Reviewer: TaiYoukai
Date: 03/26/08 15:33
Chapter: Chapter 8

Wow, this story is really intense. I mean, just wow. I'd really like it if you would let me know when you update this one...along with you're companion piece to this, Moonstruck.

Author's Response: If you favourite it you'll get e-mails notifying you of when it's updated automatically. :) I'm glad you liked it, though! And thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Sammyboy2007
Date: 03/08/08 15:41
Chapter: Chapter 8

Awesome! Much kudos ... much better ending than boheminian rhapsody. =D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: daniel_girl
Date: 03/08/08 0:25
Chapter: Chapter 8

This is soooo good!! It's going in favorites!!! Please write more!!!!

Author's Response: Working on it. :) Thanks for the review, the fav and for enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Koyuki Sakuya
Date: 03/07/08 11:55
Chapter: Chapter 8

it's been a long time since i've read a great hp/dm story

Author's Response: Hope that meant you think this is a great hp/dm story. :) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: JudithSykes
Date: 03/01/08 18:15
Chapter: Chapter 8

A very interesting AU. The schism of character relationships is intruiging. Deffinately a new prespective from the usually utopian view of homosexuality within the wizarding world.

Author's Response: Heh, I get so very sick of that idea... How on earth could a society that is so much more old-fashioned than our own, as well as very obviously based around family values, be that accepting of homosexuality? And in which case, why haven't we seen it in the books already? To put another spin on it, wouldn't Dumbledore have been openly gay if such were indeed the case? No, it makes no sense to me... Besides, one of the most interesting parts of writing slash, as well as one of the most challenging, is to portray exactly that forbidden love in an as un-clichéd manner as possible. That is just my humble opinion, of course. :)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 02/25/08 12:30
Chapter: Prologue

Oh! I just read Bohemian Rhapsody last night and I am quite surprised now! Draco's not dead....! Well, this is good for Harry, I guess. *snickers at hilarious Draco/Harry love scene*

Author's Response: Well, keep reading. :)

Reviewer: Angelow
Date: 02/24/08 17:11
Chapter: Chapter 8

No, don´t end it there!
Please update!!!!

Author's Response: It's not ending there. :) But I can't update at present because of the current situation with the database. No more submissions to the queue are permitted at the moment. I'll update again when that's dealt with. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: SavagelyRavished
Date: 02/16/08 0:13
Chapter: Chapter 8


im not very good with reviews and what not.

but i do like the plot to your story
and would love if u continued it


Author's Response: It will be continued, don't worry! :) Thank you for reviewing, and I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: cwoods09
Date: 01/27/08 20:52
Chapter: Chapter 8

Heart wrenching! You're probably one of my favorite writers, and I hope you update soon! Will Ron come arround, or is Harry destined to loose his best friend?!

Author's Response: We'll just have to see, won't we? ;) Thanks for reviewing.

Author's Response: And thanks so much for the compliment! I'm very happy you like the story.

Reviewer: snapefan2007
Date: 01/24/08 22:22
Chapter: Chapter 8

great chapter, i can't wait to read more! oh, and i knew ron would act that way because he is a slimy git.

Author's Response: Don't be mean to poor Ron! He's just acting like most guys would if they found out that their best friend cheated on their sister with another guy. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: teryakinoodle
Date: 01/24/08 17:43
Chapter: Chapter 8

Wow! I've been watching this fic for a while and this chapter really got me! I could really feel the emotions between Harry and Ron. I'll say it again: wow!

Author's Response: Thank you! What else does one say to that? I'm glad I pulled it off all right. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ginny_Alamalexia
Date: 01/24/08 3:30
Chapter: Chapter 8

Ahh, this was a very emotional chapter, I loved it. Poor Harry! I wonder where Harry will go... to Draco perhaps? ;) Hopefully, at least Hermione will support Harry, he needs his best friends...

Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like! I do plan on having Hermione stand by Harry, if that's not too much of a spoiler. He IS her best friend, and she does care for him, and is a far more tolerant person than Ron is. Besides, she does have a knack for speaking for the author, right? ;) Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 01/23/08 18:34
Chapter: Chapter 8

I know that his chapter shouldn't be funny, but I laughted quite a bit while reading it all the same. I'm not sure what I found funny, perhaps it was a nervous disbelieving laughter, like Ron said, as if it weren't bad enough that Harry betrayed them all, he did it with Malfoy. Now I'm worrying for Ginny, what will the next chapter hold? Is she going to be able to deal with this? I've thought up three reactions she could have, She'll break down, she'll hex him into oblivian, or she'll be really understanding and surprise everyone by trying to help Harry persuade everyone like an unconditional friend. Personally I opt for plan B, hexing him. Not what I'd do of course, but I'm not a firey Weasley however much I wish I were. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the chapter. I know, poor Ginny! Don't quite know what I'll do with her yet... I've never been very good at writing Ginny. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 01/23/08 16:22
Chapter: Chapter 8

Wow. I mean, wow. That was pretty intense (and totally worth the wait). I'm loving this, but I think the Draco/Harry dialogue could be a little more...hmmm... lively? Perhaps?

"I thought maybe you’d support me,” he said hoarsely. “I thought it wouldn’t matter that he’s a boy, or that he’s who he is. I thought that you’d trust my judgement, even if you didn’t understand why, because we’re like family. Because I love you like my brother and sister, and I thought you loved me too.” He picked up his glasses off the floor and put them on. Then he wiped some blood from his nose with his sleeve. “I guess I was wrong.”

I loved that paragraph. Made my heart twist up all funny-like.

In short, I'm still loving this story, and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you're still reading, even if I took a while with the chapter, and that you enjoyed this chapter as well. That paragraph is probably one of my favourites, too. :) Thanks for a lovely review!

Reviewer: angelcat
Date: 01/02/08 11:54
Chapter: Chapter 7

awwwwwwww how cute but damn draco is so ooc but i like it hes sweet

Author's Response: You think he's OOC? Maybe you should read the prequel, that explains a lot about Draco's current personality.

Reviewer: A H
Date: 12/26/07 18:25
Chapter: Chapter 7

Wow, 'mazing story. The way Harry and Draco interact is so subtle, but still gets the point across. I'm glad that you don't get to graphic; they're few sexual HP fics I can read without being completely disgusted or forgetting the main story. (Not just slash... the characters just aren't adults to me :P)

I think that although most characters were realistic, Remus was definatley the best characterized. He had few lines, but I could honestly see him acting that way. Upon finding the fandom of Harry Potter, I think I've come to imagine him as gay too, so the way you slid that in the story was brilliant. I think I'm going to check out Severley Moonstruck.

I hope that this isn't the end, although it would be a good ending. The only critical thing I would point out though, is that I doubt Harry or Draco would've been so willing to get 'personal' in the Ministry; especially with the possibility of someone coming along to clear out his cell, and looking through the window.

Other than that I honestly loved this fic, and I can't wait to read the next installment.

Author's Response: It's not over, no. I haven't heard from my beta in a while, though, which is why I haven't updated. I have two more chapters written.

I really like writing Remus, which is probably why his characterisation turns out so well. I think he's become my new favourite character. :) Somehow I can relate to him much better than to any of the others.

Yes! Do read Severely Moonstruck! I actually like that one better than this one... More fun to write. I think I'm growing a little bored with Harry/Draco... It's ben my OTP since I started reading fanfiction when I was fourteen. I guess I just feel like it's time to move on.

I'm glad you liked it, though. Thank you so much for your review!


Reviewer: Secret shadows
Date: 12/10/07 13:12
Chapter: Chapter 7 Interesting. I really liked it, even though I'm shivering now. Lol.

Author's Response: I hope shivering is a good thing? Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: snapefan2007
Date: 12/03/07 20:42
Chapter: Chapter 7

great chapter! i am glad that Draco got off! yay! i hope to read more soon! keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks! Me too... Then again, what kind of writer would I be if he hadn't? I hope I managed to create a little bit of suspense, anyway. :P Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 11/30/07 12:41
Chapter: Chapter 7

Eek! I'm so happy right now! Fantastic chapter, really. I think it's my favorite. I can't wait to see what happens next with Harry and Draco, but also with Ron, Hermione, GInny and the rest of them. Hurry and update, yeah? I'm loving this :)

Author's Response: I'll get to it as quick as I can! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: DMsBloodRose
Date: 11/17/07 2:27
Chapter: Chapter 6

Herumph... I like the story so far but cliffes kill me.... Darned cliffes! Anyway, I like the sotry. Nice work.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter is in the queue, you'll find out what happened soon!

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