Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 08/16/08 9:26
Chapter: Chapter 2: Aunt Hermione Knows It All
Oh my god I hate Dick or whatever his real name is. HArry should come back soon. I love this story but it's so sad. Which also makes it inmposible not to keep reading. YOu really write wonderfuly.
Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 08/16/08 9:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: Uncle Ron Never Laughs
oh my god that chapter almost made me cry. Why does Harry have to be noble now? why can't he go into his rash ways crash the wedding adn then things would be ok, why did he give up. Arhh. GOod idea for a story it looks really intersting i can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: It is kind of the worse time for Harry to be his silly noble self, isn't it? I'm glad you like the story idea! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: roXtar
Date: 07/28/08 0:24
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending
yeah... I planned on reviewing after every chapter, but I loved it so much I couldn't even stop for I minute! except when I was about to read the last chapter and my internet just stopped!!! I had to wait like 2 hours to finish! I was dying!! LOL
anyway... yes I loved it! I kept laughing out loud... my siblings gave me some funny looks.. you are amazing!! worry.. fear... comedy... excitement... anger... more comedy! everything all mixed together! bouncing from emotion to emotion! oh you did a wonderful job!!! I enjoyed that sooo much I may just have to read it again!! yes I almost thought that Lily/Harry was killed... and then for some weird reason I thought he may have killed ron! lol and as soon as I read "his face was bubbling" I though 'oh snap! it's draco!' I LOVE Lily and her daddy's little girl relationship with harry... I love annie and lily being BFF's seeing as my cousin and I are also best friends which I thought was cute! Leah is adorable and I love how all the Potter siblings are so close. I love the quidditch you put in and all the memories in the pensive and just randomly that ginny remembered was sooo cute!!! (ahh peach ;) and I loved Harry and Hermione's freindship (not many people elaborate on that) and how you so cutely named the chapters!! and of course ending with Ron and a smile!
Very nicely done! Nicely written and now I think I'll read the sequel! and hopefully more of your stories (check out mine!)
~roXtar
Author's Response: Sometimes I too get caught up in stories and can't manage to stop for a review until I've finished -- believe me, such a wonderful review at the end more than make up for it as far as I'm concerned :) I'm you enjoyed it so much, and that it was able to evoke a whole range of emotions in you; that's always something I strive for in my stories. I was never very close with my father, so I always like to have my character close with their fathers, and I'm glad you enjoyed that too. And if you have as great a relationship with your cousin as Lily and Annie have, then I'm envious of you! ;) Thanks again for the great review.
Reviewer: roXtar
Date: 07/25/08 13:50
Chapter: Chapter 1: Uncle Ron Never Laughs
Wow... I am loving this!!!! but the end of the chapter left my mouth hanging open... lol I'm gonna go read chpt 2 now! yay!
~roXtar
Author's Response: Good! I'm glad you like it so far. And as for the ending -- I'm kind of a cliffhanger junkie ;)
Reviewer: BumLewis
Date: 07/17/08 3:22
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending
This is seriously the best story i've ever read. your writing style is awesome. i had to stop reading a few times to wipe my eyes i was laughing so hard. I love how you mix lily's thought into the middle of an action sequence. that was a really nice touch. thanks for the story and keep writing! YOU ARE THE BEST!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! It's always good for an author to know she can make readers cry from laughing so hard! :)
Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/16/08 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending
I absolutely loved it! But a sequel would have been the coolest thing ever! Oh pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease write a sequel? For all of your dedicated readers and reviewers! And what a twist on that ending! SO I was sorta right. Malfoy was controlling the dude that was gonna marry Ginny!
And in the words of Sirius Potter: "I can so die happy now"
Author's Response: You were sort of right -- I think your guess that it was Malfoy in disguise was the closest anyone got to guessing the truth! Actually, I'm happy to tell you that there is a sequel! Since finishing this story and saying that there is no sequel as of yet, I've started in on a sequel that is a lot less about Harry and Ginny and a lot more about Lily. Only the first two chapters are up, but the third isn't too far off! Thanks for the review; I'm glad you enjoyed the story :)
Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/16/08 6:23
Chapter: Chapter 11: Mum Forgot To Remember
Dick is evil in an "I'm a Death Eater" way! I couldn't finish this story last night because my dad told me to go to bed, but when I was lying there, a crazy, almost seemingly impossible idea sprung into my head! Is Dick Neverfield really Draco Malfoy in dusguise? I mean, it's so logical to why he's such a cmplete and total bastard to them all! And even though Ginny knew him before, Malfoy was supposed to be in hiding, and on the run from the Ministry! It all fits! Great, now I've got myself all hyped up to find out whether or not I'm right!
Author's Response: Draco Malfoy, huh? That's an interesting guess -- you'll find out soon enough! :) Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/15/08 19:20
Chapter: Chapter 2: Aunt Hermione Knows It All
Grrrr. That little...Can go jump in a lake and hinkypunks shoved up his...how dare he do that! The filthy son of a...I hate him already!
Author's Response: He is rather evil, isn't he?
Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/15/08 19:06
Chapter: Chapter 1: Uncle Ron Never Laughs
OH! Poor Harry! Poor Lily! Poor Molly and all their other siblings! Ginny can't marry someone else and I know Harry would never ever let her! He should be able to tell he isn't happy!
Author's Response: Poor everybody, you're right! Things certainly aren't going very well thus far. . . .
Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 05/23/08 21:29
Chapter: Chapter 2: Aunt Hermione Knows It All
it is a very sad chapter. I am beginning to hate, no, to Despise Dick. However I think you did a great job of creating a villain like him. I also thought that it was really cute how Harry proposed to Ginny.
I cant wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: I must admit, I had a lot of fun making a villain out of him ;) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 05/23/08 21:07
Chapter: Chapter 1: Uncle Ron Never Laughs
oooohhhhh. very interesting. I can already see that this story is going to a brilliant story. I think that the first chapter is amazingly written! I love the characterizations of all the weasley's and co. I think that the way you had Ginny cut her hair was a really great idea! I also loved the ending of this chapter were Harry gets all sad.
Oh and also, Im a big shipper of Neville/Luna so that made me happy ^^.
Overall: Congratulation on a brilliant start to what I am sure will be a Brilliant story!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I really wish J.K. Rowling had put Neville and Luna together after the books, but I suppose that would have been too perfect of an ending, right? Hopefully you'll find the rest of the story as good!
Reviewer: Mehroo
Date: 05/17/08 20:51
Chapter: Chapter 1: Uncle Ron Never Laughs
I lost count of how many times I've read this!..
Hurry up with the sequel!!!!
Author's Response: The sequel's coming along slowly, but hopefully it shouldn't be too much longer!
Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 05/05/08 10:54
Chapter: Chapter 8: Aunt Hannah is One Smart Muggle
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 05/05/08 10:36
Chapter: Chapter 7: Aunt Angie Said He Was Handsome
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
I loved it.
Hir-Ari-ous!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so!
Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 05/04/08 5:12
Chapter: Chapter 5: Uncle George's Surprise
ohhhhhhhhh
love that part
“Don’t tell me you of all people are at a loss for words? Maybe you’re just a little rusty on your past. Allow me to introduce myself. I’m Harry Potter. Now you’re going to explain to me why you were hitting my son.”
loved it!!!!!!!
you are fab a writting
Author's Response: I really liked that line, too :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 05/04/08 5:12
Chapter: Chapter 5: Uncle George's Surprise
ohhhhhhhhh
love that part
“Don’t tell me you of all people are at a loss for words? Maybe you’re just a little rusty on your past. Allow me to introduce myself. I’m Harry Potter. Now you’re going to explain to me why you were hitting my son.”
loved it!!!!!!!
you are fab a writting
Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 05/04/08 2:42
Chapter: Chapter 2: Aunt Hermione Knows It All
ohhh my eyes were welling up when i read that part!!!!!
Bravo!!!
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 05/04/08 2:28
Chapter: Chapter 1: Uncle Ron Never Laughs
Love it i expesially loved this part :
“Rick, let me be the first to say—” she began smiling, picking up her glass of pumpkin juice. James and Sirius looked horrified at her words and actions. “—to say that my father is coming back, and when he does, he is going to kick you all the way back to hell!” She threw the pumpkin juice on his face and ran toward the house as James and Sirius clapped and yelled “hear-hear!”
It was hilarious!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :)
Reviewer: dumblond-katie
Date: 04/24/08 20:50
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending
I've now just finished reading the whole story, after about 2 hours and a half sitting at the computer ( I know its sad, but I have nothing else to do, due to school holidays) I would have reveiwed every chapter but I was so caught up in the story line I just wanted to find out what happend! This is a truly enchanted story and I loved every bit of it, aswell as the fact you made it your own by adding new characters, and keeping Fred XD
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I sometimes find myself caught up in a story that way; reading it for hours and unable to even stop to review. I'm glad you enjoyed this enough to be caught up in it that way! While it is AU, as it was written before DH, I'm glad that Fred is in it-- it wouldn't be the same story without him! :)
Reviewer: chinesechick18
Date: 04/23/08 17:53
Chapter: Chapter 1: Uncle Ron Never Laughs
Great beginning. I love how you take the time to describe everyone. This is the start of a great story.
Author's Response: Thanks; I'm glad you think so!
