

Author's Response: Several chapters to go, no need to be impatient. :) I will update when the queue opens again after new years. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Layhe
Date: 12/23/06 13:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Interesting, really. Can't wait till next chapter :)
Can't stand Ginny in this one, she's so.. possessive, yuck.

Author's Response: You shouldn't hate Ginny too much. I see her as a very strong character. She and Harry were broken up, then he was out looking for Horcruxes for a year, and now she wants him to herself. I'll bet she has an incredible libido as well, heh...

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it, and I'll be updating when the queue opens again. :)

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 12/12/06 6:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hmmm ... good twist ...

Yes, I know that almost half of the chapter is from Bohemian Rhapsody (Ch. 2). But that, of course, didn't stop me from reading this ...

This chapter is good, with an interesting cliff-hanger at the end. I wouldn't call the cliffy jaw-dropping ... because I could make out it was Harry.

I like how cool Draco is, that's somewhat IC. But, I don't visualise him being completely cool at the prospect of an Azkaban life term (or worse). What I mean to say is, it would have sounded more believable if Draco was atleast a little bit afraid of what was to come, at the very beginning of the trial.

Despite the slight OOCness, I like this chapter, and am eagerly looking forward to the next one, whenever you get the time to update.

- Mini.

Author's Response: Wow, I've been bad at responding to my reviews lately...

Thank you for remaining a faithful reviewer! *hugs* I'm glad you liked the chapter, despite having read half of it before, and despite the OOCness. As for that, Draco has not yet admitted to himself that he's nervous. You will see later how nervous he really is. And at the moment, being somewhat of an aroganr arse, he really thinks he's going to pull it off.

Thanks again for reviewing. I'll be updating once the queue opens again after the Holidays. Merry Christmas! :)

Reviewer: Wizardlicious
Date: 12/11/06 16:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh I like this version! You write very well and I adore your fanfictions!

Author's Response: Glad you like it, and thanks for your review and the compliment! :)

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 12/05/06 7:35
Chapter: Prologue

Cool prologue, Maia!

I did get a 'New Story At' e-mail when this story had been validated, but I decided to read it later. Now that I've read it, I'm here. I think I've talked too much ... *gets on to real reviewing*

First, I like the way you start off with some of the last paragraphs of Chapter One of Bohemian Rhapsody. It's a fitting opening to an action-packed chapter.

Its over, Draco, said a familiar voice. Draco sat up and looked up into the now unmasked face of Severus Snape. We dont have much time. When I read this paragraph, I thought you were going to make Snape sound too good - and completely OOC. Of course, I was proved wrong by the end of the chapter. I like the way you make a grey character out of him and keep him IC and believable at the same time. By the way, I don't think I've read a convincing and obvious Grey Snape before. Good job on his character.

I'm interested in seeing how you can continue the very in-character Harry/Draco interactions that I saw in Bohemian Rhapsody. Good luck with this story! *adds story to favourites*

*glares at that flame* I wish people would actually pay attention to the rating and warnings, and not review for the sake of flaming ...

- Mini.

Author's Response: *rolls eyes* Tell me about it. Alas, not all reviewers are as wonderful and constructive as my little Mini. ;)

Thank you for once again submitting an excellent review to my story. Imagine that you could actually write something that long for a prologue, lol!

I'm glad I managed to keep Severus in character. It's the hardest thing in the world, I think... I always have so much trouble with him. I'm not Vindictus Viridian, unfortunately. Draco has always been my work of art.

Thank you for reviewing, darling! Your reviews are always equally appreciated. *hugs you, just because*

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 12/05/06 7:35
Chapter: Prologue

Cool prologue, Maia!

I did get a 'New Story At' e-mail when this story had been validated, but I decided to read it later. Now that I've read it, I'm here. I think I've talked too much ... *gets on to real reviewing*

First, I like the way you start off with some of the last paragraphs of Chapter One of Bohemian Rhapsody. It's a fitting opening to an action-packed chapter.

Its over, Draco, said a familiar voice. Draco sat up and looked up into the now unmasked face of Severus Snape. We dont have much time. When I read this paragraph, I thought you were going to make Snape sound too good - and completely OOC. Of course, I was proved wrong by the end of the chapter. I like the way you make a grey character out of him and keep him IC and believable at the same time. By the way, I don't think I've read a convincing and obvious Grey Snape before. Good job on his character.

I'm interested in seeing how you can continue the very in-character Harry/Draco interactions that I saw in Bohemian Rhapsody. Good luck with this story! *adds story to favourites*

*glares at that flame* I wish people would actually pay attention to the rating and warnings, and not review for the sake of flaming ...

- Mini.

Reviewer: Marie_606
Date: 11/27/06 12:12
Chapter: Prologue

next one please!!!!

Author's Response: Working on it. ;) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Layhe
Date: 11/10/06 13:54
Chapter: Prologue

interesting opening, I'm waiting for something more, it leaves me hungry for more ;)
Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it!

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