Reviewer: lozberry
Date: 02/01/08 16:22
Chapter: House of Shadow

I loved this story! It made me laugh and cry. The way the characters came to life was brilliant and everything seemed quite believable, I almost forgot it was a fanfic!

Author's Response: I love you for that! Now if I can just get you to read my other stories.... ^_~

Reviewer: ILuvSirius01
Date: 12/02/07 23:52
Chapter: House of Shadow

Oh so you HAVE been there? And you have a profile? Whats your Username? I read your other Remus/Tonks stories too, very awesome. Anywho, happy that you liked the stuff. =)

Author's Response: I'm Kerichi here, there, and everywhere! *hums Beatles song* :D Thank you again!

Reviewer: ILuvSirius01
Date: 11/30/07 22:29
Chapter: Family of Shadow

I love how you make Harry so clueless, I never thought of how much we might miss in only Harry's POV, I was sorta wondering how u were going to fit their relationship into this. Anyway, have you ever been to deviantart.com? It's got a lot of HP art that's really cool, and if you haven't been there I wonder if u might like it. One Artist that's really good is Makani, http://makani.deviantart.com/ she specofoes on Slytherins, but her stuff is just very cool, she's a great artist and has some Remus/Tonks, and uh, she sometimes depicts Snape as 'sexy' her words not mine. A few others, I'm sorta picking out ones that do Remus/Tonks because you like that couple are Trustahope http://trustahope.deviantart.com/, she likes Harry/Ginny (me too!) so when u first get to her page hopefully u won't get turned off because hers are very good, and the last one I'll tell you about is Hito76, http://hito76.deviantart.com/. SHe has some spectacular Remus/Tonks in her gallery that I think you'd really enjoy, so please check it out, y'know if you want. And then in the browse thingy you can type in 'Tonks and Remus' and tons of pics will come up. Hopefully I didn't bore you w/ this comment, but I kept thinking you'd really like it so yeah . . . Great chapter!

-Taylor

Author's Response: I haven't been to that site for a long time (I have a Jack/Sally Nightmare Before Christmas story posted on it. :D) but I'll definitely go take a look. I agree with Makani. ^_~

Reviewer: ILuvSirius01
Date: 11/30/07 19:05
Chapter: Shadow Dance

Oh yeah, I kno! I thought it was a little creepy, cus I was like they're COUSINS! But they're all cousins I guess. Good chapter and I really like this series! Remus sounds hot. =D

Author's Response: Remus is hot, and yeah, second, third, whatever cousins do hook up in the wizarding world, but for Harry to think Tonks in love with Sirius was a bit creepy. He deserves a bit of mind freak from time to time about it! :D

Reviewer: hermioneg415190
Date: 11/30/07 15:41
Chapter: Moon Shadow

in chapter 17 what was the four letter h word

Author's Response: If that's the chapter I think it is, where Sirius is playing the concerned cousin worrying she's too friendly with a werewolf, it rhymes with 'bump'.

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 10/21/07 20:35
Chapter: Veiled Shadow

i soooo cried when sirius died, you aren't all alone!!

Author's Response: I shouldn't be glad when someone cries, but I can't help it. Thank you!

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 10/21/07 13:51
Chapter: Celebration and Shadow

ha, I've read that Andy/Ted story! I was going through an obsessional phase and read every one I could find. Yours was really one of the only satisfying ones. XD

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I felt so bad for Andromeda after DH. Boo, Jo, but yay! love!

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 10/21/07 0:04
Chapter: Facing the Shadow

AHH!! TOO CUTE! IT BURNS!! I LOVE IT!!!

Author's Response: I heart you for loving it! *hugs*

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 10/20/07 0:01
Chapter: Half Shadow

I audibly said JESUS! when reading this!! That was the best ending EVER!!!!!!!! If I could rate you like in hpfanfiction I would give that a 20 our of 10 for the element of surprise!!

Author's Response: *grins so widely cheeks hurt* Thank you so much!!!!! You made my day! ^_^

Reviewer: Mrs Spike
Date: 10/05/07 9:41
Chapter: Shadow Play

Frist of all, I love this series. I haven't stopped to review only because I'm so entralled that I don't want to stop readding long enough! Second, I LOVE the fact that you used Dragostea Din Tei in the fic! And impressed that you used the right name, most people just call it Ma Ya Hi or the numa numa song. Is it really Romanian, I always thought it was Portugese?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! It's really Romanian! Ozone is the band. They have a English version that isn't as good, but still fab. Both are on youtube! :D

Reviewer: water sprite
Date: 09/24/07 19:13
Chapter: House of Shadow

Kerichi, i have missed out on an absolute stack of chappies (as I'm in my last year of school...blah), I'm sure you will be gratified to know that you are leading away from my studies like the Pied Piper so i can catch up!Yay, although i may be able to fit in a little study...maybe. Luv!
ps. although the amount of Remus/Tonks authors has multiplied 10 fold (sheep!) you are still #1!

Author's Response: I heart you for saying that! Not that other authors aren't fab, but it makes my day that you think I'm special. *hugs*

Reviewer: tonksy
Date: 09/06/07 20:54
Chapter: Realms of Shadow

I really enjoyed this story. Scrimgeour having Tonks play Lola was actually quite fantastic as she is the best Metamorphagus. I liked the way she got a friend in "Q" as well. And the way she kind of begged Jerry to remain as her Auror partner...you could tell there was something almost too emotional for her to handle there. Brilliant story.

Author's Response: Thank you! Tonks got to be a little old lady in canon, but I think Lola was a lot more fun to play! ;) I'm so glad that you like the way she makes friends and has a big heart. When Ron said she barely knew Sirius in HBP, I thought 'Neither did Harry, but since when do you have to know somebody forever to care about them deeply?' Ron really does have the emotional range of a teaspoon sometimes! :D

Reviewer: findmeremus
Date: 08/26/07 1:11
Chapter: Realms of Shadow

This was one of the sweetest stories ive read!Thank you for great read.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm on the HBP story, Waiting for the Moon so if you get the chance to read on, I'd be thrilled!

Reviewer: Karalyn
Date: 08/21/07 20:24
Chapter: Realms of Shadow

I have been reading your stories about Lupin and Tonks over the past few days, and I can no longer resist leaving a lengthy review to tell you how much I have enjoyed them.

First of all, your plots are entertaining and engaging. It’s been a long time since I’ve stayed up late so that I can keep reading a fanfiction (heck, it’s been a long time – DH being the exception – since I’ve stayed up late to read anything!) I like that you have Lupin and Tonks meeting before the events of OotP, and you’ve done a great job of setting up their relationship.

Your development of canon characters is excellent and very realistic and believable. I quite enjoyed Hestia’s character especially, and love how the relationship between her and Tonks has changed. I really love the way you work with the canon characters and the way they interact with each other; I especially love reading the interactions between Tonks and Scrimgeour/Kingsley/Arthur/Ginny.

The development of your original characters is also superb. I very rarely find myself becoming attached to original characters, and often skip over the parts of stories that are contain a lot of them. Yours, however, are more than just bearable – they are endearing. I find myself looking forward to their exploits almost as much as I look forward to reading about the cannon characters, especially when it comes to Julia, Tom, Jerry, Morty and Evan (the first four because they’re just awesome, and Evan because I love trying to guess what he’s going to do next).

In addition to everything else, I enjoy the way you work mentions of literature and music into your stories. They often have me laughing out loud. The names of Stern and Crantz, in particular, make me smile every time.

To comment on this story specifically, I think that you handled the death of Sirius very well. Tonks’s dream after his death was quite heart wrenching. I also particularly enjoyed reading about Scrimgeour’s plots to become the next Minister.

To wrap it all up, this story (as well as the ones before it) is beautifully developed and beautifully written. Keep it up! I’m off to read the rest of your work ;)

Author's Response: I'd print out your review and make family and friends read it, except they're philistines not interested in Harry Potter, so they wouldn't 'get' how awesome it is!

Thank you!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 07/14/07 21:48
Chapter: Veiled Shadow

Sirius? *walks toward veil* Sirius, we need you, please don't go. *falls on knees* please...come back...we need you... *bursts into tears*

It's like losing him again, and seeing the movie was heartbreaking enough, now he's gone, forever, and not just in books and movies, but fanfiction, too! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the tears! I hate to cry alone. There's not enough chocolate in the world to make Sirius' loss less depressing. :(

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 07/14/07 21:05
Chapter: Shadow of Christmas

By five o'clock, when I had to return to my flat to get ready to accompany Scrimgeour to a Ministry Christmas function, I was hacked off. When Remus walked me to the front door, I muttered, "It's a good thing for Harry that I have to leave, or I'd march up there and pull him downstairs by his earlobe."

Someone had better watch his back! *coughDancough* 10/10

Author's Response: Dan needs his ears boxed for cutting his hair so darn short! Harry has spiky, unruly hair. Green eyes, too, grrrr.... :D

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/12/07 14:37
Chapter: Shadow of a Doubt

I had to go watch it after yo umentioned it. I am going to be mean and give it a Troll. It wasn't very well put together at all. Anyway, the chapter was good. It feels like if everyone would be a little nicer to Kreacher then he wouldn't be as bad s he is now.

Author's Response: I think Kreacher was warped by Walburga and totally brainwashed into his wizard supremacy beliefs, so even if everyone had bent over backwards to be nice, the most that would have done is give him a twinge of guilt for betraying his master. Sigh.

Reviewer: Lostlovegoods
Date: 07/10/07 11:46
Chapter: Realms of Shadow

oh my goodness. you are an absolutley amazing writer! :) keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you! The next story has the first chapter posted, so whenever you get a chance to read...hint, hint, lol. :D

Reviewer: tonksinger
Date: 07/09/07 3:53
Chapter: Realms of Shadow

I loved it! I read the entire thing in one night! I've always loved Lupin, and you really made him ...er... come alive. Very sexy. I am really looking forward to more.

Author's Response: The adults in the books are seen through Harry's eyes, so Remus and Tonks holding hands was probably it for 'seeing' their romance, so fan fiction writers have a lot of room to write in. Lucky, lucky me, lol, especially with you reading this all in one night and looking forward to more! :D

Wish Upon a Dog Star is the one shot that transistions between OotP and HBP, and the next story, Waiting for the Moon posted its first chapter! :)

Reviewer: LiaWitch20
Date: 06/30/07 20:17
Chapter: Realms of Shadow

Mmmm Internet for Free, that would be possible in 2 months when I got in my new university ^^ There’s no another way to the blessed Free internet, hehe. But that wont stop me to say (better write, hehe) how wonderful my fav fanfic ended. It left me with a sense of expectation and suspense. Like reading: Difficult times lie ahead, Nymph, hehe
I cannot wait for the next one!!! ^^



Author's Response: Separated from Remus, stuck in twee Hogsmeade, thrust into unwilling proximity with nature and dealing with Snape and Kreacher, life won't be dull for Tonks, that's for sure! :D

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