Loved it! We think you should write more humor romance!
o and btw i forgot the something in the first post
what dean though was hilarious i was dying with laughter and it seems like something ron would do so jst so you know im not going to be able to look at him the same ever again
very cute and i liked how hermione didn't beleive him
cute and fluffy,im glad ron finally showed his feelings, FLUFFY! keep up the good work!
That's really funny! : D
But I'm confused, I don't know what Dean meant. I'm so...so... UNINFORMED! help
You know tips on how to write love letters never really work, especially if the person writing them isn't compeltely trustworthy. fantastic job.
Um i dont see the connection between the title and the end of the story.
Possibly the greatest one I've ever read.
Haha! I absolutely LOVED it! I havn't read a good hermione/ron one shot like that in a while. I liked how they were both kept in character and how you didn't describe more than you needed to.
Awesome!!! So sweet and yet hilarious!
Jeeeez Ron is so gross. Haha, chocolate.
Dean is a pervert.
Romeo wasn't as clever as we thought, or was he?
This was veryvery funny.
Sweet!! That was a fantastic story!! Finally, a Ron/Hermione shipper, not a draco/hermione (EEEWWWWWW!!!)!!! Shame on Ron for stealing.......but I guess he would have been cheated out of 10 sicles if he had bought it!!(go figure! :D)Feel any more stories comin' up *wink wink * ;D
With All Due Respect,
p.s. do you have a dime I could borrow?
p.s.s. thank you for the Very Frivilous Dialouge
this is the best one shot i've read in a while! good job. the best part is definitely the fact that it was written by romeo ^^ it's so random!
thats really good:) a good ending and you didn't try to take it too far. A job well done:)
Um, wouldn't have Hermione known it was Ron the whole time because she helped him pick out the paper and ink? And why was she so stubborn?
Author's Response: She probably thought it might have been Ron but she would'nt have known for sure. Lol, i didn't realise she was so stubborn...sorry about that.
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD. BUT SHE TASTED LIKE CHOCOLATE? EWWW. BRUSH UR TEETH GALLY! LOL. JK JK JK JK JK JK
Author's Response: lol, I just had to add that as it's become a bit of a cliche.
So, so funny and sweet! Fantastic story. The ending was just so cute. You did a great job keeping them both in character, in a lot of Ron/Hermione stories both end up way OOC, but here they sounded just like in the books. Great job! Keep writing, this is great!
Who ever thought of Ron Weasley writing a poem? Incidentally, I always wondered if Hermione tasted like chocolate...
This is really cute... I wish I could read Ron's sonnet, though. My favourite part is the part with Dean-- that made me chortle.
Your characterisation of Ron is nice, very adorable and... Ron-ish.