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Name: Milliebaby123 (Signed) · Date: 03/14/08 1:59 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
wow, really good 4 ur 1st go!!!
i really liked it, can't wait 4 another chapter!!! keep witing, ur doing really well.


Name: Jaenella (Signed) · Date: 08/29/07 3:39 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
This is really good. Looking forward to the next chapter.


Name: Krystal (Signed) · Date: 01/28/07 4:39 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
o-my-god... this is fantastic!
Your use of figurative language is very good, i hope you'll be writting more soon, i'm already gripped!!


Name: Nilary (Signed) · Date: 12/25/06 0:55 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
wow....That is the best first chapter ive read in a long time! i cant wait for the rest!!!


Name: gothica (Signed) · Date: 12/16/06 14:05 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
OMGOMGOMG please finsh it and send it 2 me its so good


Name: phoenix_fille (Signed) · Date: 12/07/06 19:56 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
But But But... Where;s the end?
It was really good, but I don't like cliff hangers. (sorry). BUt it was a great chapter! Update really, really, soon!


Name: little girl weeping (Signed) · Date: 12/04/06 20:47 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
I really like your style of writing. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
Nice work.


Name: SnufflesRox (Signed) · Date: 12/02/06 18:06 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
please please please please!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Please what? I'm sure I'd be happy to oblige, I just need the terms of your request.


Name: Tell_no_lies (Signed) · Date: 11/25/06 17:37 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
this is so cute!!!!!! plz keep writing


Name: Nauf_dude (Signed) · Date: 11/23/06 18:10 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
awesome dude! i honestly can't wait for the next chapie... i loved it when you had draco cry i truely adore when people make him cry and hopefully making hermione help him ar just be sround him! yeah i know i love the fluffy stuff... well PLEASE UPDATE SOON!


Name: gymnasticsluver1 (Signed) · Date: 11/19/06 1:05 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
oooh..... the suspense.
please update!!! poor baby...


Name: Mielikki (Signed) · Date: 11/11/06 23:53 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
Hey!! I really enjoyed this chapter. You dont give too much away, yet develop the story nicely and the suspense is really believable. Keep em coming!!


Name: MistWolf Pup (Signed) · Date: 11/05/06 18:42 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
One thing to say...BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL!I think i made my point

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! You're so sweet to say that!


Name: Pepsi Gurl (Signed) · Date: 11/03/06 19:24 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
I LIKE...
ummm thats about it...
keep it up... can't wait for the next one

Author's Response: Thank you! I definitely plan on "keeping it up," and hope to get the next chapter to you soon.


Name: AlasEarwax (Signed) · Date: 11/02/06 23:06 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
Good first chapter! I like the descriptions and how you aren't rushing the story. Will Hermoine be in contact with Ron or Harry? I'm sure theyd be interested to know what's going on with Malfoy.
Good luck with your series! :o)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hermione will correspond with the boys, exactly as specified {and maybe a little more} in GoF. You know what's funny? I just wrote that bit into the Chapter II before reading your review. Haha.


Name: BuffyXO (Signed) · Date: 11/02/06 4:59 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
What an intriguing beginning! For your first work of fan fiction, it is evident that you excell at decriptions and story pacing. I cannot wait to read more, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I actually really suck at both of those, and so worked extra extra hard to make them presentable. I am so happy that my work paid off! I hope to get you the next chapter soon!


Name: EtherealElation (Signed) · Date: 11/02/06 0:11 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
Hmm... Intriguing chapter, I'd certainly like to see more! Excellent cliffhanger there. Brava!

~Juliet

Author's Response: I can promise you, this is definitely not the end! And I am a sucker for cliffhangers. A little risky for a first chapter, but so much fun. Thanks for r/r-ing!


Name: crazy_purple_hp_freak (Signed) · Date: 11/01/06 14:32 · For: Chapter I: Because It's There
I was actually reading another fic when I happened to glance at the 'recently updated' thingy....*topples off chair and squees*

I love this chapter more and more everytime I read it...the imagery is fantastic! :D

*waits for next chapter* :p

~Suzie

Author's Response: You know you'll see the next chapter first. LOL. Thanks for reading it. Again.

Author's Response: Oh no! I think that I totally forgot to mention you.............. SORRYSORRYSORRYSORRY. Is there anyway I can change that?


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