Reviewer: pilosus_vis
Date: 11/29/06 16:36
Chapter: First Times

Dammit!!! Give me more! I hate this, the whole waiting process. I keep reading it and it's just awesome that you can write so well. I want to eat at Hogwarts now! Even with just that one line! Steaming eggs and fluffy pancakes. Good stuff.

Anyway, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! And yes, the waiting thing is annoying to the max...but i suppose its needed for the simple reason that if stories didnt have to get approved than you would have tons of stories that just arent...right. yeah...hehe i'd love to eat at Hogwarts too!

Reviewer: Mariahp
Date: 11/29/06 16:27
Chapter: First Times

I really love it! You're the fic's the first I've read where they but Lucius (sp?) and Narcissa in and it actually works! Update soon!

Author's Response: Hmm...everything is double posting it seems...read below vvvv

Reviewer: Mariahp
Date: 11/29/06 16:27
Chapter: First Times

I really love it! You're the fic's the first I've read where they but Lucius (sp?) and Narcissa in and it actually works! Update soon!

Author's Response: Awww, thanks =) Actually there is a really funny part with them later on, I hope everyone likes it..mwahaha

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 11/29/06 15:47
Chapter: First Times

very good chapter. a little tense but that last part was cute though. the y'all thing kinda drives me crazy though. i luv how amber keeps forgetting about her. next chap sounds exciting and the dance, well that's definately something to look forward to. ;D

Author's Response: tense? could you do me a favor and elaborate on that?? hehe the 'y'all' thing drives me crazy as well, but i think its funny. yes, the dance is going to rock!

Reviewer: harry45
Date: 11/29/06 15:31
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

it was a great story but it could use some more action but then again it is my opinion not yours.

Author's Response: Oh trust me, there is plenty of action to come. And readers opinions are always welcome and greatly appreciated!!

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 11/29/06 14:39
Chapter: First Times

Good Chapter
Can't Wait For More
:D

Author's Response: Thanks =)

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 11/29/06 11:26
Chapter: First Times

Really good!
Cont soon!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Loved it when James punched Lucius and Lupins comment about it!
Great writing!


Author's Response: Hehe, I like that part too...thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MyTeardrop
Date: 11/29/06 7:19
Chapter: First Times

Hello Dear
Really like your story! Can't wait to read more... Keep on writing and please update again soon! Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it! I'll keep the chapters coming as fast as possible =]

Reviewer: Phoenix156
Date: 11/29/06 0:51
Chapter: First Times

I'm enjoying your story... Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks =)

Reviewer: Lillian Potter
Date: 11/28/06 23:17
Chapter: First Times

Wonderful, just make sure you update soon!

Author's Response: I will, don't worry, the next chapter is already written and proofread =P

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 11/28/06 22:24
Chapter: First Times

Oooooo. Can't wait till the next update! Your story is very funny! I'm intrigued to see what'll happen next.
Oh, and you mentioned that you were having some chapter problems. I'm sorry! May I recomment a beta? After the first chapter of my J/L story, The Tenacity of Love, got rejected I went to PI betas and got myself a beta. There are also plenty of authors willing to beta stories, myself included.
Again, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks, I like to laugh, so I thought I woud add some humor to the romance. Yeah I was, and thanks for the idea to get a beta, I might just do that! =)

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 11/28/06 22:17
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

Another great chapter!!! I loved the part with the mirror, it was inspired.

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks =]

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 11/28/06 22:14
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

Good beginning. I like how you portray everyone. Quick note: I think you meant Why Can't I Breathe, not Why Can't I Breath for the chapter title. The James-is-head-boy is, admittedly, used a lot, but you've managed to keep it entertaining, so kudos!

Author's Response: Yup, you're totally right. I figured that out after i posted it, I was going to include a note..but i think i forgot =) Thanks, I do try.

Reviewer: amanda1212
Date: 11/28/06 19:34
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

I love the way you write these characters. The mirror scene was histerical. I cant wait to see how you have Lily loosen up to him. It definatley is good drawing it out more, rather then just jumping into the relashionship. Great job

Author's Response: Thanks! And there are some more mirrors later, but of a slightly different time...mwahahaha! =) Hope you keep reading and reviewing, I love feedback and advice!

Reviewer: pilosus_vis
Date: 11/23/06 1:19
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

Awesome, just fricken awesome! Man, James is a lucky man! I love how it is just perfectly set up and it gets you on your toes and ready for it. And it's good nothing has happened yet; good developement and... well just good writing in general. Just make them to validate the next one already!!!

Author's Response: Yes, I didnt want to make anything happen to quickly because then the rest would have been makeout scenes in hidden corridors..not that thats a bad thing....but yeah. it will pick up a little bit in the coming chapters, yippee!! i wish i could make them go faster...but i cant =( sadness....luckily the 4 chapter is already written and proofread, so after 3 gets validated 4 will get submitted pronto!

Reviewer: pilosus_vis
Date: 11/23/06 1:14
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

Well, all I have to say is "Mmmmm mmmm good!" Well, I guess not ALL I have to say. I think you depict everyone so well! Like perect. James is cocky, yes, but he's supposed to be. And the way you describe the emotions is just awesome. They're real. Anyway, good job, keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much =)

Reviewer: kiboshical
Date: 11/14/06 4:42
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

hi! I think this is one of the best stories i've read concerning james and lily. it seems to capture their individual personalities (as i imagine them) in a rather realistic way. many fics jump strainght to the first kiss and then head full on into romantic descriptions instead of creating their characters. while the descriptive sexual encounters are very important (i can't wait to see how you handle these) i think you have to prove that these two really belong together by clearly and carefully choosing and defining the moment they admit their feelings. Perhaps an event of some kind, an attack or just a really nice conversation...i can't wait to see what you do. Then you can dig your nails into the romance. Keep it coming I say!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks you, thank you, thank you!! This is one of the best reviews, I LOVE in-depth feedback almost as much as I love writing about Lily and James. oh and trust me, I have the perfect situation for these two..mwahahaha!! =D It sure will be coming, just as soon as the people hurry up and validate my most recent chapter.

Reviewer: HPfanatic92
Date: 11/13/06 16:00
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

I love this story!!!! Please write the rest soon!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! *glows* I'm working on it, I promise =)

Reviewer: fire_cookie
Date: 11/12/06 19:46
Chapter: Cackling Dingbats

I really like your writing style; I can't wait to find out what happens next =)

Author's Response: Thanks =) once the next chapter gets validated (its taking for frickin ever!) the story really picks up!

Reviewer: HPfanatic92
Date: 11/10/06 21:43
Chapter: Why Can't I Breathe?

I love this story. It's the first one in my favorites. CANNOT wait for more!!!!!

Author's Response: Aww thanks. Glad you like it so far! =D

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