Reviewer: glitter_quill93
Date: 06/18/07 3:14
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

Gr8 story. I'm adding it 2 my faves.

Reviewer: 62442suffell
Date: 06/09/07 5:50
Chapter: Little Souls

In chapter 1, how come they saw Malfoy's carrege when Harry did't see that?

Date: 06/07/07 9:44
Chapter: Momentary Heaven


Date: 06/07/07 9:44
Chapter: Momentary Heaven


Reviewer: pinkgoblin
Date: 05/27/07 18:44
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

Your story is absolutly heart-felt and touching. It has become my favorite romance fic I've read on this sight. I actually teared up in parts of this story. You made me want to be Hermione and have someone like Ron. You are an amazing writer to make me feel the way you did ! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: lilybobily7
Date: 05/25/07 22:39
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

this is good...keep them coming :)

Reviewer: Hermione Jane
Date: 05/18/07 20:00
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

ooo..this is so good, keep writing!

Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 05/12/07 18:01
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

Wow really good!
~ Hannah Abbot

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 05/09/07 12:01
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

i loved it! Yay, ron and hermione were dancing! This is a great story and i cant wait for more

Reviewer: love_44
Date: 05/07/07 21:36
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

This is my favorite romance fic!Plz keep writing,i'd love 2 hear the end!!!(=

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 05/04/07 20:28
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

Wow, that was oustandingly great. I loved the connection between them. Can't wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 05/04/07 16:51
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

I LOVED it!! It was so romantic and nice and sweet and charming! Everything was done PERFECTLY!!! Where are they going next??? Ahh. The wait.... =D

Reviewer: fuzz_nose
Date: 05/03/07 18:21
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

I didn't like this chapter at ALL, because I found it very corny. Ron and Hermione were very OOC. The point of this chapter was to say that Ron and Hermione are now together, and I thought that this could've been portrayed in a much less melodramatic way. All in all, not one of your best chapters. Sorry if I sound like a jerk, but this is how I feel.

I thought that your other chapters were great because you have a very original story plot and the other six chapters were all very original. I think your timing is great, and so are all your details.

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 05/02/07 18:48
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

wow. just wow. and yay they make up! i love how this story is so different from the rest! not all mushy mushy yay kiss and make up. though i have to admit ive read alot of those your's is way better! i can't wait to see what memory they land in next! no really i'm brain dead and really don't know! you are so creative and are a wonderful writer! sadly you just updated and i'm going to have to wait a while for the next chapter :(
love your story!

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 05/02/07 18:30
Chapter: Watching What Was Once A Beautiful Scene

i hope hermione dances with him! he just seems so sad and depressed! and hermione too! and i love how it is just so cute the way ron thinks of hermione - hoe she is just beautiful. this is better than the mushy mushy stuff. love it

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 05/02/07 18:21
Chapter: Let Me Keep Her

another wowing chapter. so sad though! what is ron thinking! if only hermione could do occulomency ;)

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 05/02/07 14:03
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

i LOVE this story. It s amazingly ....beautiful! I can't think of any other words.

Reviewer: Nutters4Potter
Date: 05/02/07 8:41
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

Worth the wait.

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 05/01/07 19:13
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

I LOVE IT! Especially "They fit like a lock and key, perfect and secure". I cannot wait for the next episode. Please update soon! ;-)

Reviewer: Ritter
Date: 05/01/07 17:36
Chapter: Momentary Heaven

Awesome story, great chapter! Keep writing and update soon please!!

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