Reviewer: goGinny_84
Date: 04/15/07 19:34
Chapter: Payback

Aww, I love this! I think you might have gotten a few of the characters in the wrong years, but despite that, this is really good!

Author's Response: Really? Which characters? Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: zonkoslover
Date: 03/31/07 22:33
Chapter: You Need to Know

that was pretty koool! i wonder wat patrick wanted to talk to marietta about........ but plz update soon!

Author's Response: You're in luck! It's the day after you reviewed and I am posting my new chapter!

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 12/02/06 23:08
Chapter: Bubotuber Pus

Aw, poor Eloise! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: I know, I feel so sorry for her. I just have to hate Ron when I write it, even though I actually think he's awesome.

Reviewer: _Dumbledores Girl_
Date: 12/02/06 16:46
Chapter: Bubotuber Pus

ohhh... I really this story! it kinda makes Ron out to be an insensitive git, but I guess he IS, but ya gotta love that hair! I feel so bad for Eloise, it puts the "butober puss" comment in a whole new light for me, although, didn't they have Herbology w/ the slytherins, so why would eloise be there? unless she's a slytherin... or a griffindor! that would be a big plot twist! ok... I'm rambling now.. but great fic so far!

Author's Response: Thanks! Eloise is a Hufflepuff, and yes, the Gryffindors do have Herbology with the Hufflepuffs, I Lexiconned it.

Reviewer: redhead_weasley08
Date: 12/02/06 16:16
Chapter: A Remembrance

Wow... this is good stuff! Really enjoyed it... I feel sorry for Eloise =(

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: SpottedOwl
Date: 12/02/06 15:37
Chapter: A Remembrance

very good AND original. you've touched on a topic most writers avoid. Marietta seems like an amazing person to stick with Eloise even though Marietta is obviously so popular. a little flat, though. 9/10.

Author's Response: Thanks soo much for the honest criticism. I came up with the idea for this story when I had a case of writer's block and couldn't think of anything to write about, so I just thought, Hey! Nobody ever talks about Eloise that much, that'd be something I could kind of take license with, so.. Okay, I'm rambling.

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 10/31/06 17:54
Chapter: A Remembrance

Is it a coincidence that Marietta has the same first name as Marietta Edgecombe, the girl who betrayed the D.A.?

In any case, this is good, and makes the reader really like Eloise. I can definitely sympathise with Eloise-- although I don't have an acne problem, whenever I get zits, my younger brother and sister always mock me to no end.

I like the part about her having a thing for Ron Weasley, too.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Marietta's name is a coincidence, and until I reread the chapter, I didn't notice, so I went back and gave her a last name.

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