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Name: Ghoul In Pajamas (Signed) · Date: 11/13/07 16:32 · For: Chapter 6
wow...major cliffie!
i must first say i very much enjoyed this story!

Severus finally pulled through for Draco! I'm curious about what made him come around. I like Narcissa's speech. She always seemed to be sort of in the background when Lucius was around, but now she's taken her maiden name back and she's standing on her own two feet. : )

Author's Response: Even after HBP, I was one of those people who were absolutely convinced that Snape was good. Of course he came around! :) As for Narcissa, I always did feel like Lucius was holding her back, and that there was more to her than the sour-looking woman first described in GoF. As much as I dislike Bellatrix, I rather like Narcissa. A mother's love always deserves respect.

Name: Ghoul In Pajamas (Signed) · Date: 11/13/07 16:09 · For: Chapter 4
Snape's reaction was interesting. Of course, he doesn't know if Voldemort is in power and what story Draco has told. I would assume that once he saw Harry, Mr. Weasley, and possibly other Order Members like Kingsley in the audience he would have told them the truth.

Harry will help Draco out of the mess. I doubt he will want to admit that they spent the night together. Maybe he'll play the Harry Potter-war hero card again.

"The guard can see us through the mirror," That was funny. : )

Author's Response: I think Snape was a bit confused. He's spent months in Azkaban with no one to talk to and no information, so he can't really be sure if things are as they seem. He's also a little bit paranoid...

Ah, yes, the hero-card... Harry feels wholly uncomfortable with that, as he should, being, you know, Harry.

Thanks once again for reviewing!

Name: Ghoul In Pajamas (Signed) · Date: 11/13/07 15:40 · For: Prologue
A Sequel! Or rather an alternative ending, but Draco doesn't die, so I'm happy. I just found out about this while perusing the Excerpts of Murtlap page, how did I not know about it from reading Bohemian Rhapsody? okay, on to the actual review....

I like the story you made up about Snape saving him, and blaming it on Bellatrix, though it does seem an awful way for Bella to die.

Oops I clicked the button too early...I love that the beginning starts the same as the other story ends, it gives it continuity and makes it feel like he lived, rather than you just decided to bring him back from the dead. ; )

Author's Response: Glad to see you here too! :)

I suppose it's rather obvious that I don't care much for dear old Bella. Her death here wasn't as cool as in DH, but I think she deserved to die forgotten and alone, never to be found. *hates Bella*

Thank you for reviewing, I'm really happy you liked this one too!

Name: Ghoul In Pajamas (Signed) · Date: 11/13/07 15:34 · For: Prologue
A Sequel! Or rather an alternative ending, but Draco doesn't die, so I'm happy. I just found out about this while perusing the Excerpts of Murtlap page, how did I not know about it from reading Bohemian Rhapsody? okay, on to the actual review....

I like the story you made up about Snape saving him, and blaming it on Bellatrix, though it does seem an awful way for Bella to die.

Name: Dumbledore Prince (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 7:44 · For: Chapter 6
Ooh, a cliffhanger! You're evil, aren't you, Maia? ;)

I like the way Snape is getting more IC and mysterious. My, my, what an enigma ...

Poor Harry, he's caught in such a fix. If he discloses his relationship with Draco, he'll be at the risk of losing close friends, and if he doesn't, he'll be more miserable than ever. Anyway, I'm hoping for Draco's acquittal ...

Author's Response: Mini! Yay! *hugs*

Yeah, I couldn't help it... Anyway, it was the only place it made sense to cut it. ;P

I'm wondering what I'm going to do about Snape after this. Originally, he wasn't going to be so important, but the bunny ran away and I was forced to follow. >.> This was just going to be 10 chapters or so. Now I have 9 written, and I feel like I'm not even half-way through the plot. So much for careful planning...

I guess you'll just have to stick around and see what happens to Draco... ;) Next update will probably be in about two weeks, if things go according to plan. Now that I have two slash stories I have to update them every other time. Can't have two chapters in the same cat in the queue at the same time.

Thanks as always for reviewing! :)

Name: snapefan2007 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 15:26 · For: Chapter 6
dun dun dun... i liked this chapter even if it is a little short. i don't mind the shortness at all, it just gives us something to look forward to! and i will be looking forward to the next chapter. keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. :) Thank you for reviewing!

Name: La_Rubinita (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 13:08 · For: Chapter 6
AHH! Please hurry and update. That was such a teaser!! Though I do understand why you left it off where you did. A little (or a BIG) cliffie never killed anyone. Anyways, that was wonderful, and I can't wait for more. I did a happy dance when I saw the update notification in my inbox. I love this story. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Sorry about the teasy cliffhanger... I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks so much for reviewing, these little things make my day!

Name: Sing Hallelujah (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 11:15 · For: Chapter 6
cliffhanger, much?

Loved it neway XD


Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about dear old Cliff. He forced his way in there, because otherwise the chapter would have been too long. Thanks for reviwing!

Name: shit_son (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 10:03 · For: Chapter 6
You must update soon!
I need to know what Harry says!!
Pleeease, please, pretty please with a cherry on top update soon?

Author's Response: I'll see what I can do. I do have another WIP in this cat which I must also prioritise, but I'll try to update as soon as I can! Just remember, the mods have just as mch to say about when I get to update as I do..

Name: xo_DracoHarry_ox (Signed) · Date: 10/14/07 7:30 · For: Chapter 5
Please Continue this story!!!

Author's Response: Working on it. :)

Name: La_Rubinita (Signed) · Date: 10/11/07 15:13 · For: Chapter 5
Good chapter. It was Snape, wasn't it... Anyways, update soon. I love this story.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I'm afraid I cannot update until the other story I have in the queue has been validated. If you're curious as to who Remus' other lover was, you should read that when it's been approved, though. I will update this story once that one has been accepted.

Name: snapefan2007 (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 15:50 · For: Chapter 5
do you have any plans to update soon? anyways, i reread what you have already though and i still like it. anywho, i can't wait for more! hope all is well.

Author's Response: All is fine, thank you. I will update when I can. Right now, I unfortunately have another story in the queue in the Romance category, which means I won't be able to update until that has been validated. Thanks for your patience, and thanks for reviewing, and for still liking my story despite the wait.

Name: RachelR82 (Signed) · Date: 09/23/07 11:01 · For: Chapter 5
Oh wow oh wow oh wow. I am so glad you are continuing on with this story! And that kiss! Love it. Great job so far, please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update as soon as I can. :)

Name: Dumbledore Prince (Signed) · Date: 09/22/07 3:53 · For: Chapter 5
*cough* Even though Remus is being vague about it, it's obvious there was something going on between him and Sirius sometime in the past. I wonder if Harry will have a longer discussion about that and his own, confusing relationship.

I guess this is one of those filler chapters, then. You've done a good job in making it interesting enough to hold the reader's attention. I'm the kind of writer who prefers to cram lots of plot development in one single chapter, so I usually pay very less attention to filler chapters when I'm reading them. I wonder if you're dropping some hints in the very last line of this chapter ...

Author's Response: Yay! Review from you!

Well, yes, Remus admitted to as much. But there was someone else... You'll find out all about it in another fic I'm posting eventually. :)

You could call it a filler, I suppose. I dunno, I'm all into dialogue and character developement, and I don't need a lot of action and huge amounts of plotpoints to do that, really, and I felt like the chapter was long enough as it was, but I never thought of it as a filler chapter.

Thank you for a lovely review, as always! :)

Name: Astronomygirl_101 (Signed) · Date: 09/22/07 3:10 · For: Chapter 1
LOL.Well, no actually, its' more like: chuckle, chuckle, chuckle. But all the same, that last part, really mad me laugh. Oooh, that was good. :p

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. thanks for reviewing!

Name: Astronomygirl_101 (Signed) · Date: 09/22/07 3:03 · For: Chapter 1
LOL.Well, no actually, its' more like: chuckle, chuckle, chuckle. But all the same, that last part, really mad me laugh. Oooh, that was good. :p

Name: Astronomygirl_101 (Signed) · Date: 09/22/07 2:56 · For: Prologue
this chapter was suprisingly short. At first i thouht i had just read it too fast, but then i realized that it was no mistake. Though i m curious as to why you made harry and draco... well, you know, in the first chapter.

Author's Response: Well, it was the prologue; those are usually shorter, anyway.

Do what?

Thanks for reviewing!

Name: snapefan2007 (Signed) · Date: 09/21/07 22:31 · For: Chapter 5
wow, what a story... i can't say i've ever thought about this happening or been on the harry/draco ship, but i do think that they could somehow put their differences aside and become at least friends. anyways, keep up the good work, i like the story.

Author's Response: Thank you! Im glad someone who doesn't ship Harry/Draco can like it. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Name: Draco_Malfoys_Gf (Signed) · Date: 08/31/07 12:57 · For: Chapter 1
that is really good! :]

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Name: Dumbledore Prince (Signed) · Date: 08/29/07 7:39 · For: Chapter 4
Looks like there is a way out for Draco ...

That was a good chapter, Maia. I liked the not-so-sudden twist near the end when there seemed to be a way out for Draco (thanks to Harry). Snape's non co-operation with anyone was interesting to read, but I must admit, I found it somewhat odd that Snape's mannerisms would be so ... defeated. Even when he is (deliberately) vague, we have seen the canon Snape asserting himself without sounding aloof in an obvious manner.

While the possible OOCness bothered me a little, good dialogues did make up for it. I grinned when I read this sentence ...

“The mighty Malfoy is apologising to me?” said Harry, a soft smile curling over his lips.

Author's Response: To be honest, I wasn't quite happy with my characterisation of Snape here myself. I find it relatively painless to write him from his own POV, but as a side character like this I just find myself getting confused. I've got canon Severus, and VVs Severus and my own Severus, and I hardly know which is which. What I was trying to do was show that he'd pretty out of it. No one has given him any information, he has no clue what impact what he says might have on the case, he doesn't even know if the war is over or who's in charge of the Ministry. He's been in Azkaban for half a year, which feels a lifetime, I'm sure, and suddenly he's placed in a chair and asked a bunch of questions, and he doesn't know how to answer.

I'm glad you still like the story, despite my inability to write a believable Severus. Doesn't help that my beta has temporarily gone missing... That's the bad thing about the Internet; you never know what's happening to people.

Thank you so much for still reviewing; your reviews are the bright point of any day I receive them. :)


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