umm just a note. when your in someone'es memory then you can't see anything that the person didn't witness themselves. So the whole scene with Malfoy wouldn't work.
Author's Response: Yes. unfortunately I thought of that right after i posted it, i wondered whether it would get validated. However I loved doing the scene with little Malfoy, it would have been a shame to get rid of it.
this is a really well written story...i can not wait until the next chapter
Author's Response: yay! thankyou so much for your comment!
I loved this chapter! I think you had each of their individual thoughts just perfect, and I can't wait till you update!
Author's Response: thankyou, thankyou, thankyou, chapter 3 coming soon.
moremoremoremnoremoremorenmoremoremoremoremoermoermoermoermoermoremoermoreemoetloermoetmomoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoroh younget the piont. Please?
Author's Response: hehe i get the point. more is coming. i've already written quite a few chapters. just have to get them validated :D
hope to read soon the next chapter(s )?)...
Author's Response: indeed. many chapters to come
Hey, I thought you'd already posted this. I'm very confused...
Author's Response: yeah. for some reason they deleted it again... hmmm... i had to repost it
I am very intrigued. This looks like it will be very interesting. I like the descriptions you use. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: yay! thankyou!