Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 03/06/14 12:43
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

After all my complaining, I really did enjoy this story. And, I've always wanted to read one of your stories so I'm glad I found this one. I think my favorite quote was when Lily compared Harry to Dumbledore. I think the story ended well and I was surprised when you revealed that Draco was behind it all and even more surprised when Draco turned his wand on himself. Great job.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 03/04/14 14:59
Chapter: Chapter 12: Dad Would Have Loved Her Forever

I can imagine Lily's shock at the big nothing that happened. I'm wondering also about what was supposed to happen. I know the next chapter will be exciting.

Reviewer: Mom2Rose
Date: 02/27/14 22:20
Chapter: Chapter 1: Uncle Ron Never Laughs

I enjoyed Lily's humor and your in depth descriptions throughout the story. I was glad to see there was a physical reason to Ginny's "madness," and had a hunch our favorite Slytherin just might have something to do with it. Loved Ginny's wedding speech! Well done.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/26/14 14:40
Chapter: Chapter 11: Mum Forgot To Remember

I don't know how Ginny can sleep with Dick when Harry's close by. It doesn't sound like she's any way prepared for her wedding the next day.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/25/14 13:22
Chapter: Chapter 10: Grandpa's Brilliant Idea

I hadn't even thought about a potion poisoning. How can Ginny marry Dick when she hasn't divorced Harry? This has really gotten exciting. I hate it when you're talking about someone and they walk in and hear you:D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/23/14 23:33
Chapter: Chapter 9: Grandma Says Talking is the Trick

I'm glad the family has finally gotten together and decided to do something. I wonder if Lily's sarcasm was part of the plan.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/23/14 2:31
Chapter: Chapter 8: Aunt Hannah is One Smart Muggle

I think we all take from our lives when we write. I really hope to see Ginny back to her former self. This seems to be a start.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/22/14 0:31
Chapter: Chapter 7: Aunt Angie Said He Was Handsome

Dick seems like an idiot. Ginny will simply have to break off the engagement. And she'll have to do it quickly. I can understand the romance of giving Ginny a lilac stem as opposed to a hundred roses. It's always the heartfelt actions that count rather than the actions just for show.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/21/14 15:40
Chapter: Chapter 6: Uncle Charlie Realizes Everything

I like this story otherwise I wouldn't be reading it. At the same time the Harry and Ginny characters don't seem like the characters we know and love. Why would Harry, who dislikes Dick, let him take over his family--even if he thought he'd throw his family into chaos. Ginny is always portrayed as a strong person but here she doesn't say anything. I don't think she's said anything to Harry since he reappeared. And why would they all go running to San Francisco. That's just odd unless you explain it later. It's still an interesting story with this version of the characters but you might as well just given them all different names.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/21/14 12:25
Chapter: Chapter 5: Uncle George's Surprise

Wow! That was exciting. I was starting to wonder if Harry had been disabled by Death Eaters or if for some bizarre reason Neville and Luna were keeping him captive. I really liked how you had the stag change into his human form--Harry.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/21/14 12:01
Chapter: Chapter 4: Uncle Fred is Going Crazy

Sirius sure seems confident in expressing his opinion. I like that in a young person. Again, the question I have is why did Ginny turn to Dick. Interesting to know that Dick knew both Harry and Ginny.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/20/14 16:25
Chapter: Chapter 3: Aunt Katie's Favorite Advice

Ginny seems so unlike the Ginny we know. She seems depressed with her engagement. She's in denial with Dick hitting Molly. She doesn't want to believe it because it complicates her life.

Reviewer: trigg
Date: 02/20/14 10:56
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

Wonderful story. Once I started reading I couldn't leave it without finishing. Loved it. Thanks.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/19/14 17:51
Chapter: Chapter 2: Aunt Hermione Knows It All

Oh, I'm counting on the situation getting better. This is an unusual story so far. Did Bill die in the war? When you first described Dick I thought you were describing Draco:D I sure hope Ginny doesn't marry this jerk.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/19/14 17:16
Chapter: Chapter 1: Uncle Ron Never Laughs

I must say that was a complicated beginning. What's important to me is that Harry is alive:D Dick sounds like an arse. Yay for the Potter kids for expressing their wishes.

Reviewer: notyouraveragewitch
Date: 12/30/13 4:51
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

Love this! Didn't want to stop reading it! Great job!

Reviewer: CrookshanksLovesHedwig
Date: 07/29/12 6:58
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

Hmmm what to say....
Maybe YOU are SO amazing!!!
This story might even have been my favorite. It had me up until midnight (I started at 10:30) and I would not put down the iPad. You are the master of surprise climatic twists and write amazing happy endings. Exalted you are O best muggle net fan fiction author I am glad you grace this site with your words so all can read them. I'm sad I finished it because now there is no more.

Reviewer: CrookshanksLovesHedwig
Date: 07/29/12 6:02
Chapter: Chapter 11: Mum Forgot To Remember

Yes! I will review! Maybe I'm not ready for killing people but I can review! This is amazing! How do you do it? Lily will kill him! Maybe after Ginny marries him! Again, you are my and my friends' favorite fanfic author! I've almost read all of your stories!

Reviewer: deathwithanaxe
Date: 07/05/12 1:56
Chapter: Chapter 10: Grandpa's Brilliant Idea

ooohh, a big warm bubble is growing in my stomach and only 3 chapters left...oooohhhh...

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 06/14/12 0:37
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

This is absolutely, without doubt, one of the best stories I have ever read. Sure, there may have been the odd typo, or the horrible cliffhanger :P, but I think you deserve a glowing review. My only command is for you to write a sequel- PLEASE! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

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