Really good story. Good characterisation. Story flows well and is easy to read. Keep writing - looking foward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks ;-) I really appreciate the details in reviews.
This is like my favorite story! :O Please update soon I can't wait for more!!!!!!
UPDATE PLEASE!
Author's Response: See below ;-)
Please Please post more sooooooon!!!
Author's Response: Consider it done ;-)
this was a totaly awsome story... i really enjoyed it... now get the nxt chapter up soon!!!!!
Author's Response: was??? haha...anyway. thanks, and I am.
I enjoyed reading it, actually i loved reading it. I really do like how you drag out lily and james coming together. other storys there all over each other by the third chapter. Though it seems like its going to be forever before the next chapter is posted. I cant wait to see who rose ends up with. :-))
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it..though I must admit I can't wait for them to get together. =P Rose will find someone...in the end...
this fic is so good!! i like check everyday to see if you updated! did the newest chapter get deleted or something because its gone...hmm well keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Yeah it wasn't validated before the break so I think it got deleted. But I fixed it and resubmitted it, so no worries ;-)
I LOVE IT! Please update soon! :)
Author's Response: =) I will. And thanks
I just read the whole thing, I like it!! I'm a big fan of Sirius, so please have more with him and Amber even after these two are done!!!
Author's Response: Thanks :-) And don't worry, there will be more Sirius and Amber for sure!
I really like where you are going with this fic! please update soon!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks =)
I really like where you are going with this fic! please update soon!!!!!!!!
Hey I am so sry I thought I have RxR but i havn't ever before!!! Anyway I love your stories and can't wait for it to be vailated!! I am wirting my own and am hopping to submit my firdt story ever soon! So you really help inspirer me! Thanx! ~Ginny~
Author's Response: Oh thanks so much! Don't worry about it, I've done the exact same thing. Hey let me know when you get your story submitted and I'll come check it out =)
Well written, but quite cliched. Try not to induce J/L cliches so much, it can be a bit harmful.
Author's Response: hmmm.I'm having trouble spotting my 'quite cliche' parts. Can you please help me out by pointing them out or something? Thanks~
OOH! Romantic! I bet he's going to snog her to death! EEEE! I can't wait for the next chaper!
Author's Response: Hehe...one would think....but you'll just have to wait and find out!!!
haha. i liked this chapter. yay! more james/lily. cant wait for the next chapter to be validated!!
Author's Response: Oh don't you worry, the Lily and James is coming right up, along with a side serving of catfights and werewolf dilemmas =P
wow this is sooo amazing it really needs the other chapter 2 be validated!!
Author's Response: Aw you're too kind. But yes it does need to hurry up...I can't stand it..I have all these chapter written but they aren't posted...
very kl
Author's Response: I'm going to assume that means cool. So thanks =)
I thought this chapter was highly entertaining and very well written! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks =) I'm glad you found it entertaining.
Sirius Is Evil
Author's Response: Mwahahahah.....maybe a little. I always think of him as the Marauder that never grew up....=)
Great Chapter!!
Lol loved the end!!
Aww poor James!!!
Great writing!!
Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Cont soon!
Author's Response: Wheee!! I love it when people love it!! =) I know..I kinda felt bad for the poor guy, but it gets better, of course!! =) Thanks much
