Reviewer: jandl
Date: 11/07/06 21:24
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

good job

Author's Response: Thanks =D

Reviewer: jandl
Date: 11/07/06 21:24
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

good job

Author's Response: =]

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 11/07/06 19:31
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

Can't Wiat For More


Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing =D

Reviewer: siriuslypadfoot62442
Date: 11/07/06 14:34
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

yay!! another chapter!! haha nice job on this one too. i can't freaking WAIT to see them at least become friends. i love how lily's acting around him. its so cute! and their dorm sounds amazing. good job, and update soon!

Author's Response: Oooo thanks so much!! Yup, they kinda get there in the 3rd chapter, which I've just submitted. Hehe, you've got me excited to write some more, thanks again!

Reviewer: 365 letters_ryan gosling 20
Date: 11/07/06 13:51
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

I did like...update soon!!! I want Lily/James action!!!! I love those two!!!!

Author's Response: Yuppers!! Glad to hear it. Yeah me too, I'm addicted. And since I can't live it right now I have to settle with reading and writing it =p

Reviewer: books 4 ever
Date: 11/07/06 13:19
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

I really liked this chapter. cant wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Thanks =D

Reviewer: orange_berry
Date: 11/07/06 12:48
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

Wow this is such a great story! Pleeeeeeeeease update soon!

Author's Response: Yippee!! No problem, the 3rd chapter has just been submitted! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: hallveig
Date: 11/07/06 11:59
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

Course I liked this:) update soon!

Author's Response: *smiles so wide it hurts* Thanks, I will, don't worry =)

Reviewer: hgfanatic
Date: 11/06/06 23:07
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

awww come on! lets get to the love part!! hahhaa my favorite!

Author's Response: Heheh, I'm working on it, I'm working on it. I don't want to rush it...but I'll tell you a secret, I've already written about 15000 words of love stuff, and now I have to fill in the time until then. Yup, my fav too!

Reviewer: 365 letters_ryan gosling 20
Date: 11/06/06 20:31
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

I liked this chapter...this seems like a good start to the story...Update!!

Author's Response: Thanks! And the next chapter just needs to be validated, then I can submit the 3rd. =D

Reviewer: siriuslypadfoot62442
Date: 11/05/06 8:04
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

Wow!!!! This story is extreamly good!! Only the first chapter and you already have me hooked! I don't think you should change anything. I really can't wait to see future chapters! good job!

Author's Response: Hey thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Ah well, that was my evil plan, after all... mwhahaha =)

Reviewer: Pride3
Date: 11/04/06 19:00
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

I liked it quite a bit, and I liked your characterization of Lily, but James seems almost a little too cocky. I know he's supposed to be, but I think it could be toned down a little. Sirius seems rather crude, but otherwise I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Cool, I'll work in it a little bit. James gets better, I promise. And as for Sirius...hehehe

Reviewer: jandl
Date: 11/04/06 18:46
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

nice

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 11/04/06 18:39
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

ooooooooooo GOOOOOOOOOd
can't wair for more
:D

Author's Response: Sweet! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: ginny_weasly123890
Date: 11/04/06 14:11
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

Pretty good.Keep up the work.Try reading Meant To Be.

Author's Response: Thanks.Yeah, I've read it, it's pretty cool

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 11/04/06 13:46
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

Quite good so far. Hurry up with the rest, please.

Author's Response: Thanks, I\ve submitted the next chapter and the 3rd ones almost done, hope you enjoy =P

Reviewer: Stefanie
Date: 11/04/06 13:28
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

Great first chapter, very amusing and witty!

Author's Response: Thanks! =D

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