Reviewer: fairyqueen37
Date: 12/05/06 20:55
Chapter: The Magic Begins

umm just a note. when your in someone'es memory then you can't see anything that the person didn't witness themselves. So the whole scene with Malfoy wouldn't work.

Author's Response: Yes. unfortunately I thought of that right after i posted it, i wondered whether it would get validated. However I loved doing the scene with little Malfoy, it would have been a shame to get rid of it.

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 11/22/06 13:27
Chapter: The Magic Begins

this is a really well written story...i can not wait until the next chapter

Author's Response: yay! thankyou so much for your comment!

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 11/21/06 17:10
Chapter: The Magic Begins

I loved this chapter! I think you had each of their individual thoughts just perfect, and I can't wait till you update!

Author's Response: thankyou, thankyou, thankyou, chapter 3 coming soon.

Reviewer: sweeterthanhunny
Date: 11/09/06 5:21
Chapter: Hope and Wait

moremoremoremnoremoremorenmoremoremoremoremoermoermoermoermoermoremoermoreemoetloermoetmomoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoroh younget the piont. Please?

Author's Response: hehe i get the point. more is coming. i've already written quite a few chapters. just have to get them validated :D

Reviewer: kittie19513
Date: 11/08/06 4:18
Chapter: Hope and Wait

hope to read soon the next chapter(s )?)...

Author's Response: indeed. many chapters to come

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 11/07/06 19:03
Chapter: Hope and Wait

Hey, I thought you'd already posted this. I'm very confused...

Author's Response: yeah. for some reason they deleted it again... hmmm... i had to repost it

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 11/07/06 17:50
Chapter: Hope and Wait

I am very intrigued. This looks like it will be very interesting. I like the descriptions you use. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: yay! thankyou!

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