Reviews For A is for Azkaban
Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 04/10/07 23:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ooh. This is the first story I've ever read that's described Azkaban, believe it or not! I love the unique bunny! :D Great job.

You seem to describe everything very well, from the food to the cellmates.

ZOMG to describing the prisoner-prisoner interaction. It was SO lovely and heartbreaking, and you truly felt for these antagonists (from canon). To make us feel for the "bad guys" - that's a feat that should be applauded. *claps*

I wonder if you want to include a bit more about the prisoner-guard relations.

Do the guards punish prisoners? *I mean, besides sucking their happy memories from them...* Do prisoners attempt to rebel or escape when they first come, before they're drained of all life-energy?

Nice work!

Kumy

Author's Response: Why, thank you, Kumy! It's reviews like these that make my day. I never got into that aspect of it, but I suppose they might if they felt a little playful. ^^"Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 12/11/06 16:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

Whoa, unexpected. Once of the best Azkaban fics I've read on here. Poor Sirius, he was so complicated. I don't know how I feel about Muriel.

Author's Response: Compicated? How else would that handsome man be? ^-^ I have mixed feelings abut her, too--and I created her!

Reviewer: Lady Nienna
Date: 11/11/06 15:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

hey! nice story and great idea! it's nice to think that sirius wasn't the only decent black.:)
well, I'll pm you when and if my story gets approved...
bye for now

Author's Response: Hey, Nienna! Thanks for the review, and good luck on your story! Don't worry; it'll be fine.

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 11/11/06 3:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

An excellent and extremely powerful story!

I loved the opening entry. It clearly shows the character's detached nature and bemusement at normal things. Her way of wondering why she would need a parchment and quill had me hooked.

I liked the twist at the end of the second entry. Just when I was beginning to sympathise with the man in a very little way, Muriel's eeriely calm statement about the murders made me raise my eyebrows.

Entries three and four focused on character development and woved it seamlessly into the plot, which I loved. The reader can understand her strong dislike of the Azkaban food.

I wasn't expecting any canon characters in the story. Obviously, I was completely surprised by the appearances of Draco and the others.

That letter was really, really good. I liked the way in which I seemed to realise who wrote the letter, but it wasn't confirmed.

I wont say goodbye to normal things, but I will say hello to strange things. For what would a Black do, without strange things to keep her entertained?

One of the most unique endings that I've read. It seems to end with a cliff-hanger, but it's actually not so. Again, you've done an awesome job displaying her detached character.

Well done!

~Mini.

Author's Response: Thank you, Prince! That's a very detailed review, and you shower me with complimants. *blush* Thanks for the review, maybe I'll do something else like this if poeple like it so much!

Reviewer: Malfoy_blonde86
Date: 11/10/06 15:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is simple and to the point.....
I FREAKIN LOVED IT!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Arina
Date: 11/10/06 14:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ahhh! That was such a twist at the end!

Will there be more? =]

Author's Response: Sorry, it's a one-shot. I may make something else about her, though. Maybe. **secretive look** I'm glad you liked it, though! Thanks for the review!

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