Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 03/06/14 12:43
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

After all my complaining, I really did enjoy this story. And, I've always wanted to read one of your stories so I'm glad I found this one. I think my favorite quote was when Lily compared Harry to Dumbledore. I think the story ended well and I was surprised when you revealed that Draco was behind it all and even more surprised when Draco turned his wand on himself. Great job.

Reviewer: trigg
Date: 02/20/14 10:56
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

Wonderful story. Once I started reading I couldn't leave it without finishing. Loved it. Thanks.

Reviewer: notyouraveragewitch
Date: 12/30/13 4:51
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

Love this! Didn't want to stop reading it! Great job!

Reviewer: CrookshanksLovesHedwig
Date: 07/29/12 6:58
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

Hmmm what to say....
Maybe YOU are SO amazing!!!
This story might even have been my favorite. It had me up until midnight (I started at 10:30) and I would not put down the iPad. You are the master of surprise climatic twists and write amazing happy endings. Exalted you are O best muggle net fan fiction author I am glad you grace this site with your words so all can read them. I'm sad I finished it because now there is no more.

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 06/14/12 0:37
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

This is absolutely, without doubt, one of the best stories I have ever read. Sure, there may have been the odd typo, or the horrible cliffhanger :P, but I think you deserve a glowing review. My only command is for you to write a sequel- PLEASE! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Reviewer: cornship
Date: 08/10/11 22:49
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

Ohmygoodness!! That was waaay better than expected! You wrote it in a way that I could really feel what is meant. Dear, dear the way you built it up in the scenes in the church was amazing! I wouldn't lie to you right now, I just deleted 4 lines of review blabbing, but I can assure it was all a good balance between praising you and explaining myself why I did. I deleted it because it was getting very confusing.
So anyway, I'm sure you don't mind me inflating your ego a little bit. It's all good.

Reviewer: dspotter
Date: 07/20/11 23:00
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

I just watched superman returns and it has so many parallels to this story!!! It's crazy!!!!! Except the Richard in superman isnt a dick. He's actually kinda cool. Great story!!!!!!

Reviewer: georgeisholey
Date: 05/12/11 17:49
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

First, let me just say, I really, really, REALLY think there should have been a slip 'n slide- if nothing else, because Ginny did not marry Dick. I had waaay too much fun with the imagery there. Personally, though, my favorite moment in the entire story was when Harry jumps out of his stag form and says, "Now you're gonna explain why you were hitting my son!" because the first thought in my mind was, "Now the Dicky's gonna get his!" I literally almost fell out of my computer chair, I was so happy.

Favorite characters, without a doubt, are Lily, Annie, and Sirius. They really are brilliant little stinkers, to come with a wedding-crash like that. I liked Ginny's memories, too, they really gave me a bit more perspective and sympathy for her than I would have otherwise had. I like the "Peach Paint" incident- clever. :) And no, I'm afraid I have much too much of Hermione in me, but I knew Lily and Harry were not dead. I just knew, because if I wouldn't have the heart to kill those characters, I had faith that you wouldn't either... and maybe I saw the epitaph on accident while I was scrolling...

Hey, what's wrong with novel-length author's notes? I think those are the best kind! :)

Reviewer: LuLu94
Date: 02/04/11 0:21
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

I remember there was a sequel up for a while but I can't seem to find it. Uncle George something or other, right?
Great story!

Reviewer: hlrf
Date: 01/31/11 20:52
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

I really loved this story. It was different and very interesting to read. The plot twists continually kept me entertained and waiting for more. All in all, an excellent story.

Reviewer: TeamHarry112
Date: 01/05/11 19:32
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

I LOVED this story!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: claira-babe
Date: 11/30/10 6:42
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

I really enjoyed this story and love the tittle he he. I think you have done a really good job of keeping the characters true to how we would expect them to act and react. I love the line: "“Weasleys, Potters, people-who-insisted-on-coming-even-though-they-were-not-invited,” Uncle George paused to let his eyes linger on Dick" lol I love the humor you use but also the way you portray the other emotions instrumental to telling the story. The frustration Lilly and the other members of the family felt while Ginny was acting so out of character, the helplessness of being a child who desperately wanted their parents together for a 'happy ending', the anger, the fear, the elation, the hope, happiness and love you did a very good job in drawing you in to feel what the characters were feeling. It was nice to see it from Lilly's point of view it was a nice take on the situation. I really look forward to reading more of your work as i was completely hooked on this one I was really intrigued so see what was going to happen next I stayed up all night readying it :-). So thank you for a wonderful story and keep up the good work.

Reviewer: AReader
Date: 07/17/10 12:51
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

MagEd, you rock!!!! I love all of your stories!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: GinnyPotterFan26
Date: 03/04/10 15:45
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

You did fool me into thinking Lily was dead for a second. Then I read the first two sentences of the next paragraph. But it was good, nonetheless. I liked how this ended, and I liked that Lily was the central character (and the eldest Potter child), which is such a refreshing change from them having a male first-born (be it Sirius or James).
It was a really funny story, despite being sad at times, and I thought you had a really creative interpretation of the events of life in the Potter family. I liked that you didn't go quite as cliche on the names as so many writers (including Rowling) did, and that you even created a back story to choosing some of the names. I also got the feeling that you had/have at least an overview (and a pretty clear and thorough one) of what happened in their seventh year if we disregard DH. I'd like to read that play out eventually, though I understand that "Puddles" and "I'll Pick You Up" are both time-consuming on their own right now.
Congrats on another good story!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you found it funny and creative and liked it overall :) I did actually have my own version of the seventh book -- one that actually had a handful of chapters posted -- but I just didn't have the heart to finish it after DH came out. I'm constantly coming up with new ideas, most of which I end up writing in one or two shots, but yes, right now, I'm trying to focus on those two.

Reviewer: Dumbledores_Fave
Date: 02/13/10 16:19
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

You should definatly write a sequel. I love your characters. This stroy was great and I think a sequel would be awesome, of course, I have no clue what it would be about?

Author's Response: I actually started one a while back but it was never finished, simply because I think this story is best if it stands alone :) But I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Crazycow89
Date: 02/11/10 3:27
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

Wow! that is actually a really great story. You know what the best part was (apart from the epilogue)? The fact that Dick wasn't the mastermind-Malfoy was. I knew Malfoy was linked somewhere into this. Oh, and by the way, I also thought that at the last Avada Kedavra, Harry had been killed...only when I read the next section I found out that Malfoy had killed himself. What a shock that was!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked the Malfoy twist and that I was able to shock you :)

Reviewer: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Date: 12/02/09 5:51
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

Ahhhh, I was soooooo right about Malfoy being the 'mastermind'! Sure, I had to mainline the whole story in three hours, but it was totally worth it.

There were more twists and turns than a plate of spaghetti in this story, much to my neverending delight. The more convoluted and dark the plot, the heavier the appeal to my literary sensibilities.

It was heartwarming, dark, frustrating, and fan-bloody-tastic all in one, and I thank you for that!


Author's Response: Thank you so much! And congrats on guessing that Mafloy was the mastermind ;) I'm glad you liked the story and all its twists and turns -- I personally always think that stories are more interesting when they have lots of twists and turns!

Reviewer: afterglow745
Date: 09/22/09 18:12
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

Wonderful story! Made me laugh out loud and brought me to tears all in the same chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: boomerbird10
Date: 08/17/09 12:20
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

I realize that I may have given a "final" review for this story several times over, as this is one of my dear favorites in the world of fanfiction. My memory does not serve me in remembering how many times I've read this magnificent story... but I do know that I've enjoyed it immensely each time.

As for my final, overall opinion of the story, as you put it, I was riveted throughout Uncle Fred Calls Him Dick and I loved it. My favorite parts were probably all of the interactions between Lily and her father. They were heartwarming and perfectly believable. That being said, I loved your portrayal of each individual character and it was very interesting to see how each changed throughout the story. In the end, I was satisfied with the overall character and plot development and they completed my positive opinions of your writing.

Sincerely yours,

Author's Response: Feel free to leave as many final reviews as you want ;) I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much that you continue to come back and read it over. I really liked writing the scenes between Harry and Ginny, so I'm happy to hear (or read!) that you enjoyed reading them. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: emonkey_10
Date: 07/09/09 23:53
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

plz plz if it's not too much trouble could you tell me what happens in uncle george has a shovel? you can email me @ emonkey_10@hotmail

Author's Response: I just e-mailed you. Hope that helps!

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