Reviewer: Khrys
Date: 11/17/06 12:18
Chapter: Chapter 2-Secrets Revealed

Another marvelous chapter. I love the insight into both Aurora and a grown-up Neville that you bring to life more and more. I can't wait to see what happens with Professor McG. I can't wait to see more.

Author's Response: Thank you! You need to have more credit though, you put up with my craziness with patience and support. I'd be lost without you as my Beta and friend! ~Kim

Reviewer: Andrea Elizabeth
Date: 11/17/06 11:36
Chapter: Chapter 2-Secrets Revealed

Lovely, absolutely lovely. I was a bit worried there at the begining with George acting all hollow. But he seems to have recovered. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I always thought George would be severly affected if anything happened to Fred. I didn't have the heart to kill him off, the twins are too much fun to have around! At least for now. I plan to submit the next chapter very soon. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Khrys
Date: 11/13/06 10:13
Chapter: Chapter 1 - So Many Questions

What a great beginning. This really made the cliff hanger make sense. You did such a good job bringing Aurora to life in this chapter, giving her depth and personality. Kudos!

Author's Response: Thank you for not letting me give up! I really appreciate your advice and support. Thank you!!! ~Kim

Reviewer: PotionsPrincess
Date: 11/11/06 21:16
Chapter: Prologue

Hey, i got your e-mail and i was very flatered. I dont think i am going to post the rest of the story, mugglenet is making me mad and it isnt worth the hassle anymore. However, you are a loyal fan and i cant leave you hanging so tell me you e-mail address and i will send you the full story and the sequal when it is finished. (that goes for anyone who really wants to find out what happens)

Author's Response: Sorry to hear you're having problems. I sent you an email with my email address. Thank you for thinking of me! ~Kim

Reviewer: Andrea Elizabeth
Date: 11/11/06 13:58
Chapter: Chapter 1 - So Many Questions

OH no!!!!!!!!! :(

Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffie! I plan to submit the next chapter as soon as I get home from work today. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Andrea Elizabeth
Date: 11/11/06 13:29
Chapter: Prologue

Oh, who's the mysterious boy???

Author's Response: It will become clear soon. I promise. The prologue didn't go quite the way I wanted it to, but your question will be answered soon. If not chapter one, definately chapter two. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 11/06/06 19:08
Chapter: Prologue

that really made no sense. please submit the next chapter so I can figure out what the heck you're talking about. a cliffie is no good if it comes at the expense of the reader understanding what has already been written.

Author's Response: I'm sorry that you felt it made no sense. This was not how I originally had this chapter, but after the recommendation of a mod and a severe rewrite, this is what resulted. The next chapter will be the start of the story and make more sense. I hope you will give it a chance.

Reviewer: Khrys
Date: 11/06/06 9:44
Chapter: Prologue

Again, I missed being the first reviewer. How does this happen? I love your story. You bring such life and energy to Aurora and I can't wait to read more and more!

Author's Response: Thank you my fabulous Beta and friend!!! I would never have found the courage to post without you. Thank you! Feel better and I promise you'll get to read more! ~Kim

Reviewer: Adrastos
Date: 11/06/06 5:52
Chapter: Prologue

Dear Kim, it's so good to see this story back in action! It still show's much potential and Iím very much looking forward to the first chapter.
Just one thing: You might want to hit 'enter' once or twice before the first sentence of your fic. You know, so it wonít stick to the Authorís Notes. Apart from that, nothing to critique, so write on!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I didn't know about that little tidbit with the enter, I will do that next time. I plan to submit chapter one today. Thank you for your help. ~Kim

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Research and Development by Northumbrian 3rd-5th Years
The Mirrorphone, the latest advance in Wizarding communications. Now, of course...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 2 by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 1st-2nd Years
The Weird Sisters are back for an encore. Ten more tracks from your MNFF authors.
on this side of heaven by Nagini Riddle 1st-2nd Years
Ariana Dumbledore is struck by a stray curse, and she suddenly finds herself...
FEATURED
Oread, Walking by Seren
Cedric was just as odd as Hermione, because he liked to walk. Cedric/Hermione
The Effect of Gamma Rays on Two Terrifically Trapped Gryffindors. by Fenixaze 3rd-5th Years
From the "Stuck where for the weekend?" Challenge on Portkey.org ... Our two...
Drunk on Him by armagod679 Professors
For me, he was an obsession, a burning obsession, one that I could never let...
A Broken Hallelujah by epiphany212 Professors
You have always loved the chase. The pursuit of Quaffles and dragons have carried...
In the Hufflepuff Way by 1000timesingoldenink 3rd-5th Years
Did anybody really appreciate Hannah's mum?Because Mrs. Abbott was a heroine...
And Now... by Oregonian 3rd-5th Years
Moments after the death of Voldemort, Harry gazes at the corpse of the Dark...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 1 by minnabird 1st-2nd Years
Welcome back to another rousing round of rambunctious rock!However, a new act...
CATEGORIES