This was so sweet! It is about Hermione, right? This poem flowed nicely. I don't think that there is anything that I would change.
This is really good, but I have no idea who it's about.... is it Ginny? In any case, this is a descriptive and well-done poem, even if some of the word flow is the slightest bit akward.
Author's Response: Its about Hermione :] Thanks for reviewing! -LB