Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 12/01/06 18:28
Chapter: When Did You Fall In Love With Me?
NOOOO! It can't be over!!! PLEASE tell me that there will be a sequel! Please? That was great; trust Remus to pull a Harry moment and be all noble... please make a sequel, this was amazing and had an excellent song to it! Thanks for the fic; it's on my favorites!
~Moony =* )
Author's Response: I gotta say, it damn near broke my lil' heart to end it like this...so a sequel is definitely on the cards ;) And I'm glad you like the song, it's one of my favourites :D :D And fit so well! ThankYOU for reviewing the fic - I love your reviews, they make me smile!! :D
Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 11/29/06 17:38
Chapter: When Did You Fall In Love With Me?
The mods should validate this, like, yesterday... along with my story... evil mods. Ha, I mean, wonderful, sweet, intelligent mods... must be going now!
Author's Response: :D How we adore those mods....we love you so much...we'll give you cookies and adoration if you validate this...
Reviewer: Fading
Date: 11/28/06 19:11
Chapter: What Did I Ever Give You?
Can't wait for an update -- which is in the queue, I think. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Yup, the next chapter is in the queue! Thanks for reading, and thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/27/06 15:56
Chapter: When Did You Fall In Love With Me?
validatevalidatevalidatevalidatevalidate.....
If it isn't already obvious, I have way too much time on my hands! See ya at validation!
~Moony ; I
Author's Response: I love that you have too much time on your hands, it means I get more of your lovely reviews!! :D Hopefully you won't be disappointed with this chapter, it's far longer and more action-packed than the last two :P Thanks again for reviewing!!
Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/27/06 12:28
Chapter: What Did I Ever Give You?
AWWWWW! That is sweet. Am I right in guessing that the Sirius was a little less than imaginary? Then again, this coming from the girl that thinks the Veil didn't kill him... THERE WAS NO PROOF THAT IT DID! Sorry, no idea what got me off on that tangent... anyway, great job and I can't wait for the next chappie!
~Moony ;)
Author's Response: Thankyou!! And at last, someone else who understands how the wonderful Sirius Black could never be killed by mere drapery!!! :P Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/25/06 12:47
Chapter: What Did I Ever Give You?
I like the word 'validation.' It makes things a lot more fun. Especially when it is fast. COME ON! VALIDATE!
~Moony >:O
Author's Response: LOL I must admit, the word 'validation' is very appealing to me too ;) I still have my doubts about this one getting through OK, but I hope it does...Chapter 3 is the longest and (brief modesty lapse) best chapter yet, but I can't put it up until Chapter 2 gets through!! *frustration*
Reviewer: Starmaiden
Date: 11/20/06 22:55
Chapter: Why Can't I?
I should have reviewed this forever ago. Eh. Here it is at last!
Your characterisation of Mrs. Weasley is perfect. Her concern, her belief that tea fixes anything…wonderful.
The way Tonks behaves around Remus, or when thinking about him, is also terrific. She cares so much, so obviously, and notices the little things, like his hair, and that he’s getting thinner. This paragraph is fantastic:
She desperately wanted Remus to see her as that sort of person…but if he did, then he wouldn’t realise how she felt about him, would he?
How many times have I myself had similar inner dialogues? The only thing you might change here is to italicise Tonks’s last thought: Oh, Merlin, get a grip on yourself!, just to separate her thought-words from her thought-thoughts.
The song is worked in nicely. You don’t contort it or the plot too much to fit it, which again, is great, because the focus should be on the story and enhanced by the song, not the other way around.
I suggest that you refer to Buckbeak by “him” instead of “it”; we’re used to seeing him referred to in that way, rather than as a genderless creature, which tends to render him a mere object.
I almost forgot to mention that your spelling and grammar are flawless, as far as I can tell. You don’t really need me to tell you that this is a very, very good thing!
Wow. I wasn’t expecting this for an end; I thought she’d already been rejected! The whole thing is wonderful, but I’d have to say that your characterisation and ability to portray emotion are your highest points – something not many writers can say! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Wow, thankyou!! I'm so glad you liked it, I've had some trouble with this story as a whole, including the second chapter that I just can't seem to get past the mods and the third chapter which I keep re-writing and re-writing because I don't like what I've written...Thanks so much for such a positive review!
Reviewer: books 4 ever
Date: 11/07/06 23:05
Chapter: Why Can't I?
It's really good! I would like a bit on Remus' point of veiw. but other wise I really like it. i think it's good! : )
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter actually IS Remus' POV, so it makes me happy that you'd want to read it :D
Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/07/06 22:53
Chapter: Why Can't I?
That was sweet! I ike this ship and you have got the depressed!Tonks of HBP totally dead-on! Great job and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
~Moony
Author's Response: Thankyoufor saying that! I was worried I made her a little TOO depressed... :D The next chapter should be here soon enough, though it's a little short at the moment, it may well be rejected first time :-S But I'll try...
Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 11/07/06 18:31
Chapter: Why Can't I?
HEY! I looked at my reveiw and the sentence is corupted! AUGH! The sentence that says "I', reveiwer!" is supposed to say "I'm the first reveiwer!" ha. haha. hahahahahahaha!
Still love it! I'm gonna go read your other story!
Author's Response: Lol, the gremlins corrupted the review! I don't mind, it means I get a double review for this chapter! ;) Thankyou so much, it's brilliant to hear people like it!
Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 11/07/06 18:29
Chapter: Why Can't I?
Wow, I liked it! OH! I', reveiwer! YAY! I get to be special! It was really good, and I hope you write more. I think the grammer, spelling, writing and vocabulary were all up to standards. I hope you write more and keep up the good work! :-)o
10/10
~AliKt716~
Author's Response: Thanks very much!! I should be submitting the next chapter later today *crosses fingers it gets through OK* Thanks for your lovely review!
