its confusuing. but i like it
this was short, sweet and beauiful. i don't know how this amazing thing can be a "1st" but wow, truly heart warming
that was sweet. i was a bit confused in the middle, but i get it now.
aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ssssssooooooooooooooooo sssssssswwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeetttttttttt and sssssssooooooooooooo ggggggggooooooooooooooodddddddddd i loved it
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XOXO
~lola~
So I absolutely love your writing. This was another excellent story (or drabble?). The fact that you can write something like this out of the blue in two hours is really amazing. Keep writing, it's beautiful!
WOW! I just finished what was posted of another story that you've wrote (My Deliverance) and thought I'd check this story out and I'm liking this drabble a lot.
Keep up the good work. 10/10 - It was really good. I loved it. *blushes*
~ Parchment and Quill
Awww. Very, very sweet. I like this take on James! His love for Lily is obvious, and it's very tangible in your fic. I enjoy how the three "snapshots" are when he's distracted - it shows a different James from the always-cocky one of most fanfics. Also, I really enjoyed your writing in this fic! Lovely!
Beautiful. You have me in tears :,]
This was amazing. It truly gave me shivers. A fanfiction hasn't made me feel this way in along time. I wish I could describe it to you, but I cannot. Sorry. All I can say is this: you have created something remarkable.
You are an absolutely gifted writer! I love all your fanfic! If that imagination of yours ever comes up with a book of its own please let me know-- I would buy it in a second!!!!!!!
Awwww, that's cute. You're an amazing writer.
wow
this is ... how should i describe it ... well, different from all other stories ive read
im not sure, but i think its a good thing!
wow. beautifully written, nothing i would change...i absolutley love this story. please write more. you know that i love your other stories...so yeah. ps. you should know that you are now my favorite writer. way to go.
Very, very good. I loved it. However, I wish it was a little longer! The ending was also very sweet.
Great job!
I like it ... its so sweet ...
two thumbs up ...
imalso keenly awaiting an update on ur other fic My Deliverance ...
ur 1 of my favourite authors
:P
I love the ending. "It was overwhelming, this love."
It would be great if it was a little longer, but it is still wonderful. Utterly beautiful.
Excellent! It would be great if it could be expanded a bit, but I totally understand about the coffee ;)
You know, this got me thinking, how old were James and Lily when Harry was born? Were they just out of Hogwarts? Early twenties? I really have no idea....
