Very sad, I got a bit teary at the end =) Well written, with nice and fitting words and rhyming. Draco and Hermione are so cute =)
Author's Response: Awh, that made me smile when you said you got a bit teary. Not because of the sadness, but at the fact that my story portays strong emotion and people can feel it. Thanks.
Good poem, if slightly predictable. Who is the narrator, and who is the girl he killed?
Author's Response: draco=narrarator; hermione=killed thanks for reviewing :] -LB