Reviewer: Irishbabe2011
Date: 09/20/11 5:46
Chapter: Chapter 3: Aunt Katie's Favorite Advice

I LOVE this story, it's the best fanfic I have read. It's original and sad. You literally have me in tears. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: StarkidSkyler
Date: 08/28/11 15:49
Chapter: Chapter 9: Grandma Says Talking is the Trick

I really love this story! It shows real creativity- I don't even know how you came up with such a creative plot, but I thought you pulled it off really well. It's original and completely unique, but it is still believable within the canon. Bravo!

Reviewer: StarkidSkyler
Date: 08/28/11 15:49
Chapter: Chapter 9: Grandma Says Talking is the Trick

I really love this story! It shows real creativity- I don't even know how you came up with such a creative plot, but I thought you pulled it off really well. It's original and completely unique, but it is still believable within the canon. Bravo!

Reviewer: Ye_Merry_Hippogriffs
Date: 08/15/11 3:10
Chapter: Chapter 1: Uncle Ron Never Laughs

Gah! What a twist at the end! I really loved this story; it was sad without being depressing, and romantic without being disgusting. I especially liked how light-hearted the tone of the story was, despite the heavy plot line.

Reviewer: cornship
Date: 08/10/11 22:49
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

Ohmygoodness!! That was waaay better than expected! You wrote it in a way that I could really feel what is meant. Dear, dear the way you built it up in the scenes in the church was amazing! I wouldn't lie to you right now, I just deleted 4 lines of review blabbing, but I can assure it was all a good balance between praising you and explaining myself why I did. I deleted it because it was getting very confusing.
So anyway, I'm sure you don't mind me inflating your ego a little bit. It's all good.

Reviewer: dspotter
Date: 07/20/11 23:00
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

I just watched superman returns and it has so many parallels to this story!!! It's crazy!!!!! Except the Richard in superman isnt a dick. He's actually kinda cool. Great story!!!!!!

Reviewer: dspotter
Date: 07/20/11 11:33
Chapter: Chapter 3: Aunt Katie's Favorite Advice

I don't think I have ever been so emotionally attached to a Mugglenet fan fiction. This story is bloody AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: EatMyPixieDust
Date: 07/11/11 20:59
Chapter: Chapter 5: Uncle George's Surprise

Wow...I'm at a loss for words! Well, almost. Your story is so exciting! I love your portrayal of the relationships of the Weasley and Potter family, and it was interesting how you changed some characterization to suit the story and kept it un-cliche. Your plot is very original and believable, and your OCs are lovable and real. I will most likely review again when I finish, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: georgeisholey
Date: 05/12/11 17:49
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

First, let me just say, I really, really, REALLY think there should have been a slip 'n slide- if nothing else, because Ginny did not marry Dick. I had waaay too much fun with the imagery there. Personally, though, my favorite moment in the entire story was when Harry jumps out of his stag form and says, "Now you're gonna explain why you were hitting my son!" because the first thought in my mind was, "Now the Dicky's gonna get his!" I literally almost fell out of my computer chair, I was so happy.

Favorite characters, without a doubt, are Lily, Annie, and Sirius. They really are brilliant little stinkers, to come with a wedding-crash like that. I liked Ginny's memories, too, they really gave me a bit more perspective and sympathy for her than I would have otherwise had. I like the "Peach Paint" incident- clever. :) And no, I'm afraid I have much too much of Hermione in me, but I knew Lily and Harry were not dead. I just knew, because if I wouldn't have the heart to kill those characters, I had faith that you wouldn't either... and maybe I saw the epitaph on accident while I was scrolling...

Hey, what's wrong with novel-length author's notes? I think those are the best kind! :)

Reviewer: georgeisholey
Date: 05/12/11 16:36
Chapter: Chapter 11: Mum Forgot To Remember

I would dearly love to kill him, yes...

Reviewer: georgeisholey
Date: 05/09/11 20:11
Chapter: Chapter 2: Aunt Hermione Knows It All

I love how the cousins look out for each other... it reminds me of my friends and me. And Dick is certainly living up to his name. Urgh... frustration! But knowing Harry, he'll burst in at the most awkward moment, and save the world. Because, that's what he does. :)

Reviewer: charmaine23
Date: 03/08/11 14:21
Chapter: Chapter 11: Mum Forgot To Remember

That memory really made me tear up.. This is getting really good... This is an amazing story and it's keeping me from doing my work!! but its worth it :)

Reviewer: charmaine23
Date: 03/07/11 17:49
Chapter: Chapter 6: Uncle Charlie Realizes Everything

“Did you know I was raised by Muggles?” asked the man -- my father. He spoke conversationally, as if nothing dramatic was happening at all. “I was, and they tried to squash the magic out of me. Worse still, my cousin was the school bully and I was his favorite victim," he commented airily. "But you know the one thing I learned from Dudley Dursley?” I couldn’t see his face but I could almost hear the grin that spread across it.

He proceeded to knee Dick in the unmentionables.

hahahaha i love this so far

Reviewer: LuLu94
Date: 02/04/11 0:21
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

I remember there was a sequel up for a while but I can't seem to find it. Uncle George something or other, right?
Great story!

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 02/02/11 10:47
Chapter: Chapter 5: Uncle George's Surprise

Re-reading this at work was such a bad idea - I'm going to end up in tears, I just know it. Lol! Fantastic work, of course. :)

Reviewer: hlrf
Date: 01/31/11 20:52
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

I really loved this story. It was different and very interesting to read. The plot twists continually kept me entertained and waiting for more. All in all, an excellent story.

Reviewer: TeamHarry112
Date: 01/05/11 19:32
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

I LOVED this story!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: TeamHarry112
Date: 01/05/11 18:41
Chapter: Chapter 11: Mum Forgot To Remember

I will kill him! DA DA DAAAA!!! >:)

Reviewer: claira-babe
Date: 11/30/10 6:42
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

I really enjoyed this story and love the tittle he he. I think you have done a really good job of keeping the characters true to how we would expect them to act and react. I love the line: "“Weasleys, Potters, people-who-insisted-on-coming-even-though-they-were-not-invited,” Uncle George paused to let his eyes linger on Dick" lol I love the humor you use but also the way you portray the other emotions instrumental to telling the story. The frustration Lilly and the other members of the family felt while Ginny was acting so out of character, the helplessness of being a child who desperately wanted their parents together for a 'happy ending', the anger, the fear, the elation, the hope, happiness and love you did a very good job in drawing you in to feel what the characters were feeling. It was nice to see it from Lilly's point of view it was a nice take on the situation. I really look forward to reading more of your work as i was completely hooked on this one I was really intrigued so see what was going to happen next I stayed up all night readying it :-). So thank you for a wonderful story and keep up the good work.

Reviewer: AReader
Date: 07/17/10 12:51
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

MagEd, you rock!!!! I love all of your stories!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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