Reviews For This is NOT About
Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 12/06/06 18:50
Chapter: Word Games

This story is adorable! simply adorable.

Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback!

Reviewer: honey_dukes_lolipop
Date: 12/05/06 11:14
Chapter: Word Games

i love this kiss! your a good writer. i liked it alot
from the lolipop xxx

Author's Response: very cool pen name! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ronlover11
Date: 12/03/06 20:13
Chapter: Word Games


Author's Response: thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 11/25/06 1:05
Chapter: Word Games

That was cool! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Raven Girl
Date: 11/18/06 13:09
Chapter: Word Games

well done!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I appreciate the feedback!

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 11/12/06 13:25
Chapter: Word Games

I dunno, there could have been more build up at the beginning.
Oh well, anything that has Ron and Hermione snogging is alright with me.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Well, you know how it is with a one-shot. It's all about approaching one goal and break-neck speech and actually trying to remember to put some dialouge or anger or something in there before you get to the end. :) Anyway, I appreciate the feedback, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: DelaneyHufflepuff
Date: 11/10/06 14:49
Chapter: Word Games

Oooh I LOVE it :]

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: maze
Date: 11/10/06 0:55
Chapter: Word Games

Nice story...but the fact that Hermione ask Ron to break up with Lavender disturbs me.
1) She should not initiate it as they are not together yet.
2) It is not her character to hurt others if she can help it.
3)it reflect badly on her.
Nice story but it doesnt do justice to Hermione.Now to your other 2 stories. Cheers.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I appreciate the feedback. Your constructive criticism was interesting to read. I do agree that I probably should have had Ron break up with Lavender first before he ran off to find Hermione. Yet, it seemed like if he were in a moment of "awakening" if you will, he wouldn't be thinking about observing all the proper decorum of relationships. In fact, he has very little experience with them. As for Hermione, I walked her to be dominant for once and stand up for what she wanted instead of just hinting at it or flying into a rage. You're correct in saying that it is not in her character, but I don't agree that it reflects badly upon her. She is still a considerate person, but for once, she had to put her needs above those of others, and it served her well.

Reviewer: wizard lover
Date: 11/09/06 20:01
Chapter: Word Games

That was so cute. I love these kinds of stories.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I appreciate the feedback!

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 11/08/06 20:21
Chapter: Word Games

that was really good! I think you should write more of this story; it doesn't seem right to end it here! ;) I am SO greedy sometimes... lol

Author's Response: I'd love to develop this story further, but I have to focus on getting my other two longer fics completed first. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cosmic_qt21
Date: 11/08/06 17:52
Chapter: Word Games

Wow, that was really good!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Jocelyn25
Date: 11/08/06 3:32
Chapter: Word Games

well, i dunno what to say except..I love it :) So many emotions. I would have loved a longer ending though ;) But thats just me being greedy *G

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I might possibly add another chapter at some point, so that will account for a longer ending.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 11/08/06 1:26
Chapter: Word Games

very nice fic, but im kinda annoyed that he didnt break up with lavender, then kiss Hermione... Technically, he cheated, and i doubt that Hermione would have allowed him to do that. She would have used it as incentive to get a move on. But it was still well written! I enjoyed the imagery! :o)

Author's Response: Very cool name! Actually, you bring up a good point about Lavander. I could have included a formal break-up. Maybe I'll add another chapter at some point.

Reviewer: SupremeMugwump
Date: 11/07/06 19:36
Chapter: Word Games

Awww... so cute. Well written. I'm going to read some more of your stories. lol =)

Author's Response: First, I have to say you have an awesome pen name! Thanks for the review, I appreciate the feedback!

Reviewer: books 4 ever
Date: 11/07/06 18:57
Chapter: Word Games

Hmmm! I really like this story. Ron has a lot of nerve. first making her cry then snogging her. oh well they like each other anyways! really liked it! oh by the way you one of my fav. authors! i like all your storys especialy night magic. can't wait for more!
: )

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I am working on finishing up Night Magic this week and submitting it, so you can tell me if you approve of the ending. I'll look forward to hearing about it!

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