I really liked this one. I can't wait to see what happens with Amber and Sirius. Update soon!

Author's Response: The unexpected happens...oopsy..I've said too much...=)

hey just started this story, and i must say its pretty wicked so far. hah, i love all JL stories although you chose a cruel place to end this one:P haha so once again awsome writing and update in the near future

Author's Response: Thanks!! I know I did, I'm sorry =P hehe, but how would I get people to continue reading if they didnt want to know what happens next?? I will, I promise. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

I NEED MORE FLUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please?

Author's Response: Hmm....okay..I'll call in the fluff machine and we'll see if I can't make the next chapter more cotton candy-like, k? =)

Yes! I like it SO much! I just love the Lily/James stuff! AHHH!!! I'm jealous of them.

Everything was good, but I would have made the fact that she was dreaming a little more subtle. Like work it in more than just saying "Dream" and "End Dream". Either way, it was very good. And I can't wait till the next one is validated!

aw i luv how they r teasing her at the end. i cant wait 4 the party/dance thing. update soon!

Author's Response: hehe, real life experience there =P thanks!

This is soooo good! I love it! THe end of this chapter was great! UPdate soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it! I've already updated, it just needs to be validated =)

Hey, I've read your chapters, and can I ask, is this your first story? I don't know, but I just get that feeling.
Anyway, I don't want to be horrible at all, because you do have a good plot line so far, but I think there is something about the story that seems a little cliched. I mean, don't get me wrong, it's really good, but I get the impression Amber and Sirius will date soon, and May and Remus, and I haven't heard any piece of dialouge from Peter yet. I really hope I don't sound horrible, but yeah, that's just my opinion.
I also think that Slughorn seems a little too strict for his normal character (I actually teach about character development on the forums here so I'm very picky). Slughorn is a very easy-going man and yes, he is fair in the fact that people need to be punished if they do the wrong thing, but I think in this part here he'd be very laughable at them and sort of go soft in the way he say's it, I just get the impression he's strict like McGonagall.
I really hope I haven't offended you, like I said you've got a great plot running and I can see this story going far, I just think there are a few things you might want to consider. If you want to contact me about it, feel free to, I'm willing to help if you want it.
Good luck and Well Done!
babekitty_92 :)

Author's Response: Omgosh I'm not offended at all!! I love constructive criticism almost as much as I like positive review! Yes, it's my first fanfic, though definately not my last. Hmm...I think I'll look into the character development thing, and yes, I know Slughorn is more..jolly...but I needed Lily to go to detention and I didnt think she'd be caught setting off Dungbombs =P I might just take you up on that offer, thanks! =D

Why isn't this chapter there? Why can't i read it?

Author's Response: Because it needs to be validated. If you add this story to your favorites than when it gets updated you'll get an email telling you =)

I can't wait for the next chapter. Great story=D

Can't wait until the next chpter's out!
It's really good so far!

Author's Response: Thanks! It should be out soon, I submitted it as soon as I saw the 3rd one got approved. =) keep reading!