Reviewer: Milliebaby123
Date: 03/14/08 1:59
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

wow, really good 4 ur 1st go!!!
i really liked it, can't wait 4 another chapter!!! keep witing, ur doing really well.

Reviewer: Jaenella
Date: 08/29/07 3:39
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

This is really good. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Krystal
Date: 01/28/07 4:39
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

o-my-god... this is fantastic!
Your use of figurative language is very good, i hope you'll be writting more soon, i'm already gripped!!

Reviewer: Nilary
Date: 12/25/06 0:55
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

wow....That is the best first chapter ive read in a long time! i cant wait for the rest!!!

Reviewer: gothica
Date: 12/16/06 14:05
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

OMGOMGOMG please finsh it and send it 2 me its so good

Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 12/07/06 19:56
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

But But But... Where;s the end?
It was really good, but I don't like cliff hangers. (sorry). BUt it was a great chapter! Update really, really, soon!

Reviewer: little girl weeping
Date: 12/04/06 20:47
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

I really like your style of writing. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
Nice work.

Reviewer: SnufflesRox
Date: 12/02/06 18:06
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

please please please please!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Please what? I'm sure I'd be happy to oblige, I just need the terms of your request.

Reviewer: Tell_no_lies
Date: 11/25/06 17:37
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

this is so cute!!!!!! plz keep writing

Reviewer: Nauf_dude
Date: 11/23/06 18:10
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

awesome dude! i honestly can't wait for the next chapie... i loved it when you had draco cry i truely adore when people make him cry and hopefully making hermione help him ar just be sround him! yeah i know i love the fluffy stuff... well PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: gymnasticsluver1
Date: 11/19/06 1:05
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

oooh..... the suspense.
please update!!! poor baby...

Reviewer: Mielikki
Date: 11/11/06 23:53
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

Hey!! I really enjoyed this chapter. You dont give too much away, yet develop the story nicely and the suspense is really believable. Keep em coming!!

Reviewer: MistWolf Pup
Date: 11/05/06 18:42
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

One thing to say...BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL!I think i made my point

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! You're so sweet to say that!

Reviewer: Pepsi Gurl
Date: 11/03/06 19:24
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

I LIKE...
ummm thats about it...
keep it up... can't wait for the next one

Author's Response: Thank you! I definitely plan on "keeping it up," and hope to get the next chapter to you soon.

Reviewer: AlasEarwax
Date: 11/02/06 23:06
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

Good first chapter! I like the descriptions and how you aren't rushing the story. Will Hermoine be in contact with Ron or Harry? I'm sure theyd be interested to know what's going on with Malfoy.
Good luck with your series! :o)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hermione will correspond with the boys, exactly as specified {and maybe a little more} in GoF. You know what's funny? I just wrote that bit into the Chapter II before reading your review. Haha.

Reviewer: BuffyXO
Date: 11/02/06 4:59
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

What an intriguing beginning! For your first work of fan fiction, it is evident that you excell at decriptions and story pacing. I cannot wait to read more, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I actually really suck at both of those, and so worked extra extra hard to make them presentable. I am so happy that my work paid off! I hope to get you the next chapter soon!

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 11/02/06 0:11
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

Hmm... Intriguing chapter, I'd certainly like to see more! Excellent cliffhanger there. Brava!

~Juliet

Author's Response: I can promise you, this is definitely not the end! And I am a sucker for cliffhangers. A little risky for a first chapter, but so much fun. Thanks for r/r-ing!

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 11/01/06 14:32
Chapter: Chapter I: Because It's There

I was actually reading another fic when I happened to glance at the 'recently updated' thingy....*topples off chair and squees*

I love this chapter more and more everytime I read it...the imagery is fantastic! :D

*waits for next chapter* :p

~Suzie

Author's Response: You know you'll see the next chapter first. LOL. Thanks for reading it. Again.

Author's Response: Oh no! I think that I totally forgot to mention you.............. SORRYSORRYSORRYSORRY. Is there anyway I can change that?

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
M.I.T.: Entente Cordial by Northumbrian 6th-7th Years
A strange and seemingly inexplicable death in London's West End brings an unlikely...
A Squib's Journey by ntoforhp 6th-7th Years
Jeffery Potter always had sensed he was somehow different from his playmates...
Out of the Blue by Secret Marauder 90 1st-2nd Years
This story weaves the tale of James and Lily from the day they met right up...
FEATURED
Five Christmases by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
It took four Christmases for Andromeda Black and Ted Tonks to get together...
Coming Alive by The owl 6th-7th Years
Leanne Gamp hadn't wanted to be at that party, even though it was Christmas...
Graves by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
In December of 1997, Harry visits his parents' graves in Godric's Hollow and...
CATEGORIES